Vision: A Short Story

by Elizabeth Holden

A Short Story

Lana's vision problems were getting worse. Her doctor said she might be going blind. And then the ghosts started appearing.

26 pages, Kindle Edition

First published July 8, 2015

About the author

​Elizabeth Holden (she/her) is a writer, a physics teacher, a travel company owner, an X-Files podcast host, and an avid roller derby player. She believes the ideal conditions in which to write a novel are in the dining car of a train traveling through the Alps, with a pot of tea beside you--though she does most of her writing at her home in Wisconsin.

Reviews

[Sandra Lopez · Rating 3 out of 5]

Would you freak if you kept seeing a little girl in your apartment? Yeah!


Lana just keeps seeing her. Is she a ghost? A hallucination? Or maybe it’s just something with her eyes? She does have glaucoma after all.


We follow along as Lana goes to doctor appointments, trying to find some logical explanation for the little girl and her book.


A quick, okay read.

[E · Rating 4 out of 5]

Huh. Short and very readable.

[Trina · Rating 2 out of 5]

Starts off interesting and I'm really getting into this. Then it just stops. Two stars for the great beginning.

[Renee Bosgraaf · Rating 1 out of 5]

Sadly not worth the download...

It's kind of hard to decide why this book is bad , I think it has to do with the shortness and the abrupt ending .

[Donna Nova · Rating 5 out of 5]

Left me wanting more

I enjoyed this story very much. Perfect for right before I go to sleep. A little creepy, leaving room for future creepiness. Loved the characters.
More please.

[Chrissi Mondovich · Rating 1 out of 5]

The book was really good then all of a sudden it abruptly ends!! Disappointing!!!