I wanna give the start more than 2, but the end deserves far less.
Grrr... It started well. Fairly normal woman heading for her fairy tale that's about to go wrong... which will be lucky, because her real fairy tale is just walking thru the door etc. It was pretty heavy on the mis-communications and dumb for the story mentality type stuff, & an increasing number of convenient bits that pop up and then vanish, with no regards to how they are written into the book, but it was still enjoyable for the most part in the first half or so.
Somehow, the h had actually spent years with her antiH and not realised that neither of them gave a damn about the other, knew a thing about the other, or had the slightest interest in the other. The antiH saw her as an almost acceptable Step-Ford Wife (SFW) who would be cut and moulded into the perfect stepford wife after the wedding, with no thought to the pain and suffering it would cause her, because he simply didn't give a shit. She was an accessory. Asshole right! But our h wasn't a hell of a lot better. She was so focused on her fairy tale that she barely listened to him when he repeatedly made 'SFW' comments (like her selling her baking business - which is almost another limb to her personality, or her new social routines and friends etc), because she was stuck on 'my fairy tale would never really expect me to go thru with that'. And much later in the book (when it truly disintegrates), more and more comes out that they really spent no time together and knew nothing about each other, but they were getting married! Anyway.
Now, our antiH is caught cheating and still expects his future SFW to get her ass down the aisle. So does her mother (who's another convenient character who really has no place in the book). When that doesn't work, the antiH starts showing up places and tells people she's his fiancée (all the while, he's continued to date other people), and she can have her fun but she's 'his' and he's found someone to buy her business!?! Again, he's more of a convenience than anything else as he's never really part of the flow, just the 'drama', but while they have it out a few times and he escalates in aggression when she refuses to play SFW and follow orders now that she's woken up from her fairy tale daze, she never really deals with him. He's throwing threats and bailing her up in public and telling everyone she's lousy in bed and she just kind of says jerk and wanders off? At the very least, why isn't she pointing out that there's not many woman who bother to get worked up over a once on Sunday's schedule and it's easier to take care of herself when his five minutes are up type thing? Besides, he's a big lawyer and a public name, if she's against antagonising him, why isn't she asking his advise on what she should take with her to file for a restraining order... she'd hate to think of the partners, colleagues, clients & opposition seeing sloppy records coming up every time they googled him? But no, he's just there when he's there, and forgotten when he's not. He's never 'sorted' as such. The H actually decks the antiH and that the last we see of him, but that's unlikely. He'd probably press charges or try and use it to force the h down the aisle or some such shit, but again, the story is simply being 'told' by this point. Kind of 'I need to get the book finish so all of this stuff happens, see', and the antiH magically pulls his rich, entitled, elitist, narcissistic head in and slinks away into obscurity. Ah huh.
As for the H... Well THREE TIMES he slinks away after mis-communications. Not bothering to clear anything up or ask a question. Even simple questions could have given him enough to at least let him know that not all was as it seems. Then he could have decided to dig or not from there. But no, he just runs, every time. Then, when he does come back, he says 'I don't want to, if I could stay away I would, but I can't, so I'm here'. So he doesn't even want to be there, but can't stop himself, real charming. Now don't get me wrong, most of the rest of the H is fine. Their magic moment and the way he loves her for who she is and not in spite of it and all that jazz. He treats her well and I suspect they'll be golden (all of this togetherness is happening in the 'all of this stuff is happening to them, see, I wrote it there on the page' portion of the book) 🙄
And then there's the fact that we are covering the stories for all four girls. When I started reading and saw more for all of them I actually thought 'I wished they'd separate do them into separate books, I'd love to see it as a series (either same/similar timeframe or one after the other), but it is actually working just seeing bits of them in the one main story'. Anyway, by 3/4 I was truly wishing they'd stayed separate. And that crap at then end! OMG. BAH! It's worth reiterating that the last 1/3 to 1/2 of the book is just an endless reveal of these 'woman/children' showing how immature they truly are and how badly they can truly behave while blaming other people for their issues or denying that they having problems.
So, we go from ignoring the silly bits to grinding our teeth at the fact that the book has become evidence that ménage trios can apparently have love children. In this case, the relevant offenders (and I do mean offenders) are the 'roided up versions of
The Bold & The Beautiful (on a really cheesy day), Dr Phil & an Over the Top Preacher
. Seriously, at some point, AMW stopped writing the story and just started telling us what was happening... in between the l o n g w i n d e d preaching monologues. Not to mention, all the girls when from adult woman with problems that they were facing, to whiney little 'bitches' (no, I'm not being nasty, just descriptive) who needed a good ass kicking. One of them spent the entire book whining about how 'the boy was too shy to ask her out and it was his duty to want to ask her out so she shouldn't have to grow a set and make the first move'... Only to find out... when she was bitching that he still hasn't made a move so maybe she should accept a date with someone else... That THEY HAD BEEN SEEING EACH OTHER FOR MONTHS (including him caring for her thru health issues), but every time he wanted to talk about anything, SHE would take a job out of town and do a runner... Only for him to insist they leave now and sort this shit out... and her to ditch him and leave town again... because she's a whiney little bitch who's never met a vertebra she couldn't run away from. Jesus. I seriously did like this book at the start, and was annoyed, but ok at 3/4, but by the end.... GRRRRRRRRRR