I read this book over the course of roughly 2.5 hours while waiting in lines and doctors' offices, and it's not like I regret having read it because it was better than staring at walls while I waited, but this isn't a very solidly crafted story. Absolutely nobody's motives make any sense.
I found the premise intriguing, and I really liked the fascist government/rising unrest that was going on in the background. However, the dynamics of that government, and how it came to be, and why no one can do anything about it even though just about everyone doesn't like it, are very poorly explained.
The relationship between Brent and Ollie was also confusing. I get that they find each other physically attractive, but pretty much overnight they're willing to die for each other, not just for the rebellion but for each other, even though there is literally nothing but the rebellion and a one night stand holding them together. and all of this in spite of some serious (but also confusing) emotional baggage that they don't address.
I'd be willing to let a lot of that slide because this book is marketed as romance and rapid, senseless love is a hallmark of the genre, but almost every one of Ollie's actions doesn't seem to be based in logic. As soon as she gets upset, she bumbles around and makes the first terrible decision that pops into her head. Some of the other characters do that too, but most of them you can see where their bad decision was born of unstable emotions, a lack of good options, or dedication to a questionable cause. Ollie's purpose in the book seems to be to do whatever is necessary to propel the plot along, though, even if that next step isn't logical or in keeping with her character.
But still, I picked this book up for fluff reading to kill time, and because it was free on Amazon. I wouldn't be a very harsh critic normally. What really gets me though, is the ending. You want to talk about motives that make no sense, read the end of this book. Ollie's responses to Brent and her mother are so discordant it's actually uncomfortable to read. Brent's "solution" to their final problem does save Ollie's life but what a weird bargain to make, and weirder still for the Head Reaper to accept the bargain, and weirdest of all, the author writes that scene like it's the only logical conclusion other than death. The scene between Ollie and the Head Reaper in the cell came out of left field so completely that it felt gratuitous, and the whole "join us" argument makes no sense; they don't need her or have any real use for her, and if they do, the author should've explained that before making the plot hinge on her decision.
If it weren't for the ending, I could have called this a mildly pleasant, brainless, waiting room read. I just can't get over the randomness of the decisions or the lack of closure.