This looked like a cute book about a close group of friends. Despite it's summery looking cover, only the first two chapters take place over summer, and then it switches to her starting a new school. Which wasn't very fun to read about.
The pages are blindingly white, which I really don't like in a book, and have only encountered a couple times. I think it makes it look cheap.
It was clear from the beginning that Loch would be the romantic interest, what with Cowboy being hung up on his crush, & Ollie seemed too goofy.
I didn't like Loch's real name Micah, or that hers was Toni, with an I, as if that's somehow short for Tonya.
I'm a tomboy, I love books about tomboy heroines, but she was a little too tomboy for me, with all the burping, and gross snot scenes.
I found this book pretty stereotypical. Emma, the tomboy who burps and drools, and is messy, has a 'banging body,' big boobs, nice legs. Go figure.
They all compliment each other on their burps. It was a bit much.
I didn't find this group of guys very...swoon-worthy. They're a little nerdy. I wouldn't be attracted to them. What with the hunting sea monsters stuff. Seems a bit lame. I also found it hard to believe high school teens were going around looking for this mythical sea -or lake- creature. Then again, I remember a guy in high school who believed in Big Foot, so you never know.
We're given their nicknames first, so it's impossible to remember real names.
This is one of the cases where characters have a distinct smell. Micah magically smells like vanilla, and we're not ever told why. Does he use vanilla shower gel? Does his mom have vanilla softener?
I didn't like that Loch dated some girl for two years, and was in love with her, and apparently wasn't over her. I hated that Loch said he should get over his ex and that Emma was cute. If he likes Toni wtf is he doing?
I hated hated HATED that Emma and Loch kissed. That Toni was stupid enough to offer her friend to play pretend boyfriend, when she could have chosen Ollie. Ollie should have been the one to fake-date Emma, cause he thought she was beautiful. When Loch asked if he had to kiss her and Toni says no kissing, and he says is that a request or a demand, I thought the matter was settled. Emma grinds against him dancing, he whispers in her ear, has his fingers in her hair, all bad enough. Toni tells her her ex-boyfriend saw them together, she then drags Toni outside to see his reaction. They all go out, for some reason, to find him puking in the bushes. He looks up and sees them, and for some unexplainable reason Emma grabs Loch and kisses him. And he didn't even back away, just stands there letting it happen. Kevin already saw them together dancing and heard they were a couple,and now he's puking, so why make him more jealous? Why would you do that? It made no sense. And Kevin didn't even sound like he wanted her back, that he was remotely jealous. He said she was clingy!
Then we have to read about Shauna kissing his cheek and nibbling his ear.
As if Toni didn't make a mistake with Emma and Loch, and can't figure out how she very clearly likes Loch and is jealous, she goes and offers all her friends up to the entire school. Like every girl there has boy trouble. Just because she has platonic relationships with them doesn't mean other girls want platonic relationships with them, too. How does she know more girls won't be kissing Loch, or her other friends?
I was beyond annoyed when Loch says he's had sex in his car while wearing a tuxedo and is the only non-virgin in their group. I wished Toni liked Ollie or Cowboy. I also wished someone had kissed her, so Loch could have saw like she had to watch him w/ other girls.
Of course the heroine is a virgin with no experience, hasn't dated anyone. I'm surprised Toni had even kissed two guys. But of course both encounters sucked. Heroines can't have pleasurable kisses/sex with anyone besides the hero.
The guys didn't even comment or react to her sexy Halloween look or that she was dressing more girly. So what was the point?
Toni acted like none of the fake dating could turn real. I didn't like that Cowboy was involved, because he had a crush on someone else.
Emma seemed really fickle, the way she wanted Kevin back, then asked if she could date Micah, then moved on to Ollie. I kept waiting for Toni to say something about it, to tell her off, for their friendship to end in an argument.
Emma was the typical friend who gives you a makeover, does your nails and hair.
Emma was in nearly every scene. She spent more time with her than her supposed best friends. I was annoyed by Emma, I wanted some space from her and never got it. After she kissed Loch and wanted to date him, I didn't really like her.
Emma burps just like Toni and has never had a girl for a friend either. Which isn't even remotely believable. Shauna also didn't have girl friends, but that makes sense because she's mean.
What about Lemon? Isn't she friends with Lemon? Anyone from grades K-11?
She isn't friends with guys so that means she's never had friends period.
It was obvious it was Micah who was leaving the bandannas at her dad's grave.
There was never a complete scene or real bonding moment, or a real conversation. All the scenes were short. Conversations that started and then stopped shortly after. Like the author couldn't write a complete scene.
This group of friends didn't seem that close to me. I mean the relationship started to fall apart the second she transferred to the academy. From lack of communication. There was a major lack of communication all around. They all needed to sit around and talk, but they never did. About their choice of schools, about their friendship.
It took Toni entirely too long to realize she loves Micah, like 220 pages long. Her hands get sweaty, her heart races when he's near, yet it takes her an incredibly long time to realize she has feelings for him. So annoying.
I didn't get the vibe that Toni wanted to be more girly. She all of a sudden says she wants to paint her nails and wear a skirt. It didn't feel authentic. She seemed to like being one of the guys, being a tomboy. She wasn't even insulted that Cowboy said she wasn't a girl.
I found it ridiculous Toni spent the book saying Brian thinks teenagers are irresponsible then at her first weekend home alone she throws a party and two people get sick in the house.
Of course the stepdad turns out to be a nice guy, just wanting to bond with her. Another predictable element.
This ended on a pretty sudden note. There could have been an epilogue or something.
This was so inconclusive it wasn't even funny.
How long did Loch like Toni? Why, if he liked her, did he date someone for two years and have sex with them?
What is her friendship gonna be like with Ollie and Cowboy? It wasn't even repaired in here.
Will her and Loch end up going to different schools?
We needed less scenes with Emma and nail painting and running the business and more with the boys, & the person she ends up with. I also didn't understand why her and Emma had to wait together while the boys were on their 'dates.' Or why they needed to be involved at all. Was Emma there to do wardrobes? Why wait up when all the guy is doing is taking someone on a date and then dropping them off? They don't even need to see him that night, just wait for their report. It made no sense.
We don't know if they'll last, how it will affect the other guys, how they'll manage going to two different schools. Where was Cowboy going to school at? I can't even remember. The characters needed more fleshing out. They weren't developed enough.
After all the fuss Ollie made he's giving up snowboard camp for Emma.
This isn't even remotely as cute as the cover looks.
There really should be three guys on the cover. They left one of them out.
I couldn't get a real good sense of what the guys looked like. Just Micah's vague square hero whiskered chin. The other two guys were even more vague.
It didn't seem like Ollie was Emma's type or that Cowboy was Katie's type. We dk how Ollie(Luke) got his nickname.
This was refreshing in that these characters weren't manwhores. Her guy friends were more shy and hadn't slept with anyone, excluding Loch. Of course the guy she likes ins't a virgin. Why can't the hero of books be virgins? Can anyone answer me that?
This was humorous in places, but I can't say it was enjoyable. The pole-dancing scene made me laugh. That was the funniest scene, and her nervous itchy butt was funny too.
Toni sort of matures and grows, realizing her mistake in the business, how you can't control people or put them into envelopes. But I feel like the author missed a whole angle there. I thought Toni would end up calling Emma on being fickle, how she'd tell Lemon not to lie to her parents about her sexuality, how that wouldn't solve anything, how she'd tell Shauna to be honest with the stalkery guy who liked her instead of using a fake date to keep him away. But no. She dropped the ball there.
Also was she trying to make a switch from tomboy to girly? Why couldn't she stay a tomboy? She ripped her shorts up, for some reason. Not really sure what that signified. This could have handled the changes in her past to her future better, and bridged the gap better.
If Emma was blackmailing Shauna by telling her she'd let the school know she used their service, then why did Shauna end up implicating Emma in the scheme?
Also, I found it ridiculous that Toni blamed herself for Ollie getting beat up. Just because she started the service didn't mean that was her fault. That was just a crazy random scenario with Lemon's gf's crazy brother.
Loch didn't even see Champ when Toni spots him at the end, so he doesn't get it on video. Although it kinda showed how in that moment he cared more about her than his hunt for the legendary creature. And Toni realizes it's enough knowing it's real or something like that, and that they're the legends.
I'm glad I got done with this; I wouldn't have wanted to read this more than two days. In the end, it didn't live up to my expectations, to the cute cover it has, and I'm disappointed by it.