Key West’s sultry summer heat isn't for the faint of heart. But Michal Grabowski is running from a Pittsburgh cocaine dealer intent on killing him in a slow and painful manner, and Key West is the end of the road. Retired Marine Jesse McDermitt enjoys the summer heat and quiet solitude of his tiny island home in the back country. When Jesse discovers that Michal’s would-be killer is connected to recent murders in the Bahamas, he agrees to help the young man. Jesse doesn’t like murderers, smelly crack monsters or drug dealers running amok in his territory. Particularly when one of them was responsible for the destruction of his charter boat. Between a running gun battle with a group of cow hunters stretching from Key West Bight to the Everglades, a shotgun-toting Key West tarot card reader, a retired Jamaican mystic, and a rising body count, there’s little time for Jesse to just relax and watch the sun go down.
I'm a Veteran of the United States Marine Corps and now, a full time novelist. Between those careers, I've also worked as a deckhand, commercial fisherman, divemaster, taxi driver, construction manager, and truck driver. I live in the Sea Islands, near Beaufort, SC, with my wife and youngest daughter. We also have three grown children, five grand children, three dogs and a whole flock of parakeets. I grew up in Melbourne, FL and have also lived in the Florida Keys and Cozumel, MX.
Over half of this book is really about drug dealers and small time criminals. It’s always interesting to get in insight into the villains in a book, but in this case I think it was just too much. As for the rest of the story it was a bit chaotic, it starts with Jesses receiving a request from a friend of a friend to help a very low level criminal and his girlfriend. As in many other of these books a series of coincidences means this could lead to somebody Jesse wants to find. The action doesn’t really begin until the second half of the book and most of it comes about because Jesse still finds it impossible to think like a criminal. There are several occasions when a more ruthless character could have stopped the chaos before it happened. When it did happen it turns out the DHS is fairly incompetent. They couldn’t eliminate the main drug dealer even when they had snipers and trained agents with sub-machine guns.
This is an OK story and I quite enjoyed reading bits of it, but all the way through I kept thinking there is something missing and has been in several books in this series. I suspect its because Jesse fails in comparison to that other larger than life ex-serviceman character, Jack Reacher. To be fair they aren’t the same, Jack is a loner, drifter and has no family to worry about. Neither is he restricted by a government organisation that doesn’t seem to know what its role is. The problem is that many of the scenarios have many things in common but the difference is in the way they are resolved. Once involved Jack is proactive, he takes out threats before they can do damage and he doesn’t leave lose ends even though he has none of the resources backing up Jessie. As I have already said this isn’t a fair comparison, but every time I read part of the book where villains are not eliminate, where ‘super agents’ let down their guard, or plans are over elaborate, I can’t help feeling a little irritated.
We really don’t need a multi-page description of how Jesse and his friends raise vegetables and seafood in every book in this series. In the book where they first got the system set up and running was sufficient and even then, it was too long and detailed for my taste.
And we don’t need to be told 16 – yes, 16 – times in this book that Jesse put his boat up on plane. Assuming he said it that many times in each of the previous six books, that’s over a hundred times, all told. We get it, Wayne, WE GET IT! Now drop it! Ditto for the travelogues, Wayne. We don’t need to know every island, bridge, and channel Jesse goes past, under, or over.
The writing seems to have settled to a level aimed more at teens instead of adults. He tells us almost every time the history of any character who steps on stage. That’s fine for new characters but redundant for regulars. And here, as in earlier books, there are so many characters, it’s hard to keep them straight, especially with so many of them having the same first initial.
One more thing: Jesse didn’t save the day. Someone else did that. Readers like to have the main character carry the day. Remember that, Mr. Stinnett.
Still, these books are good enough that I’ll read the next one.
I've really enjoyed Wayne Stinnett's previous books in this series. However, I found it rather boring, too many characters, lacking in the suspense and action of his previous novels. It would be more exciting it there was more action, fewer pages, and less recapping of previous characters and incidences. Being this is book 7, I think I'll skip book 8.
A lowlife steals a brick of cocaine from a drug dealer, and takes the bus to The Keys. The drug dealer comes looking for him. Another lowlife steals his wallet. There's a bunch of Florida cowhunters in there, too.
It seemed a bit odd to me that Jesse needed a whole team to deal with just a couple of drug dealers.
Jesse continues to wage war against the criminals in Key West. This time it's a major drug lord and gun runner. While justice prevails again, Jesse wants to get back to a simpler life of fishing and relaxing. Will this happen? I doubt it. This is another good read!
I absolutely love this series, tho the previous book was a little over the top in story line.
Well. Wayne is back in the groove, with 4.5 stars rounded to 5.
Jesse McDermott is now in his mid 40's and beginning to realize that he is not a youngster any more. He is not as sharp as he once was and at the beginning of this book he is trying to get back in shape-- too much beer and lazing about let middle- age spread sneak up on this hunk.
However, when a man tries to sell dope to Charlie, his island caretaker's wife, Jesse gets his feathers ruffled, especially since this happened at the Rusty Anchor. The Rusty Anchor is a local bar and grill owned by a long-time former Marine buddy , and patronized by locals; the occasional outsider who finds his way to the Anchor sticks out like a sore thumb and comes under close scrutiny.
Shortly after this attempted drug sale to Charlie, Jesse gets a call from Dawn Lee McKenna, a psychic, asking for help for her niece's boyfriend who is in trouble with a drug dealer. Seems like he stole drugs-- a lot of drugs-- up in PA from his dealer and the dealer's supplier is after him. Jesse doesn't want drugs in his backyard, and the story takes off from there, with Jesse posing as a South Florida Drug Lord. There is the usual violence associated with drugs while Jesse is trying to get rid of the PA drug Lord.
Subplots include some mystery about Charity, Travis, and Deuce, and the completion of a FAST wooden boat that Jesse and Trent designed and built.
I especially liked that Jesse has rebuilt his relationship with both daughters, and the importance of family is emphasized. He enjoys time with his grandson which is very tender for this tough ,retired Marine and part-time Homeland Security in the Caribbean guy. 9 I cracked up when Dawn Lee McKenna was introduced as a character. She is actually an author who put me on to Stinnett and HE appears in HER works in the Forgotten Florida Coast Series!
Their won't be any spoilers in this review. But, what you will find is that I have binged this entire series. Devour them one-by-one. I have physically read them, downloaded a few with Audible, and I have listened to the book's free audio.
The characters come to life and I feel as though I am visited them down in their homes at the tip of Florida. The Islands (real and fictional) are peaceful, while the storylines bring the excitement of warrior mentally to life.
I’m thinking this is a 3 1/2 star book. Don’t get me wrong, I really enjoy the Jesse McDermitt series but I found myself wanting to skim some of this one. There was some “blah blah yeah eyes glazing over” bits. But of course I love “seeing” Jessie in action and if I had to call one someone for help it would be Jessie and Jack West Jnr :)
There was a moment of “really of all the people that’s just a little too convenient”. I will of course be looking forward to reading the next one as I’m not done with Jessie yet.
I'd like to know where some of Wayne's ideas for story lines come from.
As an avid fan I try not to repeat myself when reviewing Wayne's books. I think the story line in this one is unique for the series and I hope that you enjoy it as much as I have. Watch for the little and unusual details this word smith puts into his stories. I hope you will not only enjoy this book but become a fan and read all of his work!
Love this series! I’m an old codger now but I grew up in South Florida and my stomping grounds were Islamorada, Big Pine, etc. I fished and dove these waters for decades. I can’t stop reading this series! It takes me back to a wonderful time of my life. I can attest to the accuracy of the author and really enjoy the rip snorting adventures contained in these books! Wayne, keep writing and I’ll keep reading them all!
Books 1 through 6 were a good run for the series. Book seven is the end of the line for me. Got about half way through and could not make myself finish it. The characters and story line that have been so successful in the past are gone. Plot focuses on drugs, sex, mysticism, and other topics totally out of synch with prior novels. Started going off the rails in book six and totally left the track in book 7.
Fast paced but too many characters. I and I had a good time with it. I read it too fast to become well acquainted with all as well as keeping bad guys separated from the good ones. I found myself rushing ahead, losing track. Slow down. Getting too old for this!
I have to agree with some of what others have said in their reviews, but I still think this is an excellent book. The story starts in another part of the country with a person making bad decisions and ends up in the key’s. The ending seemed abrupt, but then we learn through Jessie’s eyes why this is. The main character is not always the only hero. Thank you Wayne for another good read!
The entire series is riveting. Sometimes confusing but not much. The whole McDermitt clan, which includes many non family” is real. Between, action, drama, suspense, romance, history, geography, the stories will entertain. One word of caution, start at book 1 and read in order. Lots of references backward.
Would recommend this to anyone who appreciates action by civilians and military trained. Enough twists to keep you reading and interested. Good to start with the first book in the series but not necessary.
Loving this new style with softer edges still....Florida water adventure, fast paced action, romance, intrigue and great writing! Love the slight change in style....
I like our hero, Jesse, but be prepared for endless descriptions of boats, boat engines, boat docking, boat steering, how deep the ocean is around the keys and on and on. In between the storyline is very good so if you're a good skimmer try this series.
'Fallen Honor' seemed to hold a lot of wrong time, wrong place scenarios. The story line was full of action, thrilling scenarios, great characters and a lot of action. A great addition to a great series. A must add to your tbr list.
As always 5 stars. Excellent character development. The author makes you feel like you are right there. Always new characters and challenges. Jesse and friends to solve the problem and go back to their relaxed way of life.
Just love this series. It is full of fast paced action and the characters are well fleshed out. It is an eacy read. It is best to read these in order, the stories do stand on their own, but sometimes references to prior adventures and leave you confused.
These books have the most incredible scenery imaginable and the best cast of characters! Non-stop action and adventure! Gotta love a man in uniform…or even out of one! Great read!
Well Jesse about met his maker because his defenses were down. To long on island time will do that to a man. He made it through to live another day. Good read. Big D