Actual Rating: 3.5
The book had a slow and bland beginning. With the "Coz" and "Sez" made it less likeable for me and less of a YA novel than a middle school book.The writing used was very casual, yet comforting at times that the novel went by smoothingly. Yet the writing itself wasn't great, wasn't nicely descriptive, it wasn't music to my ears.
WAIT. I forgot to mention. That first page, that really drew me in with the cat. Job well done. Otherwise i would have delayed Gifted if it wasnt for the intriguement behind The Cat.
Character Wise, there was a few lorry-loads of them. Less than other books, yes. More than is needed for this novel, yes. I was beat down by all the names and nicknames. Especially since some of them were out-of-this-world unique and similar to another out-of-this-world unique name, they got mixed up. There was only a bit of development for each character, and most of the secondary character were the stereotypical ones, nothing much to them. And a lot of the primary characters were simple, predictable.
Speaking of predictability, the plot was. All the foreshadowing was more of a foretelling. Or terribly obvious a few paragraphs beforehand. The plot twists were passable, some were silly, some good, most unlikeable. Its got to do with the predictable characters too.
As mentioned before hand, most of the characters were unlikeable. They took time to get smug with. Most of them were annoying. Especially Frank. He ended up making the most stupid decisions alot of the time. The choices just left him with more consequences. 99% of the story is about his bad choices and how he digs himself out of them. He was an ass, dumb too, oblivious to the obvious. Marvo/Magdalena/Marvell was a sweet one though. A try hard. Understandable. Caring. Smart. The was the loveable character in this novel. I loved her. No one else was a worthy enough character. Her interactions to one character and fro were what i lived for in this book. She would have made a better MC than Frank.
It was nice to have a protagonist who isn't all good. Who isn't oh-so-special. Frank knows he is a great sorcerer, but he also treats it like a curse. Not that sounds a bit like Juliette in Shatter Me. Still, the protagonist wasn't a perfect person. That was nice to have, someone who stole human body parts.
There was a hint of a love triangle. But I was thankful the book didn't orbit around the romance. Only a paragraph here and there. It was sweet in a non-romantic way.
Last Con, the spell work was repetitive. So were some dialogues. But otherwise it was fine.
The world building was a job well done. Doughnut City was very, very interesting. History of the Hole. What was in The Hole. Around the Hole. Religions. Types of people. The sci-fi/fantasy aspect with the alchemy, magic, vision and most of all the elementals. The world building was a job very well done in the book. I loved it there. Donut city is on my bucket list of fictional places i must go to.
I do recommend the novel for middle school fans of fantasy mystery.