*ARC furnished for a complete and honest review*
The Princess, the Pea and the Night of Passion is the standard fairy tale with a sensual flare. A woman claiming to be a princess arrives at the kitchen door with her servant, soaked and in need of shelter. The prince happens upon the encounter and demands his servant let her in. She and her maiden are offered dry clothes and rooms for the night. Once alone, the princess reveals she’s on the run from her father’s men because he has betrothed her to a wealthy, sixty-year-old sultan. Destined to be one of many wives, bound in a loveless marriage with only occasional visits from her husband, the princess yearns to be with one man, one who’s passion and love belongs only to her.
After a dinner filled with a constant barrage of questions from the queen implying she doubts her royal blood, the princess retired to her chamber only to be greeted with twenty mattresses stacked to the ceiling, and a twist of the lock. The male servant explains it is to guard her virtue. Once she settles in, the prince emerges, hidden in her room, and the mutual attraction builds between the two.
The author presented full descriptions, concise enough to give a good visual, but not so long that I wanted to skip over the setting details. Her characters were well-developed and interesting. The love story unfolded in a nice pace, and although I didn't quite buy that they were in love and not just lust, I enjoyed the witty repartee between the two.
The dialogue was strong and smacked of the time period, with a few exceptions. On occasion, the MC would speak as a contemporary. Not many, but a scant few, and they popped me right out of the story.
Authors work hard to design their covers or pay a great deal of money to artists to design it with one intention - to grab readers. That’s the first step, isn't it? Well, that and the blurb. With the two silhouettes devoid of faces with the hands on a shoulder, the cover didn't grab me and I think it does the author a disservice.
This is an erotica short story, so I expected the sex to be hot. It boarded on the sensual rather than blistering. Although I wouldn't deem it purple prose, I was disappointed that more passion didn't leap from the page. The acts and feelings were there, but they were glossed over with reactions of the princess which kept me as a reader at a distance.
I applaud the author for crafting an erotic short story with vibrant characters, good pacing, tempered with a splash of humor which I thoroughly enjoyed. I just wish the sex (which is the crux of an erotic story) had been more engaging. It didn't really scream “erotica” to me, but I did enjoy the writing. Perhaps a change in genre would work. The Princess, the Pea and the Night of Passion was a good romance, but erotica? Not quite there for me.