I love, love, loved the last part of the story. The second-person talk gave me chills. The whole story is wrapped up so prettily that it felt like it was more than a short story. This was amazing.
Rosamund's short stories are all so beautifully written. Everything you want in a story, it's there. I'm always excited when a new short story comes up on her blog.
Just some extra information here. I first knew Rosamund Hodge when I stumbled across Cruel Beauty, which is one of the best retellings of Beauty and the Beast I have ever read, and soon I was searching for more of her writing. Then on her website, there were all these short stories based on myths and fairytales, and I started reading through all of them. Almost all of them got me close to tears of awe. Rosamund Hodge is one talented writer.