I lost my review last night when GR said it was doing maintenance. Note to self: copy and paste!
Despite giving this a low rating, the author has some interesting ideas, and I would consider reading books of hers further down the line. Maybe. If the writing has improved and if the price is right.
I was drawn to this by the setting, primarily. It is 1922 on an Egyptian archaeological dig. The time is a little later than what I typically read, but I do think it is an interesting time period. I love archeological settings - in movies and in books. There were some interesting dynamics - Victorian versus modern thought, inter-racial pairings, strong family bonds, and a college-educated female archaeologist. So the ingredients were right for something delicious, but she forgot the key ingredient - telling us a story.
In the end, there were some crazy storylines, two-dimensional characters, and two MCs that are going at it like rabbits with no consideration to pregnancy. Given the ingredients, this could have been Devine, but it was a tall order. It would be difficult to bring all this together for a seasoned author, and this author felt very green in many ways. She relied too much on stereotypes and the descriptions felt Generic. Many of the plot twists felt implausible, especially dealing with the villain. Also, the twists were often telegraphed, rather than subtlety foreshadowed. All in all, it just wasn't a satisfying read, which is disappointing.