I didn't make it out of the first chapter before deciding to DNF this book.
When the author has the MC think "I'm 20yrs old" and then do a little mental rant about how he's more than capable of running his own roofing company, dies while being struck by lightning, and then mentally complains that he's wasted "20 years on the clock", it's time to bail. If you can't keep the continuity of the story up for all of 3 pages, you shouldn't be writing.