Too Many Avoidable Flaws
Shyla Colt is a wonderful storyteller, but three books in, it’s clear she’s a terrible writer. This is book 3 in the series and her continuity has gone off the rails, familiar characters are harsh and unlikable, and the editing and grammar are so terrible it makes you wonder how anyone could have read her books at the early stages and let all of the mistakes slide. It’s a disservice to Ms Colt’s storytelling abilities.
As far as Rocky and Evonne as a pairing, they are great. However, there is too much missing or poorly written as far as their back stories go, and there’s a little too much happening in the story which takes away from the time Ms Colt needs to really flesh out their relationship.
I’m nervous about the final book, with Hilary becoming so horrible and the reader barely knowing Hawk. I fear there will be too strong an emphasis on explaining away her attitude to get to know how these two really come together, plus grammar and continuity making the books difficult to read, but might as well finish now.
I wanted IR MC romance and Ms Colt provides that in a very straightforward and non-fetishized way, but her books should not have such obvious errors that make it easy to dismiss her as a writer.