This is the first short story I've read Lucia Jordan. Even though, I liked her writing overall, I felt like the last 30% of Electrify felt rushed and jarring... I think that there needed to be more of a transition between Joanna and Zack just becoming acquainted and rushing into having sex... Especially when Zack so urgently and savagely has sex with Joanna who has been in love with Trent, Zack's friend from college.
Then, of course, the cliffhanger ending is not my thing either. I feel like cliffhanger endings are only a ploy to get one to buy the rest of the series.