Let me say up front that this is not my favorite book in the series. In addition, this is not a humorous book. It has very little, if any, humor. I have read all the other books in the series, so eagerly anticipated reading this one, and I am beginning to wonder why. In this book, Jane Madison is having difficulty starting her witchcraft school. During her opening session, a satyr appears, nearly rapes one of her students and injures her lover warder David, while he and the other warders try to fight off the beast. Then, when she tries to have another class on the beach, a two-headed mythological beast appears, ready to tear another class. Jane and David know someone is behind this, but have to sift through clues to find out who that person is. Is it one of her students, as one of Jane’s arch enemies and another head witch implies? Is it the clerk of the court, with whom David has had a long-standing feud? Is it someone in one of the other covens who is jealous of Jane and her success or covets Jane’s extensive library collection? This book lacked the humorous, light touch of the other books. There was so much witchy jargon and information that I almost became overwhelmed by it, and found I was lost amid it all too often for my comfort. In the other books, I relished the sharp wit and normal actions of the characters. In this one, everyone always seemed very serious and concerned about everything, and acting unlike normal people we meet every day. This story came across as okay, but far too serious and too full of witchcraft jargon and practices/ideas for my tastes. Even the romance between Jane and David was lacking. I saw little or no chemistry between them—and this was between two persons soon to be married. Unlike any other engaged girl, Jane was not at all concerned about her wedding, though adding a bit about that now and then would have made the story more interesting, lightened the mood/tone, and would have broken up the inclusion of all the esoteric witchy stuff.
I was disappointed, to say the least. I was expecting a nice, paranormal romance, with a touch or humor here and there, and found a long story, filled with lots of witchy jargon and concepts as well as lots of strange incidents and events. From many of the reviews I read, this is what the other readers expected. I personally wish the author had stayed with her earlier light-hearted, romantic style and plot. I got through the book but only with some difficulty. The ending was interesting, though I had figured it out early on, and sets the stage for more books in the series to follow. I only hope the author returns to what she had previously, as I think that was a winning style and concept. I do know that, if she continues as she is, someone needs to stop saying this series is a humorous paranormal romance, because, based on this book, it isn’t. It will probably appeal to the reader who enjoys all the esoteric witchy stuff rather than the reader looking for a romantic humorous story. I received this from Library Thing to read and review.