I got sucked into this series when I read the first book, Carter. This has been my least favorite, and if I wasn't holding out to read about Bowie and Charlie, I would probably give up now. Hopefully the next book, Mason's story will be better, and I'm hoping against all hope that Bowie's story will be all that I hope.
As for this book. Jake and Verity. Her name bothered me. She goes to try and extricate her brother from some illegal dealings he's involved in. I found the whole thing implausible. As for the sexual aspect, she acted like a virgin with Jake, shy and unsure of herself. But then the author writes, "Sure, she'd had her share of lovers..." Maybe my inner puritan is showing, but saying that she's had multiple lovers just diminished her in my eyes. I feel that making love (for a woman at least) should have some degree of caring. If she has had multiple partners, I'm not sure how she'd know she's in love with the hero. Just my personal opinion.
Do authors plan out all their books at one time? If so, you'd think they'd come up with different names for people so they don't all start with the same letter: Captain, Carter, Charlie, Cheryl. Just sayin...
That being said, the book is well-written. I love the friendship between the people at the agency.