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JANE.
JANE. is the conclusion to HUSH and HUSHED
- GenresAbuse
238 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 17, 2015
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April 15, 2023
Terrible, terrible grammar. There’s no excuse for this.
I read the entire trilogy because I was interested in seeing how the story would play out for Jane. I suffered through the terrible grammar in the first one, thinking it would improve in the subsequent books. Sadly, it got worse and worse. The grammar in this last book is simply atrocious and it’s a shame because it could have been great. As it is, I got all three books free so I’m not too upset. And I enjoyed the story, even though it was at times tasteless in nature. Overall, I would have given it a higher rating for the story if not for the horrific abuse of grammar. If you don’t know the difference between “your” and “you’re” or “were” and “we’re” (which is something I noticed peppered painfully throughout the series, but more so in this final installment), then you have no business publishing a book. I mean, I’m embarrassed for the author, to be honest. Does she not have any people who can review the book before hitting publish? It’s a shame. This could have been something good. I can’t recommend it, all things considered. The ending also made no sense. I understand there’s more and I’m debating whether I should give the rest a chance. If they are free, I might. Otherwise, nope. Don’t pay for this book. If the author cannot invest in an editor or even a friend with the slightest grasp on the English language, then this book is worthless.
I read the entire trilogy because I was interested in seeing how the story would play out for Jane. I suffered through the terrible grammar in the first one, thinking it would improve in the subsequent books. Sadly, it got worse and worse. The grammar in this last book is simply atrocious and it’s a shame because it could have been great. As it is, I got all three books free so I’m not too upset. And I enjoyed the story, even though it was at times tasteless in nature. Overall, I would have given it a higher rating for the story if not for the horrific abuse of grammar. If you don’t know the difference between “your” and “you’re” or “were” and “we’re” (which is something I noticed peppered painfully throughout the series, but more so in this final installment), then you have no business publishing a book. I mean, I’m embarrassed for the author, to be honest. Does she not have any people who can review the book before hitting publish? It’s a shame. This could have been something good. I can’t recommend it, all things considered. The ending also made no sense. I understand there’s more and I’m debating whether I should give the rest a chance. If they are free, I might. Otherwise, nope. Don’t pay for this book. If the author cannot invest in an editor or even a friend with the slightest grasp on the English language, then this book is worthless.
January 16, 2020
Read it because it was a series however everything just seems to wrap up in a neat bow. All the people who brutalised her and sodomised her in extremely horrific ways then become people she forgives and even falls in love with...the writing continues to be atrocious and the grammar is terrible
By the end of the book the men who raped her and forced her into prostitution then become her friends, she falls in love with one and thinks about marrying him even though she’s not 18 yet
She had her second abortion before the age of 18 but seems to think nothing of it, they’re all gathering for her real mom and dads wedding and feeling excited about it
At one stage she says she is jealous of one of the men who raped her as he has a girlfriend and she thinks she chose the wrong one to spend her life with...she thinks she should have picked the other one...this just boggles the mind that from the age of 13-17 she is brutalised at the hands of these men...in a matter of one apology all is forgiven and they become her friends for life
It’s unrealistic! I understand where the author was suggesting that these men were also brutalised as children and grew up in this lifestyle, they had to beat her and rape her or else they would have to answer to their boss...however she forgives and forgets way too easily, like the author just wanted to wrap it all up and have a happy ending
The books in this series really indulge in rape fantasy, you have to wonder what the author was thinking as they’re beyond descriptive what she talks about, this is the easiest to read out of all three as there is little rape occurring
The series is a good idea with some good twists however poorly written and overindulges in the brutality of rape and violence against women
By the end of the book the men who raped her and forced her into prostitution then become her friends, she falls in love with one and thinks about marrying him even though she’s not 18 yet
She had her second abortion before the age of 18 but seems to think nothing of it, they’re all gathering for her real mom and dads wedding and feeling excited about it
At one stage she says she is jealous of one of the men who raped her as he has a girlfriend and she thinks she chose the wrong one to spend her life with...she thinks she should have picked the other one...this just boggles the mind that from the age of 13-17 she is brutalised at the hands of these men...in a matter of one apology all is forgiven and they become her friends for life
It’s unrealistic! I understand where the author was suggesting that these men were also brutalised as children and grew up in this lifestyle, they had to beat her and rape her or else they would have to answer to their boss...however she forgives and forgets way too easily, like the author just wanted to wrap it all up and have a happy ending
The books in this series really indulge in rape fantasy, you have to wonder what the author was thinking as they’re beyond descriptive what she talks about, this is the easiest to read out of all three as there is little rape occurring
The series is a good idea with some good twists however poorly written and overindulges in the brutality of rape and violence against women
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August 15, 2018
Loved all these series
July 1, 2019
Really enjoyed this book and also books 1 & 2.
October 3, 2015
I liked it
I did I liked it! I just felt it was wrapped up to neatly in a bow for my liking! The author knows the signs of abuse but for some reason completely omitted any form this book!
Don't get me wrong if u read the other books this is a must read and so is the sears for that matter!!! I just felt like this book was stretching a little to far for that happy ending
I did I liked it! I just felt it was wrapped up to neatly in a bow for my liking! The author knows the signs of abuse but for some reason completely omitted any form this book!
Don't get me wrong if u read the other books this is a must read and so is the sears for that matter!!! I just felt like this book was stretching a little to far for that happy ending
July 22, 2018
Dramatic, twisting, love story of evil proportions.
Just incredible....lots of betrayal and lots of forgiveness. Such a fantastic read. Not for the faint of heart though. Prep yourself for one hell of a journey. I will say, someone should have proof read this. A ton of grammatical errors.
Just incredible....lots of betrayal and lots of forgiveness. Such a fantastic read. Not for the faint of heart though. Prep yourself for one hell of a journey. I will say, someone should have proof read this. A ton of grammatical errors.
January 30, 2016
WOW!
I stumbled upon this third book, not realizing it was available. I fell right back into Jane's spiral into her living hell. The energy and excitement of this final book was so good, I finished this book in no time.
I kind of wish it wouldn't end!
I stumbled upon this third book, not realizing it was available. I fell right back into Jane's spiral into her living hell. The energy and excitement of this final book was so good, I finished this book in no time.
I kind of wish it wouldn't end!
September 27, 2015
Happy Ending
This was the perfect twisted ending to the Hush series. I wasn't sure what to expect but a very happy ending!
This was the perfect twisted ending to the Hush series. I wasn't sure what to expect but a very happy ending!
September 27, 2015
Good reading
I enjoyed the third book but I wish it was a little longer . The end I was great but I wish I could of read a little more on bree
I enjoyed the third book but I wish it was a little longer . The end I was great but I wish I could of read a little more on bree
June 29, 2016
Pageturning
I cannot get enough of this series,I know it's about "Jane" and her first fictitious life as a sex trafficked victim. But it's like a tv show that you can read....
I cannot get enough of this series,I know it's about "Jane" and her first fictitious life as a sex trafficked victim. But it's like a tv show that you can read....
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