This is suppose to be a murder mystery but the suspense never is developed in this short tale. It's a very short read and I couldn't even finish the book. The plot isn't developed well. The characters were one dimensional. There is no depth to the story or the characters. For me, the story is flat. The dialogue needs work but everything about this book has no teeth. I don't like the main character, Evan. He's lazy, superficial and has no spark of interest. For Pete's sake, he's a security guard. He's just an ordinary person who has no redeemable qualities. Evan doesn't report the dead person for two lame excuses, he hates paperwork and he has plans to meet up with some girl after work. For me, his excuses don't appear believable. And the wow factor doesn't exist in this book. I am confused which voice the author is using. The author is writing in third person but she keeps throwing in first person internal-dialogue. Big no-no in creative writing. Either the POV is written in first person or third. There can't be any mixing of the two with the same character. Pick a lane. I'd think that she should know this rule since she has been dabbling in creative writing for thirty years. Also, I think the author is trying to make this story an adult read even though the reading level is about an eight grade level. Evan curses a lot, a bit excessive. He used douche bag far too many times. Not only is it redundant but it is odd to for a grown man to use this word. Douche bag is used mostly by teenagers. The story needs work, the characters need work and the plot lacks the required suspense to launch this book off. There is no wow factor in this story to hold my interest. Sorry, but this short book failed miserably.