I won a book! :-) I won this book through GoodReads First Reads, in return for a fair review.
And it is with great joy that I announce that I finished this book!! I did not like it. It was difficult at first for me to put my finger on why exactly I was unhappy with it. The characters seem likeable enough. The writing is decent, and the story has a nice flow to it. The sex scenes are reasonably steamy. So why did it feel so PLODDING?? After mulling this over a bit, I've concluded that this book suffers MIGHTILY from the "tell don't show" problem that seems quite common in romance. We are told he is a good man, we are told he has dark desires, but we are never really SHOWN. Similarly, we are told she is ... well, honestly, I'm not really sure what we are told or shown about the heroine. That she is strong and angelic, I suppose. She has an Angelic Nature. He calls her his angel a lot. Talk about trite nicknames.
Our female protagonist, Mrs Emma Curtis, is a widow, and she believes the man who murdered her good-for-nothing rogue of a husband also bilked her family of all its moneys. Emma is on the hunt for one Mr. Roger Morton, Bad Guy. Enter our male protagonist, Lord Lukas Hawking, younger brother and heir-apparent-for-now to the Duke of Trent, but don't talk about his brother Trent! (he doesn't like to be reminded that he is the younger brother to a Duke. Somehow he thinks he wasn't good enough. Odd, since ... his brother is older, and that's a big DUH of course he's the Duke and you're not ... but hey, let's go with it: he's not good enough) Luke is also looking for Mr Roger Morton, Bad Guy, because it appears that Mr Morton absconded with Luke's mother, the dowager Duchess. Well, I just never!
Emma bravely propositions Luke, pointing out that she's penniless but she knows where Roger Morton might be, and Luke has the funds to hire a carriage, so they are clearly a match made in heaven. At some point Luke must proposition Emma, too, so we can have title, but I'm not sure what it was exactly. Probably the part where he asks, "Do you like to be bound, Mrs Curtis?" and rubs his lips all over her lips, then promises that he won't touch her until she BEGS for it repeatedly, and then he'll be on her like white on rice. Oh, and there's something about wanting to sleep next to her. Or maybe that's another book and I've gotten confused. All these hard-chested Tortured Heroes with their big dicks and disturbing nightmares, they all run together after a while. Emma knows a rogue when she sees one, and she's had it up to HERE with rogues, so she knows she'll never be begging for him. (We, the readers, know better, don't we? wink wink)
Ah, here it is: "I can offer you the heights of pleasure, Mrs Emma Curtis. If, at some point during the term of our agreement, you were to beg ... I promise, I'll not deny you." (Rest assured, dear readers, that he does not deny her.)
They carry on traveling chastely for a while, each sending the other sidelong sexy glances whenever they think the other isn't looking. She has a sexy dream about him and she orgasms in her sleep, and I have to admit, that was refreshing. I was encouraged, this is going to be a good book!
Luke has a bad habit, he likes to leave their hotel rooms to go out and spend the night getting shit-faced, leaving her locked in their room, alone. Emma doesn't like this, and can you blame her???? I seriously started hating him for this.... This, in fact, may be when I stopped enjoying this book - leaving her alone night after night, when she clearly asks him not to do it, is assholery of the first water. It's a mega rejection. Finally she's had enough and she insists that he stay, and the way she gets him to say is ... yes! she BEGS FOR IT! Then there's the obligatory scene where the heroine is stripped naked and STARED AT by the hero. I really hate that.
They eventually come to an understanding. I don't think I give away any plot points if I tell you they end up having sex. It's a romance, you know they're going to get it on, right? Lot of sexytimes, plenty of traveling and hunting down Mr Roger Morton, Bad Guy. Luke slowly, s - l - o - o - o - w - l - y, starts to open up to her, and he confides his deepest darkest secrets from his boyhood, all the shit that has him so messed up today. He's a Tortured Hero. She soothes him with her Angelic Nature, and in between they have more sexytimes. He also goes back to leaving her alone at night so he can get shit-faced. But then (BUT THEN) her betrayal is even worse than his, because she just blurts out ALL his deepdarksecrets to his brother and sister. hello? Em? Luke was pretty clear on that being a SECRET. So, at this point, I hate HER too. And I think this is really where I just stopped giving a shit about this story.
They eventually catch up with Mr Roger Morton, Bad Guy. Some other stuff happens. The end.
Compounding the "tell don't show" issue is the deluge of anachronistic language and attitude. This feels very much like a costume party, a not very well researched costume party, with period dresses and modern characters spouting modern dialogue with modern attitudes.
In the end, I just didn't CARE about the characters. So for the last third, I didn't care how it was resolved, I didn't care if the bad guy got his or if the hero and heroine finally confessed their love - it was a big whatEVER, just finish this book!