I really wanted to love this one. I absolutely love the Fable franchise and I enjoy Jim C. Hines's writing. However, this one was a bit disappointing to me. The characters were not very developed in my opinion, and that may have to do with the fact that there were so many POVs. You never really followed any character long enough to feel truly connected to them. I also had a hard time visualizing some of the characters, which could get a bit frustrating. I kind of wonder if this would have been a non-issue if the game hadn't been ultimately canceled because I'd have spent time with those characters elsewhere.
The mini-prologues in each section which followed the villain were slightly odd as well. It dispelled a bit of the mystery element in the other chapters as the Heroes were trying to figure out what was going on and how to defeat everything.
There's kind of a major plothole too, with Yog transforming Ben back to his human form as they merely entered the area of Grayrock, whereas her husband was sitting next to her for an extended period of time and she seemed unable (or perhaps unwilling?) to transform him back to his human form. If it was because she was unwilling, that was not exactly portrayed through the story, because she seemed to be glad to be reunited with him, or if not glad, at least contented. Of course, I suppose keeping him a doll made her later actions simpler for her.
Blue, the confusing and somehow lovable anti-villain/minion of a Red Cap, was probably one of the best characters in the entire book, just because of the depth of his character. This is, of course, due to Yog's intrusion in his personality by making him one of her riders, but allows for the reader to understand the viewpoint of a Red Cap as much as they had one at all. However, I felt the need to look up what a Red Cap in the game itself was meant to look and act like because again, it didn't feel entirely fleshed out in the book.
I kind of had to push myself through it, though it got much easier to get through toward the end, when I finally could read without having to remind myself which Hero was which. I enjoyed the writing itself-I love Hines's style and humor. The story itself--though a variation of the Baba Yaga folklore and therefore a bit predictable in some ways--was enjoyable. I only wish that there was a bit more connection to the characters and setting.