I'm not too sure what to say about this book. There was no specific thing the author did that ruined it for me, but when it ended I was left sort of scratching my head.
First off, this book is part of a series and you will feel very left out of the loop - just like I did - if you don't start from the beginning. This series is based around Travis & Kitty Coltrane, but this book focuses on their son John Travis AKA Colt. When the book starts, Travis & Kitty have just moved across the ocean to France leaving Colt by himself in New York to take care of the family business, which includes a silver mine and ranch.
There's a whole lotta back story, but Travis has a daughter by another woman (now dead) who the family has not seen or heard from in 14 years. Travis has been sending money & correspondence to Dani, the daughter, however her aunt, Alaina, who she lives with, has been intercepting them. Dani is unhappy and decides to go live in a covenant, right about the same time Alaina is dead broke. Alaina's adopted son, Gavin, comes up with a plan to get Colt to hand over Dani's half of the business (which she is clueless about) to them. Using Dani isn't an option, but her maid & best friend, Briana, looks very similar. Briana also has a younger brother who is crippled and in dire need of a very expensive life surgery, which makes her desperate for cash.
So, Gavin and Briana (who is impersonating Dani) head to New York to try and Swindle Colt and get Danis inheritance.
Confused yet? Me too.
Here are some of the problems I had with this book.
The "romance" aspect, as in an actual evolving relationship between Colt & Briana, doesn't happen until about 50 pages from the end. We are told Briana is in love w/ Colt, but are forced to simply accept the fact, with no real explanations or info. Colt goes from "yeah, if she wan't my sister I'd do her" to "you're the love of my life" in about a paragraph.
Colt has a lot of sex. With not Dani. Now, if he's a playboy, then fine. No big deal. But the set up for these encounters all seem sorta random.
There's Charlene, who he has hooked up with in the past but has no feelings whatsoever for her and tells her so in pretty blunt terms. She won't take no for an answer and pretty much - pathetically - begs him. He pretty much just does it to shut her up.
Then there's is this whole random side story with Becky, which has absolutely to do with anything. Becky is sweet, loving and seemingly the perfect girl. For a while I thought I was confused and that Becky was the heroine. She is head over heels for Colt and he has some significantly string feelings for her return. Until he finds out she's actually a prostitute and kicks her to the curb.
And finally, there is Alaina. Ugh. Apparently her and his daddy, Travis, had a romp or two back in the day and it rocked her world. Colt goes to her looking for info on Briana's whereabouts. She gives up the info, but in order to get it he has to make love, and lets her call him Travis while he pretends to be his dad. Ick.
And btw, when Travis comes into the picture later on when Alaina is dying, he easily kisses and lies to her telling Alaina how much he wants her and how he has always been in love with her. Colt hears all this and gives him a funny look to which Travis replies "Never condemn a man for leaving a woman happy."
I'm starting to get a better picture of what Travis & Kitty's trilogy would have been like. . .
And my last pet peeve? This book ends 100% on a cliffhanger. No joke.