War in the Hidden Vale – Josh Reynolds (4 stars)
I see Josh Reynolds’ name attached to more AoS fiction than any other BL alum I can think of, and I’m beginning to see why some internet wags have nicknamed the fiction “Age of Reynolds”. No gripes here, as he gave us Gardus the Steel Soul, quickly stepping forth as the foremost true hero in the Stormhosts (though I have not given up on Thostos Bladestorm).
Vale is the immediate aftermath of The Gates of Dawn, and begins with a bang, with Gardus running for his life (both the fleshly and the spiritual) through the hellscape of Nurgle’s Garden, with the ever-blathering Bolathrax hot on his heels. It’s unusual to see someone of Astartes-level stature in BL fiction decide that discretion is the better part of valor, and it lends a lot of truth to his Relictor Morbus’ assessment that Gardus’ great strength is a leader is that he will bend rather than break, and do what must be done rather than merely follow orders.
Gardus makes it out, and after a dual narrative watching the able Lord-Castellant Lorrus Grymn assume command of the Steel Souls chamber and carry on making war to liberate the Realm of Ghyran and Gardus’ escape, we reunite with the knowledge that the descendants of the old Wood Elves and their allies from the Old World are now the Sylvaneth, and that the Everqueen Alarielle, who I last saw in Bill King’s writing, is now a goddess. (And when she shows up, she doesn’t disappoint.)
This one has many of the same characters as Gates, and the Nurglish war-host assailing the Realm of Life has far and away the most personality of any of the Chaotic characters that have shown up so far in AoS. Their informality and sense of humor remain a great foil to the stoic and straight-laced Stormcasts (though these are starting to show a proper sense of humor as well), and I think there is better balance here between the power levels of the two foes. The Hallowed Knights and their fellows are shown as far more formidable than the Hammerhands were in their initial showing, but the children of Nurgle are no slouches, and their alliance with the Skaven (especially what I assume to be Clan Pestilens under new management and marketing). The rat-daemon Vermalanx is a creative new character, and the Nurglish host’s admittedly difficult yet persistent efforts to pull together in service to their loathsome deity are a good tonic to the sometimes heavy-handed “Chaos will always turn on itself” stuff that is thrown about a little too freely in BL fiction.
The fights are good. Particularly enjoyable are Morbidex Twiceborn’s duel with the Prosecutor Tegrus of the Sainted Eye (“Oh, buboes…Ow. Fine. Fine. Best…best two out of three.”) and the final clash with the Nurglish host, where Lorrus Grymn shows that he too has the courage to do what must be done when he sends Gardus home to Sigmaron rather than let him be taken by Bolathrax, or when Allarielle the Radiant Queen decides that she’s had enough of these walking tumors in her garden, thank you very much. She and the Lady of Vines send some gender balance into the early mix of AoS, though I know there’s more on the way.
A little more sober and downbeat, what with the end being Gardus is gone and Allarielle is forced from her place of safety. She’s not particularly happy with the outcome of Sigmar’s overtures to join the fight, and it’s likely that her sylvaneth will be scrapping with other Order forces from time to time (it’s a wargame-based setting, gotta justify internecine fighting).
Again, looking forward to seeing Gardus and the Hallowed Knights in their upcoming novels, but I wouldn’t be opposed to more short fiction as the Realmgate Wars grind on.
The Eldritch Fortress – Guy Haley (4 stars)
All right, back to the hunt for Ghal Maraz. Haley gets to return to the tale of Thostos Bladestorm and his clash with Ephyrx the Ninth Disciple. Nothing will keep him from his vengeance, now that he is reforged anew…except the entrance of GW’s Chosen One, Vandus Hammerhand. Sigh.
This one builds a bit of life into the otherwise empty wastes of the Hanging Valleys of Anvrok and the Realm of Metal, what with the story of the fall of the city of Elixia and its last protector, Celemnis the Sword-maiden. We still have yet to see really any of the peoples of the Mortal Realms that the Stormcasts were forged to protect and liberate. Except that nameless tribe on the run from Korghos Khul’s Goretide way back at the beginning of AoS fiction as a whole. Where in the devil is everybody? Oh well, seems like at one time, over half a millennium ago, there may have been nice people worth saving. Sure hope there’s still some around somewhere…
There’s some fun things here, what with Dracothion’s battle with Argentine, providing the Stormcasts’ frantic climbing and battling with a literal battle between dragon-gods as backdrop. Only AoS would do this. We bring this story to its inevitable conclusion, as Kairos Fateweaver triumphs over his treacherous disciple, and…ye gods, is that Korghos Khul? Seriously? Are he and Vandus actually some kind of BL-fiction tag team? Ugh. Korghos has now showed up three-for-three in every story where Vandus Hammerhand is a viewpoint character. At least here he’s little more than a catalyst for the downfall of the Chaotic forces here, with his usual lunatic belligerence taking but a few moments to work its divisive magic and setting the Tzeentchians and the Khornates at each others’ throats. I’m glad he didn’t take over – if Vandus is going to be the Chosen One he’s so heavily marketed as, he needs to take on all sorts of threats, not just a Khornate champion with the regenerative powers of Wile E. Coyote.
So Vandus does take over, as you’d expect him to. Thostos has apparently lost a lot of his inner philosopher since being reforged into living sigmarite or something, and spends most of his time ignoring all of his military training and running headlong into battle, endangering his allies…rather like a Khornate berserker, actually. Hope Khul isn’t hiring. It’s fun to watch Thostos no-sell some of the baddies’ powers due to his cool new metal skin, but I miss the original version who bothered to think. We get a cool moment with Ionus Cryptborn, who has apparently kicked the Nagash-visions to the curb and has gone back to being mysterious, menacing, and powerful, as he should properly be. You’re gonna have to work harder than a splitting headache to put down the Lord-Relictor, kids. He and the Big S splat my least favorite AoS character, the idiotically titled “Bloodsecrator” Threx Skullbrand in fine style, right in the middle of a frothing speech about how Threx is stronger than Sigmar himself. Cue the divine lightning, cue a savage put-down from Ionus, cue a long fall punctuated by (hopefully) burning to death in a river of molten silver. So passes Threx Skullbrand. May he rot forever in the Dustbin of Forgetfulness, and may his title never pass the lips of mortal-kind ever again.
So we get round to Vandus and Thostos, who pulls himself together long enough to remember what they came to do, and they face down none other than nine Lords of Change led by Kairos Fateweaver himself. Okay. Now that has potential. And sure enough, with a little help from an angry-at-being-ill-used Ephryx, Vandus finally does something worthy of his assigned Golden Boy (aha) status and wallops the ever-living bird-mess out of Kairos Fateweaver the Great Shatterer (I dig the new nickname), while Thostos, Calanax, Ionus, and a fistful of SE hammer-carriers bat clean-up on the rest of the lesser Lords of Change, with Calanax and Ionus each bagging one single-handedly. Well struck.
And so Vandus finally, after three appearances, has a deed truly worthy of remembrance. He has slain a Lord of Change, the Hammer of Sigmar blazing in his grasp, and he screams his defiance at Tzeentch himself, warning the Changer of Ways who stole the hammer would one day meet his end beneath its power. Defying a god. Now that is some bold movement. And further, he has scored the most unequivocal and significant victory yet of the Realmgate Wars, having reclaimed none other than the legendary Ghal Maraz and brought it back to its master.
This is a major moment, and boosts my score a little higher than I would have given otherwise. Vandus did well, but I wondered why he had to take over when we had a perfectly interesting and capable hero (at least previously) in Thostos, and it was a groaner to see Korghos Khul show up again. The only technical issue I had with this story is that Anvrok’s geography and placement is so strange and unearthly (which is cool, and original), that it’s sometimes difficult to tell what’s going on, especially when we’re moving at the usual double-quick BL short-fiction pace.
Worth reading, especially because of the significance of the happenings.