➳ i am gonna get dragged for this ☆
so...anyways. as always, this review is gonna be a hate review; take everything with a bucket of salt. i will be going through the whole book and there will be spoilers. some‼️SPOILERS‼️are in this review. i will be going into the details of why this didn't work. my opinion is just that—MY opinion. if you love this book, i am VERY happy for you. please do not come into my comments are talk shit because i am not in the mood. this will only be a review of the book, NOT the author/fans of the series. i am not here to influence anyone so don't take this as a binding statement. read whatever you like. <3
for starters, i will NOT read the next book in this series because i honestly do not care in the slightest. since this is just a trilogy, i would usually bite my tongue and power through, but this is quite literally taking years off my life and i feel like i am going insane forcing myself to finish this. ideally, i should've stopped reading from book one, since that is truly a nothingburger book. however, people raved about the ending of direbound and now, the entirety of this book, so i gave it a chance...330 pages to be exact and lord have mercy. i want my time, effort, money, and braincells back. trust me when i say, i tried. i tried so hard, but literally nothing about this stands out. this book is neither original nor is it well written...
i am going to be calling our main FMC, kitten in this review. i literally don't remember her name...hence the nickname she so clearly loves. this isn’t her name but i deadass don’t care and don’t remember.
time of death—50% aka page 330.
this sequel essentially starts off exactly where the last book ended—killian betrayed the gang and stark and kitten are mate bonded. that's literally it. i couldn't tell you anything else because they don't do anything. the plot does not progress, the romance is actual torture to read, and the characters are so lifeless they are truly rivaling with me. #useless people unite. however, to no one's shock, in this book we do get introduced to stark's POV and wow, he is so unvaried. the first book in this trilogy truly focuses on killian and his kitten, leaving absolutely zero room for on page development between her and stark. he is just in the back—almost an afterthought, which was so jarring to read since he is supposed to be the main male lead. after the phony reveal of them being mates in the first book, i would expect some better on page development between them in this book. they are just wet, horny, thirsty, down bad, obsessed, and wooden. these two have ZERO chemistry. how are you going to write an entire trilogy about boring ass individuals with no chemistry? please free us from these fools.
starting off, i have three main reasons as to why this was terrible. the entire book is THE reason but for the purpose of making this concise—i am going to break down three the points.
1. characters/character archetypes
2. world building and magic system
3. romance & romantic development
starting off with the obvious, namely the character development and the archetypes of the characters presented: make no fucking sense. there are so many contradictions that the authors forget every time they move to a different point because the narrative structure is so incoherent. this is literally the definition of moving three steps forward to move 300 steps backwards. i am not trying to accuse anybody of anything but this truly feels like we were hitting a publisher deadline and the authors scrambled to come up with some sort of plot for the second book. i understand that even though fictional characters are typically held to a higher standard since they are not real—we truly do not exist in a vacuum, and fiction is clearly a reflection of real life. it's really hard for us as readers to take immature character, seriously since every time miss kitten learns a lesson, she has to relearn it a couple chapters later. this has been an ongoing issue from the first book. i don’t understand why i am over 300 pages into the second book in a trilogy and she still does not have her footing. these characters don’t even feel like characters in an adult fantasy novel, but rather they feel like cartoon characters that a bunch of children grew fond of and decided to give them their moment on pbs.
when it comes to the world building and the magic system of this universe, it is truly just fourth wing from temu. i have no real critiques about how this world has been constructed because i truly have no idea what is going on. it's basically a bunch of trials, but instead of dragons or wyverns—you get stuck with a bunch of big ass wolves. ok? and what? that’s it? well, yes. that’s all they wrote, folks. i can at least appreciate the first book because it was trying to do something with the world building, however, this book seriously is falling into the second book syndrome because nothing happened. again, with the contradictions. i am very aware that this book is written by two different authors and there’s always going to be some level of incertitude since we have two very distinct voices with two very distinct writing styles…BUT it shows. this book is anything but cohesive, and ultimately the world building is where this book suffers. we as readers are not supposed to be this aware that there is more than one voice writing this. it's too blaring with this book since we have an added point of view which does nothing but drag this story even longer.
i am huge on political intrigue, and i believe in actions speaking louder than words. however, with this book it almost feels like the world building is used as a plot device that works around the characters rather than for the characters or against the characters. there are several high fantasy books: game of thrones, mistborn, the poppy war, crescent city…where i can confidently name the plot, the purpose, and the end goal of these characters for the storyline. this magic system almost feels like a parody because of how bizarrely it’s been thrown together with no expansion. there are some characters that attempt to assassinate other characters and ultimately this should be an intense moment for us as readers, since kitten’s friend was assassinated earlier in the book. however, nothing ever comes of this because the “high stakes” never end up going anywhere. these characters are constantly running around in circles, falling for the same tactics and the same emotional manipulation. how are you going to let the same big bad guy trick you over and over again? at some point, the authors have to look within themselves and ask, WHY are they writing her like a jejune and puerile man-child. characters are allowed to be stupid, annoying, and downright evil if the story calls for it. in this case, she is just your stereotypical self-insert heroine. no brain, no braincells.
the narrative structure and prose are ALL OVER THE FUCKING PLACE. this book was heavy on the melodrama and at times, felt like i was reading a kid's bedtime book...not an adult fantasy. the emotional weight of this story basically lies in the romance, but even with that—there is only so much you can write before it becomes superfluous. let me just say it here; they have no chemistry. none. book one was a flop because they don't work as a couple...and now you're gonna add some flop mate story and expect us to believe they are destined to be? piss off. this is why build up is important. having them go from spending approximately 15% of their time together to suddenly being tethered and codependent is fucking strange. you can't force angst. you can't force tension. these elements have to naturally progress in the story or it's irrelevant. why even drag a romantic entanglement if you can't do it properly? why is this so long? why did they change this from a duet to a trilogy? who the fuck hyped this shit up so much? can someone give me a refund? so. many. questions.
i can’t believe i’m admitting that stark was genuinely one of the better parts of the first book. unfortunately, he fell victim to this terrible narrative because his unnecessary jealousy and codependency fell completely flat and this completely took over the book. going from point A to point B within a matter of seconds was extremely incongruous. the art of a good slow burn has truly been lost. the build-up and the little moments woven into the story are what matters most. trying to rush a realtionship from some mediocre dick is just getting tiresome. we are all over it. this truly might be one of the most unbalanced and shallow romance stories i’ve read about in a very long time. very unfortunate since there was potential, but right now, i do not have the mental capacity to be dealing with these fools. a good author can fake on page chemistry, but they CANNOT fake on page compatibility. in this case, neither are present but i digress.
lowkey, just a mess. i may revisit this nonsense in the future but if i have to read upwards of 600 pages just for a monotonous ending with a semi-50-page-fuck-fest between mr. furry and ms. kitten or whatever the fuck their names are...i'm ok for now. to no one’s shock, though, gabriel michael's vocaltussy ATE. honestly, he is the only reason i was able to read what i did. all i could hear was xaden, though. someone needs to give him better characters to narrate with better nicknames...kitten & violence are diabolically embarrassingly bad.