Thank you, Tom, for kindly giving me a copy of your book to review it, and congratulations on your debut novel!
Real rate: 3.5 stars
This book was a pleasant surprise, mainly because I had to finish the other books that were on my reading list and didn’t even remember the synapsis. I was glad to discover a book with almost all the elements I love: a crime (and an ugly, mysterious one), a police investigation that was always two steps behind the bad guys, led by two cops with their own problems to deal with that made them far from perfect, and all this happening in a city where reality mixes with some “paranormal” phenomenon. I’m not sure if paranormal is the correct adjective, I wouldn’t want you to think of ghosts and spirits. A better description would be a fictional world where our minds have powers that are almost palpable to those who are aware of them. So, in this book, Detectives Bishop and Brennan are investigating the murder of a young pharmacists, who apparently had a normal kind of life but could afford expensive things, this being something that caught the detectives’ attention. Meanwhile, the city was under the domain of a new type of drug, disguised as “medicine” for those who wanted to stop smoking, which made it easy to distribute, buy and apply. As any drug, it fractured the user’s mind, making them susceptible to hallucinations that could be a product of their imagination…or boosted their psychic abilities. At the same time, there’s the story about Jeremy, a teenager who’s expending his vacations in the summer ranch his parents own. In his boredom he investigates the property’s land, discovering a building called The Tower that seems very interesting and mysterious to him. There, an accident will make him aware of his mind power, and his awakening will allow him to know a lot of the family (dirty, personal, intimate) secrets.
Both of these stories happen in parallel, so your mind is constantly searching for the link between them until the end. You have a glimpse of its connection somewhere in the middle, and a bit at the end, but it’s not strong enough for you to understand. It’s like if two people saw each other while traveling in a train, each one in a different direction; there is a moment in which both of them are aware of each other, but the moment the trains start moving, it’s over. This is the feeling I got from the stories, and of course it’s what made want to read the next book (because yes, I need to know the rest of the story).
Good: I think I described most of what I liked previously, but in any case I’ll write them again. I liked the crime investigation better as a police suspense story, I felt my mind working to solve the case while feeling empathic with Brennan’s life problems. Also, the characters were real and hardly perfect, very realistic. The drug problem was very creative, I don’t know if something like that exists, but it made me wonder if it was true, how hard it would be to fight its use. On the other hand, the Jeremy part was a bit more sentimental because it involved his parents, their memories and experiences, while the kid was struggling to understand what was going on in his mind. Nevertheless, I loved his ability, it was not only creative but very fascinating (and overwhelming, if you had it). Of course, his story ended abruptly, and now I need to know whether Jeremy won or his uncle worked his way around. And let me say my imagination was gladly challenged with the battle inside Rick’s mind, they were some great chapters to read. Finally, good finale of the book, it tickles you curiosity and makes you want to read the sequel :)
Not so good: I think both stories could have been more described, they had so much potential that I expected much more. Some of the memories from Rick could have been more explained, because I had trouble understanding why Jeremy considered his uncle a bad person, and if it wasn’t for Rick’s final actions, I still wouldn’t get it. In the other story, I think the way Bishop managed to stay alive in the hospital / narco lab was not told, it was like a gap in the storyline that, to me, it was important, because it could contain information that will clarify the drug business or the crime they were investigating or something like that. I even though she was confabulated with the drug dealers, of that she was a dirty cop, but in the end nothing happen and she didn’t even wanted to talk about it. Maybe she also has a “power”, I don’t know, I’ll have to read the other book to know if I figured her out.
Would I recommend it? Yes.