What if a routine trip to the grocery store could change the trajectory of your life forever?Just One Cup is the first in a series of short stories that revolve around the life of Benjamin (Ben) Jones. Ben is a talented and well educated young man who has a lot going for him. He is very successful professionally but is still trying to find his way in the world. Ben is a Christian man but because of his talents, gifts and abilities, sometimes forgets that God is in ultimate control of everything. While doing his routine grocery shopping, Ben never expected that he would leave with something much more valuable than groceries.The steps of a good man are ordered by the Lord. When we trust in God and are faithful to God, He will sometimes bring great things into our lives unexpectedly. Just One Cup is a story of how God can take the ordinary and make it spectacular.Download now to read this entertaining Christian short story!
Unfortunately this writer's skills in this book were not very enticing. The writing was way too wordy and the interactions between characters seemed too forced and unnatural. The separation between action and dialogue wasn't really there. I feel this needs more improvement if the author were in need of some constructive criticism.
Very naive writing style with a lot of inconsequential internal dialogue. Inconsistent tense is a big problem. There are a number of loose ends and the story ends a little abruptly.
The verb tense kept changing from past to present for no apparent reason. If one wanted to see how the two met in conjunction with the rest of their story this very quick read might be helpful.
Enjoyed what I read thus far and looking forward to the next release. I liked the scriptures that were included and seeing how the main character was being led by the Holy Spirit. I received inspiration even though I was disappointed it was so short !