From the jump this looks like it could be a cheesy Syfy movie. There's nothing wrong with that. I like a few of them. But very quickly, this book spirals out of control. Ben and Jessica's plots are only connected by the slightest of threads, and that's their relationship to one another; beyond being father and daughter, it feels like their journeys are two separate books, like maybe Matthew wrote out Ben's story and just didn't have enough for it, so he added in this weird plotline where Ben had a daughter who was suffering from guilt and PTSD but still had time to be a "sexy soldier" stereotype. And Jess' character wouldn't bother me so much if it just wasn't so bad. Everything just feels so awkward and unrelated and amounts to nothing. There's no answer for who sent the Facebook message. The entire revenge scheme has no meaning since Jess wasn't even related to Nico and Enzo (which is good, since they both have creepy incestuous thoughts about Jess and her mom). Roger's past relationship with Jess doesn't really have any bearing to the story since he kills himself immediately after seeing her again, which spares us from a horrible love triangle with Giovanni and Jess, I guess... but that just begs the question of why it was relevant in the first place. And what was up with the symbols on Roger's shit? Was it connected to the ring Muller had? I sure don't know, because it doesn't ever get brought up! Neither does Roger's apparent addiction, or why he's addicted. And Ben's relationship with Celeste is fuzzy, too. Did they break up directly after Connor's death, or did it take years? Why did Jess believe they could get back together? It just doesn't make sense love. Nothing in this book makes sense. Even the whole reason for the plot ends up not meaning shit since the Earth somehow magically survives binary black holes passing through it, and magically is put on the same course as the sun so they won't die! So like, really, Matt, what's the fucking point, because I'd love to know.
I'd also REALLY like to know the point of randomly throwing a sex scene in when Jess and Giovanni were supposed to be staking out the house where Gio's kidnapped nephew was - like I don't think Matt understands "reading the room" and understanding when something should happen. I don't know. This book just feels like it wasn't plotted out, and is just two books mashed together.