Having decided to make omega rights activism his new career, Chad jumps in head first... though not everyone appreciates his efforts.
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“Who is your alpha?” Peter asks, walking closer. Chad takes an involuntary step back, Peter’s word infused with the full authority of his dominance. It feels like he can’t breathe.
“You are,” Chad says, forcing the words out. Peter grins, proud and possessive.
“And are you going to be good for your alpha?”
Peter grabs Chad’s chin, tilting his head up, squeezing Chad’s cheeks as they stand chest to chest. Chad tries to nod, too overcome to speak, but Peter’s hold on his chin prevents it.
“Yes, alpha,” he says, the words coming out like a moan.
“Good boy.”
Chad closes his eyes, surrendering to Peter’s control. It feels amazing, like he can finally let go and relax. Peter will catch him no matter how hard he falls...
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After a slow start to the series this second book delivers well. I like that the characters don't betray who they are - they are themselves. Chad firmly understands his relationship with Evan and Peter, Peter is still indulgent but starting to glean what that means - but he never looses his edge. In fact his edge gets more definition here which is also intriguing. He's kind of a mafia type boss here (not really the same...but you get the idea) and I appreciated his strength a whole lot more. I do believe he tolerates Evan and owns him - but his one twu luv is Chad. It's kind of heartening to see the lengths he will go to to make Chad happy. Evan is a bit bratty - but nothing too much.
Why not 5 stars? I wanted and needed more description in the kink. The sex is fine - the kink needs work. It fits them and as a dynamic it would lend a lot more to the story if we had more rich, descriptive scenes here and some headtalk in Chad's head about it. That's a missing piece to the story. We've been told, but have not experienced deeply enough, Chad's thoughts about the kink. I'm not one of those who think the BDSM is explicit here - perhaps because I am a masochist so have a deeper understanding of the dynamic and how things work real world. I desperately wanted to connect with Chad on this - but was never able too - more's the pity.
I also think the violence is downplayed - it's too "matter of fact" and it IS a huge part of the story - don't hide it. Don't glorify it but don't hide it. If you cannot trot it out full color and coverage for me as a reader then Peter remains a figure I cannot really get attached too. JMHO.
I actually liked this better than book one. I’m not usually into books about a menage relationship, but these three guys just make me happy. Evan is the perfect little omega with two Alpha’s. Peter the superior Alpha and Chad the fun loving and caring Alpha.
"You're on a roll, Peter." I was on the bus reading and I just started laughing when I read this line. I was so thrilled to see that there was another story with Evan, Chad and Peter because I really wanted to see how the omega rehabilitation went and really really wanted to see Bo and Trick find awesome alphas. And they did!! Woohoo!!! I thought the author was setting up Chad to take over the Omega Rights group given his take on how underfunded and in need they were, but that was probably just me reading too much into his observations. I agree with the reviewer who said Peter is a little bit of a sociopath, and like Evan, I'm fine with it. I think this author introduced us to another intriguing character, Merchant. He delivered my favourite line and I'd really like to see what he's about. I think he's where Peter was right before he met Chad and became a different/kinder person in certain respects and I'd like to see Merchant meet his mate and how he changes. I think the story of Bo and/or Trick with their alpahs could be delved into further, but I'm satisfied knowing they're happy and with the right alphas. Hence, I'm officially lobbying for Merchant's story where he meet his omega, or even an alpha, mate. Overall, I'm beyound ecstatic with this installment.
The relationship between Peter, Chad and Evan grows stronger. Peter stops at nothing to protect Chad and Evan, both physically and emotionally. I ❤️ Peter. He is the ultimate dominant Alpha. Chad and Evan are lucky to have him.
I was glad to see Chad continue to fight for omega rights and try to find a way to rehabilitate the omegas rescued in Omega: The Complete Series. I look forward to reading Logan's Alpha next. I would love to read more about some of the other omegas rescued here.
I was hoping this book would be better than the last one, because everything was more established. But the whole omega rights thing was so badly done. I thought the author basically told us that Evan was going to push his alphas and figure out how far his freedom extends, but that also didn't really happen.
Like Morally Kinda Maybe If You Squint Ambiguous Characters?
Then dive in to this series. Uber-Alphas like Peter Tank are driven, focused, and...violent. But hey, it's an Alpha eat Alpha world. And it's not all snapped necks and dubious accidents. There's sex, too. Lots of sweaty, hot sex. Enjoy!
Continuing from Book 1, Evan and his Alphas Chad & Peter! I love that Evan was going to college, Chad had a new career path, helping the Omegas, and Peter (still the Uber Alpha) was more human and gentler than in Book 1, while showing he'll do anything/everything for his mates!
These three men. I wish we could have seen Evan and Trick interact after he bonded with Mark considering Trick didn’t want a new alpha. Possible new story?
One of my favourite threesomes ...Peter Chad and Evan rehome all the omegas with only a few bumps along the way..I'm now hoping Trick and Mark get a book..
It’s very smut hahahaha nalingaw ra gihapon ko but by this time gi kapoy na pud ko. Nothing new sa ilang dynamics although yeko ra nahuman ra gihapon nko. Willing to read more from this author.
I don't like this Evan character involvement in book 2. I Loved, loved , loved book one. But I feel like the Evan character in this book 2 story, is an intrusion into what was a freaking perfect romance. I read book 2 last year and was too mad about this permanent three- some development to leave a review . Give us some warning. Charo
I didn't enjoy this one as much as the initial series, which is a little surprising as I like a decent amount character and plot with my smut, and this sequel had plenty amount of setting and sex. In part that may be due to Peter's increased "I am Alpha and I'll do whatever I need to,to whomever I need to" attitude, which seemed significantly more intense in this volume. Still, certainly an entertaining read that combines plenty of explicit BDSM, a very interesting setting, and a nice rang of characters.
Interesting fall-out of two Alphas (and now an Omega) in a relationship
The role of Alpha Chad in navigating a role as an Alpha who submits to a more powerful (almost Uber) Alpha is interesting. The plot threads wrapping up loose ends from both their initial relationship and their new (from book one/the Omega series) Omega's kidnapping makes for interesting-enough plot wrapping around the heated, kinky, dominating sizzle.
I was excited to see another book to this series. I am also exited by reading the author's blog that their is more to come with Bo's story. Hoping Trick is next. My only suggestion is with using the correct name. I noticed this with the series as well when he is referring to Chad, but using Evan's name also at one time he uses Chase instead of Chad. Really enjoyable read!
I enjoyed this story more than the last book. However, the ending was rushed and I didn't like how the detective and senator were so easily dealt with. Kind of a waste of opportunity for drama, suspense, action,mystery, etc.
While I enjoyed the first book, this one took that world building and moved forward, characters faced consequences and grew, and Evan, Chad and Peter each seemed to discover more about themselves through their relationships with one another.
I really enjoyed getting to see more of Peter, Chad, and Evan. I like that we get to see what happens to the other Omega's that were with Evan when he was rescued.