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Zach Tanner is on the run. He can run from the war, but he can't run from himself.

Zach and his girlfriend, Jess, careen down Sunset Boulevard, trying to get away from a red Camaro that’s hot on their tail. But it’s hard to get away from your best friends, who think you’ve stolen their spoils of war.

A novel from the mean streets of Los Angeles by the Shamus Award-Winning author of WHITE HEAT.

181 pages, Paperback

First published September 1, 2015

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Paul D. Marks

26 books132 followers
Paul D. Marks is the author of award-winning Mystery-Thrillers about imperfect or flawed people trying to do the right thing in a corrupt and unjust world.
He is the author of the Shamus Award-Winning mystery-thriller White Heat. Publishers Weekly calls White Heat a “taut crime yarn.” Betty Webb of Mystery Scene Magazine calls its sequel Broken Windows “Extraordinary”. Though thrillers and set in the 1990s, both novels deal with issues that are hot and relevant today: racism and immigration, respectively. Marks says “Broken Windows holds up a prism from which we can view the events burning up today’s headlines, like the passionate immigration debate, through the lens of the recent past. It all comes down to the saying we know so well, ‘the more things change, the more they stay the same’.”

His short story Ghosts of Bunker Hill was voted #1 in the 2016 Ellery Queen Mystery Magazine Readers Poll. His story Windward was selected for the Best American Mystery Stories of 2018 by Louise Penny and Otto Penzler, and won the 2018 Macavity Award for Best Short Story. His stories have won or been nominated for multiple awards. He has also been published in Beat to a Pulp, Alfred Hitchcock Mystery Magazine, Switchblade, Hardboiled and more. www.PaulDMarks.com

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He is co-editor of the multi-award nominated anthology Coast to Coast: Private Eyes from Sea to Shining Sea. Two stories from which were chosen for The Best American Mysteries of 2018 and one received a Macavity Award that year.

Though Paul writes about other places, he considers himself an L.A. writer and lives in the Los Angeles area with his wife, dogs and cats. He has served on the board of the L.A. chapter of Sisters in Crime and currently serves on the board of the SoCal chapter of Mystery Writers of America.

He also has the distinction, dubious though it might be, of being the last person to have shot a film on the fabled MGM backlot before it bit the dust to make way for condos. According to Steven Bingen, one of the authors of the well-received book MGM: Hollywood’s Greatest Backlot: “That 40 page chronological list I mentioned of films shot at the studio ends with his [Paul D. Marks’] name on it.”

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Author 3 books47 followers
September 3, 2015
Zach Turner is home from Afghanistan and the horrors of war; but getting away from conflict just isn't on his horizon. While all he wishes to do is forget the past, it's right on his tail in the form of a speeding red Camero operated by a former best friend who accuses Zach of betrayal and treachery.

In a chase scene typical of the classic detective/noir thriller style, Zach races through L.A. with a hapless girlfriend at his side. And that's just the opening salvo in a nonstop staccato action noir fiction story that, in less than a hundred pages, packs in a mystery/thriller that can't be beat.

From the dry, dusty L.A. basin atmosphere to the perceptions of a wounded veteran whose combat doesn't end with service, events of the war return to haunt Zach's life at home.

It's not easy to capture and build atmosphere while crafting a complex noir plot using a limited number of words; but what might take other writers hundreds more pages to spin, Paul D. Marks creates with just a few deft swipes of his pen.

A superior writer can create believable protagonists, settings, and inject a smoky, fast-paced mystery into everything using a minimum of words to describe and capture experiences. Vortex lives up to its name, quickly creating a maelstrom of action and purpose to draw readers into a whirlpool of intrigue and mystery centered on a believable protagonist and his dilemmas.

Noir detective readers looking for a short work that is immediately gripping and well-written will find the perfect item of choice in Vortex, but be forewarned: once picked up, it's nearly impossible to put down before the end.
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Author 8 books261 followers
January 5, 2018
...The brakes locked, the car reeled out of control, swerving erratically all over the road. Brian wrenched the wheel from me, trying to regain control. Carlos banged again the door in the back. We were hurtling off the road, into the scrub. …

Another Shamus Award Winning Author

What could be worse for an Afghanistan veteran than to come from the horrors of war to find himself in a battle with veteran buddies who look to cash in on their war effort. Only, Zach Turner returns a changed man, no longer wanting what he thought was important— money and celebrity—but a peaceful, normal, self-rewarding life. What Paul D. Marks does best is offer his readers credible protagonists, someone a reader would meet in life, and places them in worse case scenarios. The pages turn quickly as Zach races through the streets of Los Angeles.
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Author 7 books7 followers
September 13, 2017
Zach Tanner, a vet returning home from the frontlines of Afghanistan, is stalked by his past in Paul D. Marks’ walloping noir thriller Vortex.

Back home in LA and recovering from war wounds, the good times are long gone for Zach Tanner. His movie star good looks are marred by a nasty facial scar he got in combat, his former girlfriend Jessie seems distracted, and his younger brother Chris hates him for leaving home to fight a war while their parents needed him. More lethal yet, Bryan and Carlos, Zach’s two best pals who served with him in the National Guard, rough him up badly, trying to get their hands on some mystery loot from Afghanistan. If Zach doesn’t cough it up soon, they threaten to kill him and Jessie.

Zach admits to Jessie that while in Afghanistan he, Bryan, Carlos, and Matt, a fourth friend, had skimmed two million dollars from funds the U.S. used to pay off warlords. Now Matt has vanished, and so has the money. With former friends hunting him down, Zach must untangle a web of deceit that pits lovers, friends and family against each other. When the secrets to Zach’s mystery are finally unveiled in a climactic finish, long-standing bonds are put to the ultimate test.

Zach’s pursuit takes him on a Tourist Guide jaunt of LA’s hot spots; a car chase down Sunset; a shakedown at Grauman’s Chinese; a cat and mouse game with a treacherous psychic on the Venice boardwalk. Each stop pulls the rug out from under LA’s glamour, revealing the broken dreams that scurry beneath. “Tourists still found the place intriguing,” Marks deftly writes about Hollywood’s iconic Chinese Theatre. “They compared their hand and footprints to those of the stars of the golden age embedded in the cement. Had their pictures taken with out of work actors and bums dressed up like Wonder Woman and Spider Man.”

Marks is a Shamus Award winner for White Heat (2012), his stirring debut novel about a white detective chasing down a case in South Central as LA erupts around him after the Rodney King verdicts. Marks continues to be a faithful and canny purveyor of fate and doom in the City of Angels. Vortex evokes a sundrenched LA whose denizens, often like the town itself, are caught between past glories and a bleak present. Zach and his friends, naïve partiers growing up in Hollywood, “just wanted to be famous-rich and famous.” The war changes Zach, who no longer wants the illegally obtained money, but yearns for a normal life. “What’s normal?” Jessie asks. Though stoking the gloom, Marks never lets up on the pacing. Vortex is a page-turner that amps up the tension while unveiling the darkness that begins where the stars on Hollywood Boulevard end.
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9 reviews2 followers
April 2, 2018
A wounded vet, Zach Turner, returns from a tour of duty in Afghanistan. While there, he and three buddies - aka The Four Musketeers - commit a crime, which will effect him, his family, and childhood friends, upon his return to Los Angeles. Paul D. Marks' page-turning novella, "Vortex" (2015), puts you smack in the middle of the City of Angels as we follow Turner's return home, which immediately turns into a non-stop night nightmare from its get-go opening to its bloody, chilly resolution. Filled with witty patter, this visual, lean neo-noir novel, in the right hands, will make an exciting cinematic thriller. Fans of novels with LA. locales - Chandler, Ellroy - and films like as diverse as The Treasure of Sierra Madre, A Simple Plan, Lost Highway, To Live and Die in L.A., should find much to enjoy here. Re: Los Angles mystery/noir novels, Author Jonathan Kellerman noted "I'm going to expand the parameters from Los Angeles proper to southern California: LA isn't a city, it's a concept which applies anywhere in the Golden State where nice weather abounds, a chasm yawns between the haves and the have-nots, and delusional blind ambition is habitually confused with work ethic and wisdom." Marks' "Vortex" fits right into this tradition.

Paul's "White Heat" (2012) a neo-noir P.I. Duke Rogers murder mystery set in the aftermath of the 1992 L.A. riots is being re-released by Down & Out books on May 21, 2018, either as a paperback or e-book. Amazon has the paperback up for pre-order. White Heat won the first Shamus Award for Independent Private Eye Novel from the Private Eye Writers of America. "Broken Windows," the follow-up to "White Heat" is due out this fall.
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138 reviews3 followers
March 24, 2021
Written several years ago, this fast-paced thriller is different from other Marks books I've read. This author's versatility allowed him to create a character very different form his others, yet well-flashed-out and believable. As always, Marks takes us into L.A. in a way that anyone who's lived there can truly appreciate. The plot was quite original and thought-provoking.
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120 reviews27 followers
September 7, 2016
In high school they were called the Four Musketeers, and were stars in the secondary education firmament, with big plans of real fame and fortune to come. When Zach, one of the quartet, decides to go off to war, the other three go along. War engenders dramatic change in those it touches, and, lying wounded in Army hospitals, Zach rethinks his life lying ahead, and wants nothing more than to return to his Southern California home, his girl, and live a 'normal' life.

But, "you can't go home again." Having, while in Afghanistan, become involved in a scheme to acquire big wealth quickly, Zach finds himself trapped in a plan he no longer wants to be part of,and hunted by those he'd called friends. In a maelstrom of violence and betrayal this noir tale plays out against the backdrop of masterfully depicted Southern California, in its tattered and faded finery. Love of money is said to be the root of all [kinds of] evil, and it certainly bears its bitter fruit here. Paul Marks has written a noir thriller that is well-nigh un-put-downable.
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Author 2 books44 followers
September 1, 2015
Zach Tanner returns from a stint in the military as changed man. Physically changed from an injury, and mentally far different from the boy he’d been prior to leaving his home in Los Angeles.

Zach’s dreams and ambitions may have changed but those of the Jessie, the girl he left behind have not. She still dreams of fame, easy money, and the Hollywood Life.

But all is not what it seems with Zach and his homecoming quickly turns from awkward reunions with family and friends, to something else entirely. Zach finds himself sucked into situations he doesn’t want with friends he no longer recognizes.

VORTEX is a riveting noir novella that leads the reader through the darker side of Southern California. Highly recommended.
490 reviews10 followers
September 6, 2015
3.5 stars! When money is involved, you hare guaranteed to find out who your friends are, band of brothers or no! The scenes of Los Angeles come alive as returning from his tour of duty, (although recovering from his injuries sustained while serving in the Army), Zach Tanner finds his freedom may have just come at a higher cost. The enemy you know is deadlier than the enemy you don't. After all his time away, dragging his long time (supposed) girlfriend Jessie, into the danger befallen him, Zach is torn between having her by his side in order to protect her or to keep him sane. The race to safety just may kill them both as they are caught up in a vortex which is out of control.
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208 reviews23 followers
September 11, 2015
This relatively short novel is well-structured and paced, getting off to a quick start before settling in and moving the plot forward in what seems to be a familiar, if also unexpected direction. Though the endgame can be guessed early on, this is on balance an intriguing, nicely crafted, and quite satisfying crime noir. Read our full review, here: http://www.mysteriousreviews.com/myst...
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1,771 reviews24 followers
November 14, 2016
'Vortex' was one of those stories that pull you in and keep you guessing throughout. It was well written and the way it played out had quite a few twists and surprises. Each character was well defined and some of them truly took me by surprise. Zach thought he had the perfect plan, but he forgot to factor in greed. It came in the most unlikely people and yet, it came from the obvious people. Full of action, a lot of stand-offs, mystery and thrilling scenarios. A good add to your tbr list.
74 reviews4 followers
December 8, 2015
The action never stops in this thriller. The perfect crime book for the playstation/ xbox generation. I await the film!
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