2.75 stars
It is with great sadness that I tell you that I did not like this book. I closed this book disappointed that I just couldn't like it because it has everything going for it. I'll start off with some of the positives:
B.A.D. A.S.S. Cover. I mean just look at it for goodness sakes! Everything about it screams FIERCE. So, at least it will look pretty on my shelves!
The concept of this book is an amazing one, I went into this with an expectation that it was going to give me Emperor's Edge vibes, but unfortunately that was not the case.
I honestly think this could be an amazing book if it went through a few more editing rounds because the idea the author has going - clockwork gods - is an original one that kept me curious, but the world building and characterization just killed it for me.
So let's start with the characters. Hell, there is a band of misfits and they love a little snark, and so automatically I'm hooked. Okay, while that all sounds beautiful, I didn't feel a connection to any of the characters. We're dropped into this world and everything felt foreign and disconnected. We have our protagonist, Janet, who is a supposed badass with a metal arm (I LOVE that concept!), but i was confused because Janet, for the longest time, kept threatening people with her metal arm and she talked about her metal arm, but I had no idea how the heck she got her metal arm! I felt like that should've been something mentioned early on in the book so I wouldn't have been so confused. Then, we learn that she's living in the slums, but we have no idea WHY she's living in the slums or any of her circumstances! I do remember early on Janet saying that she lived with her mom in an apartment, but I was still confused about Janet's past for the longest time.
The other characters in the squad all felt so stereotypical, the dialogue was bland and impersonal, I couldn't pick out any memorable lines. Most of the dialogue fell along the lines of
"Hey, what's up?"
"Oh, not much. How about you?"
"Oh, nothing, let's go kick ass today."
"Okay."
"Okay."
And then there is Itzarua (totally did not spell that right), who is supposed to be a CLOCKWORK GOD, whose supposed to have live for hundreds of years, but he acts like a 16 year old boy! Seriously, where is the appeal in this? I wish he would've been more of a dark, mature character because i just couldn't get aboard his train lol, again I loved the concept of his character, but I still felt him to be underwhelmingly developed.
Last thing I'll mention, world building. In some ways it was good, and in some ways it was meh. Again, we're just dropped in this world expected to figure things out and know who people are which only left me confused. I LOVE LOVE LOVE the idea of the clockwork gods, it's original and anyone who knows me, knows that i'm in love with all things steampunk, so I will give the author credit for the unique idea! I believe the world will expand in book two, but i don't know if i'll stick around to read it, maybe on a kindle, unless the cover is as gorgeous as the first, maybe then I'll buy a paperback copy.
I'm really sad this wasn't a win for me, I hoped this to be the next Sora's Quest or Emperor's Edge for me, but it just wasn't. Maybe, in the future, if this ever goes through more editing rounds, and this story gets republished, I might consider rereading the story because I'll say it again and again, I'm intrigued by the concept Hyndman is going after! While this wasn't for me, maybe this will be for you! It's short and pretty fast-paced so maybe some of you will end up enjoying it!