Huh. I was SO looking forward to this book. Magical realism set in my home state of New Mexico? I ran out and bought the book right away, and was excited that it had so many great reviews. Although the magical realism part was charming at times, it was basically just okay for me. What I really had a hard time with was the realistic part. In order for magical realism to be magical and special, the realistic part has to be ACTUALLY REALISTIC. This book has lots of problems, and frankly, I'm surprised the editors and/or previous reviewers (more of them) didn't call the author out. I am from New Mexico, and the issues and unrealistic events presented in this book started right away. It seems to me the author maybe drove through New Mexico and Albuquerque once and decided to write a book, but her research must have stopped there. It's BAD, folks. Just terrible. The mistakes about the landscape, weather, culture, ranching, and city of Albuquerque are so glaring I found it distracting from the content of the story. I guess people who have no clue about New Mexico or the culture could enjoy the book, and it makes me wonder if books I've loved that were written about other places I'm not familiar with could be just as bad and I don't know because I'm not from there, but I hope not. Surely this poor example is the exception, not the rule. Here are the things this author apparently doesn't know anything about (MILD SPOILERS AHEAD):
- Ranching in NM or what it takes to get a piece of land ready to sell (painting house trim? refinishing cabinets? It should have taken that family a couple of weeks to pack up that house, not a whole summer. It's ridiculous. Buyers of ranches are concerned with the well water and mineral rights, not the old house that's on the land. Ranchers would almost never burn down a barn due to termites, especially IN A DROUGHT. Mixing concrete on your own to pave the driveway is also stupid. The author never mentioned a concrete delivery so the dad must have mixed it himself, which would take A LOT of sacks of concrete and A LOT of water, which again, no one would use well water to mix concrete IN A DROUGHT) I think staying all summer at the ranch would have made more sense to me if the family lived somewhere far away, like Orlando, and they stayed all summer so the kids could get to know the grampa, not to "pack the house." It would explain other mistakes as well that the dad made that someone who grew up on a ranch would never make.
- The actual weather or landscape of the majority of NM ("the desert" is not a separate place from Albuquerque or the rest of NM, as the main character talks about it, it is ALL of NM unless you're in the mountains)
- The culture of Hispanics in NM (shortening Spanish names? Not just the main character, but ALL of her friends and classmates? Hispanics in NM are very proud of their heritage and this would never happen)
- How schools work in NM (no junior highs, only middle schools that include 6th grade)
- The size of Albuquerque (millions of people? Albuquerque has just over half a million people and besides Santa Fe IT'S THE ONLY BIG CITY FOR HUNDREDS OF MILES, not a concrete jungle the main character describes. Also the kid acts amazed at seeing the "desert night sky" supposedly for the first time. Um, the night sky in Albuquerque IS amazing because it's not a big enough city to have major light pollution, plus the character talks about driving to deserted roads outside the city to practice driving and mentions Placitas where her sister's dad lives, and I just can't believe that in her 12 years of life her family has never driven somewhere on the outskirts of the city at night, where the sky is completely dark and beautiful. But you'd have to actually go to Albuquerque or do some research to know that...)
- What houses or front yards actually look like in Albuquerque (spongy grass in the front yard? chrysanthemums? Those flowers don't even grow naturally in NM, plus the characters were out of town all summer and it's HOT in the summer so the flowers would die even if someone were dumb enough to plant them, and most yards in NM are desert landscaped because IT'S THE DESERT and they don't waste water on spongy grass front lawns)
- How to handle rattlesnakes near the house (a pillowcase to remove the snake because it's "illegal" to kill them? COME ON. Technically, it's illegal to kill certain species of rattlesnakes because they're endangered but anyone who lives on a ranch would never stop to check the species if a snake is under the house and a direct threat to a baby. They would kill it. Always. Every time.)
- Which brings me to the deadbeat parents of this toddler who is barely out of babyhood on a ranch in the middle of nowhere (setting a toddler down on the gravel driveway in summer? Only if you want third degree burns. Leaving the 12 year old and senile grampa in charge because the house might not be safe for the toddler? How about HOLD THE BABY while you check out the house because odds are it's safer than a ranch outside. Sending the toddler with the kid and grampa to shear sheep in the barn? Does the author think barns are like in the cartoons where there's soft hay and docile animals? Any decent parent would never do that - barns on ranches are dangerous and the kid and grampa can't watch a baby while shearing sheep and giving it meds. Or "tonic" with a spoon. Old sheep farming booklets from like a hundred years ago say that in some situations you can give sheep meds with a spoon, which could go along with the grampa being older than is really possible, but most meds are given with a syringe because a spoon is a pain to use. But the situation was so unrealistic but non-magical that using magical realism as a reason for using the spoon is a weak argument. Seems like these situations were created only for drama but are so unrealistic it's hard to take seriously at all.)
- Also unrealistic was how the mom suddenly started making delicious Mexican cuisine when at home she only makes Hamburger Helper. Again, not magical enough at all to use magical realism as an argument for this.
- How the kid decides to drive back to the ranch with the grampa which is three hours away. The parents supposedly figured out where they went but no state troopers stopped them? The parents didn't catch up to them? The 12 year old drove the whole way with no problems until they reached the ranch? All added to build drama, but was so unrealistic it failed miserably.
- How the dad calls the grampa Papa with a Spanish pronunciation, but the kid calls him "grampa" (Why doesn't she call him Abuelo? The dad even introduced him as "grampa". That was a sloppy detail to miss)
- How the dad wonders if the grampa called a cab when they can't find him the day they're moving him to the home, but then when it's suggested they call the police the parents say they can't because there's no police anywhere nearby. No cops around for miles, BUT THE GRAMPA MAY HAVE TAKEN A CAB???? There aren't any cabs in NM except for in big cities, which is Albuquerque, Santa Fe (sort of) and Las Cruces, which may not even have a cab service. And none of these cities are near this fictional sheep ranch. Ridiculous.)
- How the "ranch" is only two hundred acres. It seems like the author has no experience on a ranch or any large piece of land used for livestock, and two hundred acres just seemed big to her in her mind. Newsflash - that's not big. You can stand in the middle and see the fenceline of two hundred acres. A real ranch in NM would be much, much larger than that, especially if it used to be a successful sheep ranch.
Will my middle school students like this book? Probably. Lots of people did, people who obviously don't have experience in NM, or with ranching, or with the Hispanic culture in NM. But I couldn't get past all the mistakes. The author ruined it for me. There are hardly any middle grade or young adult books written that take place in NM, and I was really hoping this would be great. What a colossal disappointment.