A flawed writer takes on a supremely fascinating story.
The story of the mongol conquests is one of the most intriguing and beguiling in all of world history. So it is a small wonder that I swallowed this book in just a few days. It begins terrifically, painting the scene of the sacking of Baghdad, and all the horrors that went along with it. It also ends (kinda), with a conclusion chapter in which Mclynn discusses the various attitudes and takes there are on the Genghis and the mongols; from his impact on the rest of world history to how he should be viewed as a person.
In between these two bookends though, there are a lot of problems with this telling of the tale. Not that it is inocrrect, but that it is told in a way that decreases, rather than increases, our appreciation for this unique, horrifying, and amazing bloody tale.
For one, Mclynn gives the account of the raids and conquests and routes the mongols took to get there. All of them. Which in aggregate becomes minutea. "They took the route from the Kyber pass down to Khurasan and then doubled back and rode 500 miles to meet up with so and so and went on to such and such". It is amazing how much ground they covered and where they went and why, but how are we supposed to follow along with all this for hundreds of pages?
Hey Frank, you know what would have helped? MAPS. No one knows what to make of the route between one place in the desert of the Khwarezmian empire and some town that no longer exists if you don't show us.
Instead of recounting every time the mongols rode their horses, a better way of telling this tale is of painting the picture of some of the most important or impressive campaigns and conquests. It is doubly frustrating that the author is capable of this, which he shows in the introductory chapter.
I am no expert on the mongol horde but even I noticed some glaring omissions from this book. Like when the mongols come out of the caucasus mountains, there is a conglomerate of armies waiting for them. But he neglects to tell how they knew the mongols where going to be there. This, I know from the Hardcore History episodes has a definite answer, but if I had only read Mclynn's book on this subject, it would have remained a mystery. He also doesn't mention the Pope's amazing letter to the mongols, trying (and failing miserably) to explain christianity and convert the mongols. Instead we are bombared with more minutea of every raid on every city, which gets tedious since Mclynn seemingly loses interest in describing them. "After a ten-day siege, the town relented and asked for terms. The slaughter was complete". This, lightly paraphrased, is how Mclynn describes hundreds of instances of complete terror, mayhem, and military ingenuity.
He also has some obvious faults just as a writer. He loves to use french terms, just a little too much. I have some basic french so I understood most of it, but even I thought his overreliance on french phrases a tad ridiculous. There must be better ways of getting your thoughts across to an english-speaking audience.
He also repeatedly employs one of my pet peeves, using the term "quantum leap" to describe a big step forward. In actuality, a quantum leap is ridiculously, insanely small.
But my biggest critique of Mclynn's writing is that he doesn't want to paint the scene before our eyes. How did a mongol horde appearing before your town look like? What was the smell? For maybe the most frightening sights of the medieval period, he does a poor job of getting that across.
One thing I will say is he gives terrific accounts on the intrigues of the mongol higher-ups. who hated whom, who never forgot the slight from so-and-so.
All in all, this tale is too terrifying and horrific, and the figure of Genghis too brilliant and unique not to be fascinating, even when treated with such a poor understanding of what makes a good telling as this.