This is a hard book to rate - it was all over the place and I did not enjoy it as much as Book 1. I was so disillusioned by the halfway point, I abandoned the read, and I have not been motivated to get back to finishing the story.
I found the start of the book laborious and a bit dreary and it seemed as if the recap of their first meeting, etc. was a literal lifting of text from Book 1.
Some of the writing I enjoyed - there were some clever, witty and entertaining bon mots and exchanges, but many parts of the book drew away from these enjoyable moments. I enjoyed finding out more about their gifts, particularly Meg's astral travel and the description of his telepathic blending of thoughts and feelings
I found unbelievable his insta-lust/love, and his ongoing agonies of guilt about his lust I found tedious. His decision making and unstable moral compass was also very frustrating. His gift and mission was a big secret and then he became Viscount Blabbermouth who while on a secret mission to discover the location of a potentially lethal psychic weapon, spills the beans to his mark at the time of their first sexual encounter, just because he did not want to upset her…sigh…there are also places where he is angsting about wanting to be her lover and convince her he cared for her and would never betray her, but at this point he has already betrayed her by passing information he picked up from her telepathically…and he has betrayed MUSE by blabbing to her before he knew which side she was on.
The first half of the book was filled with the Hero’s and Heroine’s self-critical internal dialogues - her ongoing thoughts were filled with angst, self-recrimination, and guilt interspersed with episodes of him beating himself up - it began to hit me that all the characters in Books 1 and 2 seemed to debase themselves and go on and on about being unworthy. At one point I asked myself does everyone in this series hate themselves? All this negative self-talk did not generate sympathy, it just became annoying and tedious.
The scene I hated that caused me to finally bail, was the sexual encounter between his Nibs the Duke of Camden and Vesta. How he treated her from his place of self-hatred was disappointing and degrading. Up until then I thought as Head of the Order we were supposed to respect and admire him, and after that I just did not care about any of them enough to read on.
So I lost patience by the midpoint in the story and have abandoned it for a week, and can't motivate myself to pick it up again. I will shortly force myself to eventually finish it, just to complete it and remove it from my E-Reader. Current Rating: 1.5 Stars
Minor Peeves: I know this is partially a fantasy, but it is specifically set in the time of George III and the Regency period and I think it required a bit more research around details. At one point the author has Westfall calming the noise of everyone's thoughts by gardening – fantastic and sensible idea, but she has him re-potting African Violets. I have read many Regency romances and did not remember violets being popular at that time, so did a quick internet search and it turns out they were not discovered until 1892 and this story is ostensibly set sometime between 1811 and 1820. I had the same peeve with use of the phrase ‘taking something out of mothballs’ which felt out of place. Naphthalene the main ingredient found in mothballs was not discovered until 1819 and was not produced until 1826, so again a lack of details and research regarding the language and background of the Regency period was jarring and kept pulling me out of the story.