I found this at a free library and thought it would be a cozy summer read filled with beautiful scenery and complex family dynamics, so I took it home.
The book starts off with an introduction to Matt, the MC, and gives background on his history with the special memory box. There's some throwback insight to Matt being a jerk to his little sister about how SHE wouldn't remember their dad--only HE was old enough to, but she didn't care because she's the perfect embodiment of unshakeable happiness. There's a weird blend of affection crossed with unfounded competition toward her, though I guess some siblings are like that. I figure this will be relevant to the character development.
Moving on, there's brief mention of a phone call between the siblings that introduces Lottie and Milo as people who had a tremendous impact on the well-being of their lives. Matt calls Lottie and arranges a visit in half an hour, setting the stage to transition the narrative to Lottie and Milo. These folks are boring as they come. "Lottie tracked Milo to the garden room"--uhh what? I could understand that phrasing if they lived on a massive homestead with an abundance of plants and distance to search through, but come on. The old man is sitting in a chair. 'Tracking' him in this context sounds really out of place. She tells him of Matt coming--"isn't that fun? He'll be with us in time for supper." *yawn.* Again, the context is not that deep. Some blah-blah-blah speculating about how Matt is probably in for a disaster with his next book because the first one was too successful for anyone to expect better than garbage to follow.
Lottie mentions tea, then gets distracted looking out the window and seeing someone else making a surprise visit--oh! Its Venetia. Who is that? They crap-talk her eating habits before she arrives, commenting not to let her know there's cake. Lottie tells her to go 'find' Milo, as if he's regularly getting lost or something. Why not just tell the woman where he is if she's being instructed to go to him while she prepares tea and cake? Venetia melodramatically claims intense hunger and is promptly offered said cake. She wails and whines over--sorry, what? And Milo says some some stuff about mixed breed dog names. More judgement gets cast, this time on Matt and his sister's mother for grieving differently than others after her husband died. Oh yeah--back to the tea and cake, Lottie stops on the way to delivering it, pondering over some more judgements of Milo reminiscing V's youthful beauty while V wails sympathies over pathetic, desperate Clara. Wait, who is Clara? Milo 'breaks the spell' with some dumb comment about how old age isn't for sissies. Something blah-blah-blah, V is an insecure older woman Lottie tries to be kind to, mat''s visit is announced again, then we delve into describing the flowers and slip into a description of how Lottie feels ghosts in the garden and has always had this special 6th sense she connected with Tom over. Who's Tom?? Oh, he's Matt's dad, ok. Lucky we get to know who *he* is because I still don't know who Venetia or Clara are.
THEN we find out Milo was married to the elder sister of Lottie (Charlotte--HE specially gave her that ugly nickname. Charlotte is a BEAUTIFUL name) but its ok that she's his ex now because there was always a special connection between Lottie and Milo. He was even sweet to her back when Sara, the elder sister, first brought her home. Lets briefly mention and brush off the fact there was, not only a 13-year age gap, but LOTTIE WAS ONLY TEN WHEN THEY MET. So he was 23 and they had a special connection then, hey? And his mom 'adopted' Lottie after her and her sister's mom died, even giving her her own room at the house and everything. Yeah, that's...not weird at all...???
Anyway, that's only to page 20. Its all over the place, its boring as HECK (sorry, author), and the characters don't feel 'introduced'. It feels more like I'm spying on people I've never met and getting footnotes on their history. This is the first book I've EVER looked at the end to see what the 'big secret' was. Secret twins. Shocker. Kinda figured it might be as such when I picked it up, though thought the journey through the story would be worth it. Its not. I just cant keep my attention on it and I typically get through books in 2-6 days depending on length because my attention span for novels is fairly reliable when the book is even half decent. I even tried skimming through a bunch of the other pages to see if it gets better and its taxing how boring it is. DNF.