Love the idea, and loved the personal stories, as well as most of the exegesis. I think my main problem with this one wasn't the writing or the overall point, but the structure. I would have been helped by working backwards. Make the claim that the church is a pilgrim church then back it up with chapters of exegesis. This book does it in the reverse order. What kept me turning the page was not so much the claims that were being made, but the personal anecdotes that Niringiye shared. I would have liked a little bit more clarity about the role of doctrine, but I know that Niringiye is trying to paint with the broadest brush possible. I think that is very helpful, but how do we hold to these things and still exclude JW's or Mormons. Of course, there's an appeal to apostolicity, but they would of course have counter claims of apostolicity (as wrong as they might be,) so I again turn to a "doctrine has to be important" position. Not that Niringiye says it isn't but I would have liked him to stress that more and just point out what is essential in faith. On the plus side his focus on place and context was really helpful.