Plot 2/5
I believe this story is intended to be plot-focused, however the structure is so poorly framed, it was hard for me to maintain interest long-term, so I feel it took me much longer to finish this one than necessary. The pacing of the story is completely unbalanced. It felt rushed in some ways and slow in others. The point of view switches randomly, so you never know which characters it's going to focus on next, making it difficult to follow and immerse myself into. Initially I thought this was going to be more of an adventure story, which it kind of was, but the "adventure" aspects didn't even really get started until the book was already halfway over, and it was a total slog to get there.
Characters 3/4
The only characters I really found myself liking Arabis and her dad. I always liked reading about her part in the story and felt kind of uninterested whenever she'd leave the spotlight. I also liked the pit pit people or "faeries" I only wish there was more about them included as I found their struggles far more interesting than Owen earning the respect of his bullies. Speaking of which, I didn't care much for Owen, who felt like a wimp at the beginning of the story and then somehow magically became OP protagonist who could solve any problem so his peers could pat him on the back for it. I have no idea how this instant metamorphosis came about other than he happens to be the protagonist. All the other characters aside from Arabis, her Father, and Owen spent such little time in the spotlight I barely got the chance to know them, to where they felt more like plot devices than people. This story certainly suffers from a severe case of "too many unimportant characters with names I don't care enough about to remember" syndrome. Way too many characters are introduced way too quickly and all at once, so that they all become forgettable and feel very lacking in terms of depth.
Setting 2/5
While there are a few nice descriptions, there's not nearly as much as I would like to see. The reason why this score is so low, is because it takes place in an AU England and, instead of describing the scenery or even explaining where or what these places are, automatically assumes the reader is an expert in the country, its history, and its languages. The characters use a slew of foriegn languages and accents that slows down the reading as I'm trying to decipher what they're saying. It is very fourth-wall breaking and ruins the immersion. I don't understand it when authors stylize their dialogue with accents instead of just explaining how they spoke with a such in such accent in the narration and allowing the reader to use their imagination if they choose to do so. I also would prefer, if instead of having a glossary at the back, there were asterisks or footnotes at the bottom of the page, so I wouldn't have to spend time flipping back and forth. Regardless of the format, what is being said should outweight the importance of how someone is saying it.
Overall 2/5
As part of my New Years Resolution, my goal is to read roughly a dozen or so books that I've had for many years, but have never finished or some even touched. This is one that I started many years ago back in high school, but never finished. Now I know why. I would not recommend this book to anyone who isn't British, as is I found it not only a dull and uninspiring read, but made all the more frustrating, because of the language barrier.