I was looking for a quick read and maybe discover a new author, so I picked this up on Kindle Unlimited and got what I paid for. Let me start by saying that if I get a KU book and I like it, I buy it right away.
I decided to get the entire trilogy as it's cold, storming, and my dogs are stuck inside just as I am. I finished my laundry and settled in for a nice read. Number One, I read all three books in a matter of hours, which made the differences in this so-called "series" appallingly obvious.
First off, three books and three works that are all named Rusneon, but are so different as to not be the same planet at all. Other than the name and some telepathy, none of the worlds resemble one another at all. In this book they are bereft of women and are led by a "Great Leader", In the second, and trust me, no spoiler alert because I ruin nothing for you, the hero is the king of Rusneon who's been missing for a really, RILLY long time. And they have enough women so that open masturbating or manipulating another in public is no big deal. The ONLY thing these worlds have in common is the name of the planet and some mystical night on which their rulers are allowed to marry. Secondly, unfortunately, the author was not good enough for me to suspend my belief enough to even consider an alternate universe plot line.
Number 2 - The grammar was horrible so much so that I had to stop reading several times in a chapter to suss out what the author could have possibly meant with the words she had published. I've seen sixth grade themes that were better constructed than these steaming piles of dung. The punctuation is non-existent in most parts, and the telepathic conversations? Indistinguishable from spoken conversations. Grammatically, these books would cause any English teacher or even a person just learning the language to openly weep. I guess no editors were involved. Hell, I doubt beta readers were involved.
Number 3, the authors knowledge of even simple scientific concepts such as worm holes or even jump gates caused me to groan. Intergalactic travel is a near impossibility, interstellar travel is iffy and predicated upon worm holes and/or jump gates to cross the massive amounts of space required for even interstellar travel.
I found the conversations between the hero and heroine so stilted unless it had anything to do with sex and even then it was just a lot of "oh God" and moaning in between some of the most immature sex I've read since Harlequin.
Will not read another book by this writer. She seriously needs to take a course in English Composition and perhaps creative writing.