The novel starts with Joseph already in the pit. I think this highlights one of my main problems. Shouldn't we have a few chapters before this, to show Joseph interacting with his father and brothers so that we care about the family breakup? Instead, those sections of the story—and honestly, a lot of the explicitly Biblical parts—feel rushed and perfunctory. What Fivash really wants to write is ancient Egyptian politics.
To be fair, there's a certain logic to this. Joseph spends 22 years in Egypt, and most of his time was spent running Potiphar's household and then serving as vizier. But y'know, that's not really what this story is supposed to be about? If you're looking for a story about ancient Egypt, you'll probably like this, and I actually do appreciate that Fivash devises a reason why the Pharaoh would appoint a random oracular foreigner to be his second-in-command. But I'm really more interested in the family drama and divine destiny than in Joseph buying goods in the marketplace, or even uncovering a convoluted assassination plot involving characters that I struggle to keep track of.
There are, naturally, time skips, but unfortunately, they don't pair well with the over-attention to minor details and occasionally rushed character development. Like, we get one scene where Joseph meets this female character, then in the very next scene it's months later and she's confessing her love for him, and then the next thing we know, she's married to his friend instead. Huh?
I did like that one scene with the cup, where Joseph has a breakdown and works through his years of trauma. There's also a very unique characterization for Asenath.
Anyway, it's good for what it is, which explains why so many other readers like it, but it's not really what I was looking for. For all its flaws, I prefer Joseph: King of Dreams. Really underrated, go check it out if you want to see what the Prince of Egypt crew can pull off with a direct-to-DVD budget.