What if Elizabeth wasn't content to read Darcy's letter and suffer her revolution of feeling in silence? This short story begins as Darcy storms out of the front door of Hunsford Cottage after his proposal, shocked at Elizabeth's words in refusal and angry at the injustice in them. Still angry, he pens his letter and forces it into Elizabeth's hand the next morning. She reads his letter, and is immediately sent into turmoil of her own.
This is where we break from canon. Colonel Fitzwilliam encounters Elizabeth in the woods, and a chance conversation convinces Elizabeth that he knows about the proposal, and a letter from Elizabeth will solve everything. She runs home to write it and find a way to pass it to Darcy unnoticed. Luckily, Darcy is not leaving immediately and she finds her chance.
Despite this being a short story, Darcy's and Elizabeth's angst after the proposal was well developed. Not much time is spent rehashing things we know by heart, like the contents of the letter or Elizabeth's entire thought process after reading it. But we do get to see how Darcy felt after the proposal, and what led to his letter. In the original novel, Elizabeth's change of heart takes months for her to go from denial, to acceptance, to reluctant admiration, to gratitude, and then to love. Darcy also takes some time to realize his behavior was wrong. This process is sped up in the short story but was still believable. Overall, it was a sweet short story of what could have been. I would read more from this author!