It's clear on Monday, it's sunny on Tuesday, it's bright and cheerful every day of the week... except Adoption Day. Five orphans huddled under London Bridge, careful to stay dry while waiting for their mysterious benefactor. Why wouldn't it stop raining for poor old Mr. Foxworth? What did God have against him?A short story on murder, pudding, and Victorian England. Horror Story; Rate PG-13 for Violence and Gore
it may not be a perfect horror story, but i believe it deserves more credit than other reviewers have given it. it effectively creates a sense of dread, as you know there's no way this could possibly end well. mr. foxworth's promises are simply too good to be true.
although it takes a re-read or two to fully get the story, i don't consider this a fault, seeing as it's a short story (only 25 pages on the e-reader app i started using on my phone in order to give e-books a spin.)
all in all, i'd say the author shows promise. her story has originality and a strange sort of perspective that i find actually pretty compelling. would i recommend this story? not particularly, unless you're really interested in the genre and setting. but i don't think it's a bad idea at all to keep up with the author.
A quick read. I think I might have missed the point. I didn't see where the beginning had anything to do with the end of the story. I didn't understand the end either. Maybe my brain stopped working.
Supposedly a "horror" story. Really "rain" was just a mess. A beginning that didn't really go along with the rest of the story. Bland writing. Gore for the sake of gore. Just an all around mess of a "story"
This was a very dark short story about orphans and their so called benefactor trying to get them to new families...Horror story, but I really didn't understand it, or enjoy it.