CAUTION: SPOILERS WITHIN
Devour is one of those examples of the old adage, "Never judge a book by its cover." And that's exactly what I made the mistake of doing. I saw the cover, a massive maw rising from the water to close upon a cruise ship, and thought, "Ooooh, this is going to be SCARY!" To its credit, it did at least start off well. A giant sea creature hunts ice fishermen and smashes through the ice to get at them. Unfortunately, the pace it set could not keep up with the rest of the book.
First thing's first. The creature depicted on the cover is nowhere near the size that's described in the book. Although the creature is quite large, larger than a great whale, I did feel like this was a bait and switch. The main problem with this book, though, is that the creature feels more of an afterthought than the focal point of the story.
There's this whole subplot that takes place on the cruise liner Nokomis, and the author spends so much time trying to weave this illegal card game story together that by the time the story reverts back to the monster, whatever tension he's supposed to be building starts to dissipate. It's also not helped by the fact that just about every human character he has are cookie cutter generic types from action and horror genres. I actually moaned in detest when he devalued his main character Brian's shipmate Gilly when Brian recovered Gilly's body from the water and said, "I just don't like losing things."
This book is also horribly edited. I have to question some reviews on here that state this book is well-written and well-edited. It is not. There are countless spelling errors, missing and extra words, and he even manages to misspell one of his own character's names. There's a little girl named Taylor, and on one page, it's spelled with an O and on the very next page, it's spelled with an E! Was this even edited past first draft?!
I wasn't scared at all by this book. To be fair, it's very hard for a book to scare me, because I need audio and visual cues to really help immerse me, which is why movies and games are far better served for this genre, but this book didn't even make me uneasy. I suppose the main reason why is because so much time was spent on that damn stupid illegal card game! Bored the heck out of me! Also, the author just nonchalantly brings in another monster for a last minute scare tactic and just as quickly kills the monster off letting it be forgotten. It did have a cool ending when Brian killed the monster, even though it was highly unbelievable.
So much potential gone to waste in this book. If you want to read horror at sea, read Steve Alten's Meg series instead.