The Beginning

Dual Wielder #1

by Emery Carter

Damon is a young high school student that gets violently ripped from the world he knows and thrown into a war that has been raging between immortal creatures since the dawn of time. As his own powers grow he must use them to fight for his freedom and the fate of his home. The Realm of Light wants control and the Realm of Darkness wants destruction and both want him to be their servant. With the help of some new friends and a lot of luck, he may be able to keep himself from their clutches long enough realize his destiny. But if he does unlock his full power it could mean the end of everything he knows…

Genres: Urban Fantasy

238 pages, Kindle Edition

First published July 19, 2015

Reviews

[Brandy Lawley · Rating 4 out of 5]

Good storyline

I really do like the story. I just felt like everything was rushed. All these amazing and terrifying things happen and Damon just basically shrugs his shoulders and accepts it all like no big deal. Other than that, I really want to find out what happens next.

[Sven · Rating 3 out of 5]

A fun read that's in bad need of some polish.

The story itself is entertaining and the tone is fun, if a bit uneven in terms of characterization and pacing. Young guy discovers powers finds out he's the heir to an otherworldly realm with all the trimmings.

Significant issues on the editing side though, so that's something to be aware of if your bothered by those. As of the time of this there are no chapter breaks in the whole book. Lots of problems with homophones, the most common is using vail instead of veil.

Still, there is a fun read here if you can overlook the rough edges.

[Howard · Rating 4 out of 5]

It was a good read

I started reading on a whim , fell in love with the potential but then came to enjoy the plot and all its twists and turns. The characters are a bit typical but some are such twists its a good thing. The book left me in suspense for the next one

[Janette V · Rating 4 out of 5]

While this book had some problems with structure and grammar, it's faults didn't really bother me. I loved the story, really liked the characters and think that the author built an interesting, multi-faceted world. Waiting for the next one in the series.

[Douglas Hull · Rating 5 out of 5]

Well a new approach to immorality

This series is well worth the to spent reading. It is hard to put down. The action is well covered, along with many romantic twist. Very enjoyable reading.

[akeem waldo · Rating 5 out of 5]

Well done

Great book, the characters beware well built and the story was well written. Can't wait for book two to be released.