shelby&alan(1st story)-i read another book in this series, and decided id continue on with this one.i just hate how the guys careers r so boring.a lot of authors write about lawyers or something like that and it just doesnt interest me at all.
however,im just glad i can halfway get into this after having to have slam nora's "treasures" book.
-"shelby decided not2 mention that the personable young man had had 6 pairs of hands-all very active." what?!
her descriptions of ppl just confuses me sumtimes. like "he had a thoughtful, brooding quality about him that was both restful &distracting." who looks at sum1 &thinks that? n fact, im still trying to picture just what the guy wud look like if he had a "restful &distracting quality."
who just meets sum1&then drinks out of their glass &talks 2them like u've known them 4ever?
nora's guys always grab the girls hand&kisses her fingers,or knuckles,or wrist.its annoying 2read &its repetitive.i mean,wut r the chances that all these guys act the same way&do the same thing?
-"n return,shelby paid him well&listened to his poetry.the 1st nourished his body,the 2nd his soul." -wut?! sumtimes nora writes sum weird things.
the started out a lil boring when ur readin plain paragraphs &no conversations.like she'd go on and on about makin pottery &i just wanted the book2 go sumwhere.
she talks 17th century sumtimes,like "governess" and "15 and 20 minutes."
she just switches2 the guys perspective w/no warning.
the guys make all these assumptions about the girl after being around her for a grand total of 2times. like-"she'd nvr adhere 2the logical 1-step-at-a-time structure of his own."
noras girl characters cum off as bipolar,or just seriously moody,like they change their minds a lot. 1 min they tell the guy they dont wanna be w/him,the next they're like ok.they just give n 2him. which irritates me.pick a decision&stick w/it.&persistant guys r annoying.it may have ben cute startin off,but wen u have all ur characters the same way,its just plain annoying& repetitive.
i was surprised that she was pushing her mom2 date considering she loved her dad so much &that he was killed.
why wud u be wooed by strawberries,stuffed pigs and balloons?! it cud have ben sweet,but the way shelby reacted just made it weird.
its so annoying how the girl has a plan-like2 stay firm w/the guy ¬ go out w/him.&then just 4gets &ends up being charmed &totally gives n2 him.id be happy &was rooting 4the characters decision2 stay firm&as excited 2c how things wud pan out,but it nvr went newhere.becuz like 2 thoughts l8r she was bein charmed by him.its dang annoying.
a lot of the time,characters say things that real ppl just wudnt say.like going on about the panther @the zoo-"i wonder just wut he'd do if he were rlly crossed.he duznt appear2 have a temper. cats usually dont until they're pushed2 far just that 1 time&then-they're deadly." i understand shes comparing alan2 the panther,but she takes it a lil 2far.
its like a trial just gettin thru her books like this 1.@ times,ur thoroughly exhuasted, annoyed &incensed.u swear u'll nvr pick up another nora roberts book&then u do,becuz after a while u 4get just how bad they can b sumtimes,&u trick urself nto thinkin theyre not that bad.then u pick up1 like Treasures &it all starts comin back.
there's good things n her books,&they usually end pretty good,but usually the beginning is the roughest.like wen the couple 1st meets,&he's wooing the girl.which consists of him being a general nusance.
"do u think ur wut i want?wut i can rationally,easily,say i want?ur everything but wut suits me. u flout everything thats vital2my life." wut?!
who just says im gunna marry sum1 w/o even givin them a choice?
-"how did he no exactly wut i wanted-strawberries,a stuffed pig,balloons, &colored glass in the shape of a rainbow.how cud he have known how badly she'd needed2 c a rainbow?" wth.nora can be just plain weird sumtimes.this is just a weird character at times.
i want to see wut a "serious smile" looks like.&wut a "smokey laugh" sounds like.
its so freakin ridiculous how all of noras girl characters just let themselves be led by the guy, as if they've 4gotten the word no,or simply 2 refuse2 go.i mean, who just lets themselves be led out of their apartment,2his car &2a restaraunt wen they dint wanna go,&they told themselves not2 date him?&then she lets him nto her apartment wen she wasnt goin2,says they arent gunna make luv wen we all no they're going2.it wud be nice 2have a character say sumthin &then actualy do it 4 a change.
im so sick of characters sayin they r/arent gunna do sumthin &then doin it. which is basically all of noras girl characters.i mean she just lets him undress her w/o a protest.1 sec her shirts gone, the next her skirt is off&the next they're easin under the covers.&im like wth? who just lets this happen?? u dont wanna be w/ him, but u just let him do w/e.obviously the girls havent ben schooled n 'just say no.' then again the guys havent ben schooled n 'just accept the word no.'
shes so busy tryin2 be lyrical& waxing flowers &romance that u dont even no its began or ended. like most romance authors describe things n detail,but nora nvr does.she mostly skips over the..romantic areas.like if u dint already no wut was happening,u udnt no wut was goin on cuz she goes on spiels like this-"neither was leading now,but both were led." i just wanna yell skip the mumbo jumbo &just write wuts actually happening instead of this crap u cant even understand.
like we dk nora isnt writing about herself thru sum of her characters.like the "redheaded woman."
-"the sleek brunette across from him mite b more beautiful, the blonde more regal." wth?! why wud nora have him say that?
-"but it was shelby u want 2talk 2.why?the reason was there was no reason u cud name.it was simply so." how nice.u dont even no why u wanna talk2the girl u luv.
"shelby was already his wife n all but the legal sense-he had only2 convince her of that." 1st of all,that sounds like sumthin from the 1800s.2nd,how do u consider her ur wife? i mean,u arent living 2gether.u've only known eachother 4 like a month.
i thought they shud have toned it down at the zoo a lil.there r kids around! i kept thinkin they were gunna make out.
&who wants 2make out w/him @his parents home rite outside where ne1 cud c?!
theres sum things that just hit u the wrong way.like "ur more fair than i,kinder,more patient. i have2 take advantage of that."
why wud u have sex n his parents house w/his whole family there?!
&who kisses their brother on the lips?
shelby's brother grant sounded rlly cool &relatable wen she mentioned him n there.we had sum things n common,like being loners¬ 1 4 ppl or social scenes.&the fact that we can c sum1 &then wanna be alone for wks.but i just no wen i get2 his story n this book nora will have mucked up all ur hopes. i thought he'd be the quiet loner type,not the gruff get away from me type.wen he made an appearance n this book,he seemed a lil..coarse.
theres like 3 families circulating n this book.the blades,the macgregors&now the campbells.i mean caine married his sister n law.thats a lil 2 close2 home.why dint nora expand the families a lil?
-nora writes about families rlly good.&sum of her dialogue is good.like wen characters profess luv or w/e.its nice2 read&rlly well written sumtimes.
i dont like how n a lot of noras books,the girl asks the guy2 marry her.thats sumthin else annoying &repetitive.
&i cant get thru a book by nora w/o the girl sayin sumthin like this-"if i had wanted u,u wudnt have had a chance."
it was weird how shelby was acting like she was planning 2move nto his childhood home.
altho her books end on a good,happy note,they all tend2 end suddenly.&i alays want them2 end another way.like id have liked for alans family2 find out they're engaged.
there was this look that was passed between daniel&diana &i thought she was gunna say she was pregnant or sumthin but she nvr did.
i love series that r connected by characters.like wen characters from the 1st 2 books n appear again.like rena &justin &cain &diana.except i wanna hear more from then,but nora dint do it.
i got the impression that myra liked daniel.&then wen she was w/ alan &was takin her heels off &rubbin her feet.it was just weird. u shudnt be pickin up vibes like that but i was.&she was supposed2 be an older lady,but she came off much younger.
&i wanted every1 2talk more about the campbell/macgregor fued,but no1 ever did.
i thought it was cool but it nvr went newhere& rlly dint seem2 b much of a fued.like most things w/ nora,it had all the potential but it felt u unsatisfied.
its annoying how other characters butt n ppls luv lifes or try2 set them up.like wen myra basically told alan that shelby was n luv w/him.so alan had the upperhand once again&forced himself nto shelbys life again becuz he knew she loved him.thats sumthin shelby shud tell him,not sum meddling old lady.
things like this n books just get2 me-"wen i want sumthin that immediately&that badly,i dont walk away from it." becuz im sure he felt that way 4another girl.which we dont wanna no about.
noras guys have always ben around the blk a time or 2.or like 10.we miraculously dint cum across ne n here-which was a shocker considering its nora-until caine mentions the blond alan was dating not so long ago w/the...interesting body.which was inapropriate4 caine2 say neway seein as how hes married.that cud have ben left out.
i just heard on millionaire matchmaker that ne1 marrying sum1 after 3 months is only focused on phsyical attraction or passion.&alan &shelby have only known eachother 4a month.hmm. sum1 needs 2 pass that along2 nora.her characters always get 2gether after a very short time.which irritates me2 no end.
-grant(book 2)-
1st couple of pgs &im already like ehhh.
so the old man liked her becuz she had a firm handshake,dint slouch& had a good smile? is she goin2 a quirky old man livin n a small town cuz u failed miserably.she created another stupid character w/ mrs lawrence.im only a few pgs in&im seriously irritated.wut happened 2 small town charm?
"just n case there was-sumthin out there." there should be dots there,not a dash.
who looks @sum1 &says she "looks like medieval royalty-long bones,sharp features.a celtic or gallic princess.&eyes like a mermaids." like wth? i still dk wut she looks like.or wut exactly a mermaids eyes looks like.
who goes2a strangers house &basically says im stayin.i no theres a storm but u cant tell sum1 ur stayin @their house. hes goo enuff2 take u n &she gets all haughty.only noras characters wud do this.
they've known eachother 4all of an hour &we already gotta read crap like this-"they stared @ eachother, each battered by feelings neither of them wanted."
who knows so much about their ancestors?! her great great gpa was a pirate.&she knew about his ship.&that she "inherited a strong streak of practicality from the displaced aristocrats on her mothers side."
nora keeps dragging out grants mysterious "work" &"projects." even n the 1st book,he told his sister he had2 get back2 work,w/o sayin wut he was doin. just tell us already!
its like if her characters dont experience immediate desire then that means they dont truly like eachother.sum1 plz tell nora u can still like eachother w/o experience immediate desire &having lusty thoughts.cuz this is freakin annoying! she makes it kinda trashy w/these fast movin ppl. slow it down!
shes singin &cookin breakfast n the guys house.hes a total stranger! geez this reminds me of 1 of noras book where the guy finds the girl n his hottub&then she basically makes him let her stay.
who appreciates sum1 tellin them off 4 actin all haughty? "grants brows rose not so much n surprise as n appreciation.not every1 cud tell u2shut up n a butter-melting voice &make it work." so u appreciate bein talked down 2 n ur own home by a total stranger wen ur nice enuff2 let her stay?
&then those 2 stupid townsppl n the beginnin likin her4 rlly stupid things, like "w/a brisk practicality mrs. lawrence admired."
"arousal he knew came from the sea." wen duz that spark arousal?
i swear,nora is unto a world of her own that no1 understands or relates 2.or has ever experienced themselves.
of course the girl wud lean2c wut hes doin w/her car&of course she just HAD 2lean her hand on his back4balance.i dont understand why characters do stuff like this.put ur hand on the car4 balance.
noras guys always say stuff like "touch this 1,campbell,&ur n trouble,the kind of trouble a man duznt walk away from whistlin a tune." how do they no stuff like that? &wut duz it even mean?!
this girl is already irritating.she prefers the loud waves @grants2 the peaceful quiet of her rented cottage.she prefers the dusty disorder of grants house2 the "2 clean" of her cottage. do authors realize how increibly irritating their writing can b?
the fast-ness of these characters just ruins the whole story b4 it even begins.it makes me not like the characters.i mean all her characters r just fast.switch it up once n a while.who likes sum1 who is ruled by desire,who wants 2get w/sum1 they just met?
her sisters death came out of nowhere.
her attitude is rlly gettin 2me.u plan of sketchin the guys house whether he likes it or not.
gen sed the same thing as shelby from the 1st book-"land mines&barbed wire."
her books r just 2much alike.this character is kind of like freakin grace from Treasures&i had 2slam that book down.
the guy says he duznt like agressive,arrogant women &the girl kisses him.wth?!
u applaud these men 4sayin things like that but then they end up kissin her&likin her.
&shes got all these tabloids &gossip surrounding her.why wud a virgin have affairs linked2 her name.geez,this is like irish rebel except way worse.
&why wud a virgin act like nora's usual sluts?! i mean a virgin shud act different.not kiss the guy wen he basically sed he dint like her.
she plans2take moves from her GRANDMA n how2 twist men around her finger.ugh!
she plans2 seduce him&then-"it wasnt until she began2feel the weakness that gennie felt fear.this wasnt wut she'd cum4..was it? no,she wudnt believe she'd cum2 feel this terrifying pleasure." u did plan it,u slut.
this is the 2nd comment this girl has made that sum1 has already sed.1st about the land mines &how its-"ur walkin on dangerous ground." &then the girl says "im very sure footed." not only r her storylines practically identical,but she even uses the exact same sentences.why wud u reuse material u've already had characters say?! c,thats how close her books r.throw sum variety nto the mix!
u dont have a problem trespassing on his land 4a painting but regarding his secret spot u feel that "even had she wanted2 paint there,the sense of trespassing wud have 4bidden it." wow.its nice2 no u have sum bounderies.
name will turner reminded me of pirates of the carribbean.
dont like the way she portrays shy ppl.her main characters r nvr that way,&wen she finally puts 1 n a book,she makes a mockery of it.like the blushing,stuttering boy n here.nora nvr writes that her characters blush.like the guy cud say things that wud make most ppl blush,but her characters jut dont. they act completely comfortable naked or doin/sayin w/e w/a guy-like seasoned sluts.i guess they're so sophisticated like nora.
wuts up with "ayah" n here?
&wuts up w/that widow? u think her icy personality is chippin away but it keeps comin back.she nvr changed either &wasnt seen n the book after the store scene.
"w/the melting came a pain,unexpected &sharp enuff2 make her tremble.how cud there be pain,she wondered dazedly,wen her body was so truly@peace? yet it came again on a wave that rocked her. sum lucid part of her mind reminded her that luv hurt." think she's experiencing sum physical pain? nope. shes talkin about luv.ur kissin the guy.wth is there2 make u feel pain?! she did the same thing n Irish Rebel. duz nora act.no wut shes talkin about? have u experienced this cuz it feels totally unreal.
shes "fallin in luv w/him" wen they've only ben around eachother like4 times.
she was act.gunna laugh wen the boy was stutterig&blushin&droppin things.
idk why nora writes the same things.the whole "i cud make u beg" thing isnt romantic.its trashy. -"makes u wanna sit up&beg." thats act.gross&distasteful.learn how2 write actual romance!
wuts up w/the name "genvieve?" ive been readin it like "genevieve." how do u even say that?!
who gets all aroused &crazy from a storm? only noras characters.they're like animals.
"desperate 2touch wut he had denied himself4 days." wow,man,whole days.wut restraint u have.
i feel like wen they tell eachother they luv eachother n here it was more aimed 4 comedy instead of realism.they're yellin&cussin@eachother while they say it.
love came WAY2 quickly-predictable 4nora-where it isnt even believable.&it seriously tickes me off&just takes away from the story.
noras stories nvr build up.its just a buttload of crap&ppls dumb feelings that surface so quickly.
u cant have luv-or shud i say lust-@1st site n all ur books.but she duz.write n a realistic ay that ppl act.like&can relate2.
id rather have it where the characters dont like eachother@1st or start out on the wrong foot &then end up likin eachother.thats sweet&is much more romantic than this crap.
her women r annoying &r a lil crowding.they just grab the guys hand or kiss him wen hes actin standoffish.&just becuz they kiss or have sex or tell eachother they luv eachother,the women immediately expect everything.trust,a marriage proposal.the whole 9yards&trimmings.its a lil psycho &clingy&just annoying.
&i understand why they expect it becuz they've just had sex&sed they "luv" eachother but instead of building a relationship &trustin eachother&act.knowin eachother,they just have sex becuz of a lil thing called lust-not sum deep connection that noras characters "always have." becuz they kiss &have sex so fast,it seems like it means nothing2them so idk why they'd have all these expectations. if they had ben datin4a considerable amount of time,a believable amound4 true feelings2 surface then i cud understand.but it isnt the case&i dont understand.i am, however, seriously annoyed w/noras books.
she puts dashes where there shudnt be1.like "daniel mentioned u were bringing-an artist."
dont rlly like how every1 got paired up w/sum1 who had the same profession as them.it cud be sweet,but not wen u do it n every single book n this series.justin& rena-both gamblers.shelby&alan-both no about politics.caine&diana-both lawyers.like everything else n here, its unrealistic.
the girls nvr blush wen they're talkin of very intimate things or doin rlly intimate things.but wen her COUSIN says she beautiful,she blushes.
wuts up w/ppl givin kisses on the mouth? shelby did it 2her brother &then to her fathernlaw.its gross.
"ur not the only woman ive luved.but ur the only woman ive ben n luv w/." wth? dont say nethin @all if ur gunna cum out w/sumthin like that.&wuts the true difference neway?
who has sex n sum1 elses house?i mean i cud halfway understand alan&shelby becuz it used2 b his home.but grant&genny arent even truly related2them.i mean u just met them&ur havin sex n their house.&alan&shelby doin it n the family pool that the family swims n the next day. i cud understand it if it was a private pool.her books=no class.
i thought she was bringin an outsider n w/genny.but it turns out shes related2 justin &diana &has met alan b4.ugh!like i sed earlier,she keeps her books within like 3 dif families.its kind of gross that ppl-caine-got w/his sister n law.or w/e it was.
other repetitive thing-girls askin the guy2 marry thing.highly annoying.
i think nora tries2 beat out herself n a game of How Fast Can My Characters Get Together? n the 1st book was a month.n here it was 2wks.wen shelby asked gen how long they've ben 2gether or w/e it was &she sed 2wks,i bout lost it.