"When will you accept me?'' Lucian murmured against my skin. The wonderful feeling only grew as he stepped closer, the thick muscles between our layers of clothing pressing against my back. He dipped his head. I could feel his lips against my ear when he spoke. "When, Victoria? I am tired of fighting with you. I know you want me just as much as I want you. Admit it."
I couldn't.
"Admit it, Victoria!'' Lucian's voice went deep when he raised it. Goosebumps prickled my entire body as he whirled me around so that we were face-to-face. I exhaled softly, hating the dominant position he had over me. Lucian wretched my chin up. His eyes were burning with a lustful smolder. "Admit it," he repeated angrily.
"N-no." Oh, I would definitely get myself killed tonight. I knew my defiance was angering him further but saying I wanted Lucian would mean I was accepting defeat. And I didn't do that.
It's the best werewolf story I've read on Wattpad. The protagonists were well-built, and I laughed a lot reading the chapters. It's really a shame it's not published (especially when I see awful books getting published).
Of course it's a bit cliche: The human girl is the Alpha's mate, and he kidnapps her. But oh well, you need to say that this author has written a wonderful story ;) The writing style wasn't really impressive, but it was funny and rather well-written for a wattpad book. Plus, the grammar is really good.
The only thing is the end: disappointing. It was weird, but maybe it meant a new story for both Lucian and Victoria? Anyways, it was beautifully done!