I've read other books by this author, and I have to say, they all kind of feel the same. It's actually something that I'm finding a hard time explaining to be honest, because I just can't quite put my finger on what it is that bugs me about this book.
First of all, the sentence structure in this book is ... odd. Not always, but yeah. Once in a while I'll find the phrasing ... I mean, ugh. Ok, so for example - "Did even Archer believe .... See what I mean ? Shouldn't that be more like "Did Archer even believe ..." ? I found a lot of other sentences phrased liked this all over the book. Also, the Spanish freaking sucked. Come on, please do not use Google translate, get yourself some help from someone who went to school in a Spanish speaking country, because even if someone studied Spanish in school here, it's not the same.
The thing is, I didn't get the connection between the characters. I didn't understand Mac at all. One minute he hates the guy, the next, for some unexplained reason, he decides he likes Jorge and is going to purse him and there you go. There aren't any meaningful moments between them, hell, Jorge got a scare and thought, why not, let's be boyfriends after all !!! It felt more like their relationship came to be because they're there as opposed to because there was something real between the two men. I don't know, something major was missing for me.