fake geek boy. actual trash jesus. everything i touch turns gross.
as of right now i'm only adding friends that i know in the meatspace? i am sorry. i am 900% worse at communicating than you would expect. i don't even reply to texts from my own mother.
i'm also just reviewing things i like, because bad reviews make people sad and i am a squishy marshmallow.
This fic is probably going to squick a lot of people out.
I stumbled across part 3 today then quickly backtracked and read all three.
taylorpotato favors daddy kink, but this series really delves into age play. Stiles regresses to such an extent that he almost dissociates. He wears pajamas, becomes mostly non-verbal, watches cartoons and certain things (heartbreaking things) sometimes trigger his regressions.
He and Peter are still sexual even during his regressions but it takes on a different tone. They still play around with the "adult" version of daddy kink and all of Stiles' associated kinks that usually accompany it-humiliation, dirty talk, bottoming, needing. *growls*
Of the series, part 2 was the most fascinating to me. Part 3 introduces some troubling behaviors out of Stiles that could shape up into some punishment. *cheesy grin* <~~~possibly bouncing a little, tiny bit.
As much as I love daddy kink and Taylorpotato, this Lana Del Ray Song series appears to be mostly a miss for me. There are plenty hot scenes, but though in general I quite enjoy the daddy dom/little girl or boy dynamics, here it's taken a step beyond what still turns me on. I like the RPG and the dirty talk, but not so much the whiny-ass 'baby space', Little and soother stuff (though the latter hasn't made an appearance in this fic.. yet!). So yeah, it's totally a personal dislike, but Little Stiles is getting on my nerves here.
So, taylorpotato might be some sorta evil genius when it comes to breaking down these characters and then piecing them back together. Even better, they don't always know what it means when that happens.
Stiles isn't sure whether he won, because he now has Peter's complete attention, or if he lost because of the lows he sunk to in order to get it. That's kinda how it always is with Peter. Power struggles and Pyrrhic victory.
Daddy kink isn't my thing but I can still enjoy a story with it as one of the components. This is an example. Such an interesting exploration of a relationship in which these roles are a part of who they are. Not experimenting, just trying to navigate life.
The dialogue is spot on, as usual. This one was more Stiles than Peter but maybe it will even out in the next installment.
I'm going to give this series five stars. No one writes kink like this author--no one. This is no-holds-barred daddy kink, and it's crazy, filthy, sometimes disturbing stuff, but it's also exploratory and insightful and ultimately deeply respectful of the characters' needs and experience. This is what erotic writing should be, what it can be at its best.
Not really into age play, but the author hit the nail on the head with this one. Yes, Stiles get into 'little' headspace, but he doesn't baby talk so I was able to stick with it. The transition from 'playing around for attention' to real concern that his Daddy was ignoring him / would one day lose interest was BEAUTIFULLY done. The 'not wanting to do adult things' while still in little mode was also a nice touch. I loved every single thing about this. Flawless in my opinion. Had to make a daddy/little shelf just for this.
This is seriously fucked up, and I mean that as the highest compliment.
Minor problems - age play / daddy kink is a tricky line to walk...some of the scenes came off as confusing or abusive because Stiles had regressed to an age where "grown-up things" like open-mouthed kissing were repellent. Dirty talk is hit-or-miss for me and here it was miss.
Those things aside, wonderful messed up relationship here.
Enter with caution - serious, potentially squicky age play.
As always, taylorpotato's narration of ambivalent emotional states (for both top and bottom) and the deliciously deliberate eroticizing of shame, longing, denial, emotional masochism, debasement, condescension and elaborate, non-brutish humiliation is simply top notch stuff. But it is especially powerful in this whole series, and the first installment is simply the best of them all.
Huh. So a few friends of mine really liked this story. I don't know anything about Teen Wolf so I probably am not getting as much out of this. I enjoyed this first story. The scene is sweet and sexy. The writing is well done. Easy to read, smooth and sexy. I'm a little aroused. Must read the next few to see if it does get dirtier.
Interesting Daddy-kink where Stiles almost goes into sub-space but it's like 'baby-space'. But he comes out of it in the second half and there's some sweet moments too.
I’m glad I read these backwards starting with part 4. I doubt I would have moved forward with the series if I started with part 1. It’s gotten much better.