Must say, I am astonished at all the good reviews this book has earned. I struggled to the end just in case it got better, but it really wasn't worth the effort. Firstly, the book is in serious need of an editor, there are spelling mistakes, incorrect uses of words (since when did 'apt' mean being good at something?), and even complete lines repeated. Plus, all the other things an editor should be doing - assisting the author where his writing could use a little tidying up, or a phrase is being over-used. I've just opened the book completely at random, and the first 4 lines on the page I am looking at are a perfect example:
"what drive?" Malone asked.
"Shut him up," Norse called out.
Devene jammed a fist into Malone's gut.
"Dad," Gary called out.
The repeated use of 'called out' is appallingly lazy, and and the writing style is so uncomfortably clunky, it kind of sucks all the tension out of the action scenes. Where is the editor? This stuff shouldn't get past first draft.
And this is the problem with the book. The plot isn't bad, in a convoluted sort of way, and could actually be reasonably interesting, if only the writing had been tidied up. Clearly the author can do his research, he just needs help with his writing. No shame in that. Unfortunately though, he hasn't had it.
Plus which, in so many places there are just awful "reality-glitches". The head of MI5, a knight of the realm no less, referring to himself as a 'Brit'. Really???? Clearly the author hasn't actually ever spoken, or listened to, any members of the English establishment! And the series of bizarre romps and chases through all churches, public buildings, underground stations etc, where doors lead conveniently to secret places and passages that unaccountably, no other inhabitants of the country seem to use or know about. It's really not the London that anyone who has spent any time there can recognise.
This might sound like minutae, and I guess that these details wouldn't faze a reader who hadn't spent time in these places, so maybe I am being unfair in concentrating on them. But the paper-thin characters, the really leaden development of the plot, the atrocious action scenes and the clunky writing really don't offer any saving graces. Yes, there is some interesting history in there. But not enough to lift this book even remotely into anything recommendable. I certainly won't be looking for any more Steve Berry fiction.