Captivating tale of a neglected boy looking for refuge. Ten-year-old Ian's parents are killed in a fire that Ian fears may have been his fault. Afraid of being arrested, he runs away and ducks into the first open door he sees. His hideout turns out to be a struggling inner-city church, and Ian is intrigued by the lives of his unwitting hosts. Meanwhile, Ian's aunt is horrified to discover that his parents' deaths were not an accident, and that their murderer is looking for Ian.
Nan Corbitt Allen is a three-time Dove Award winner whose lyrics and dramas have been performed around the world. Her previous books include The Words We Sing and Watercolor Summer. Nan and her husband have two grown sons and live near Nashville, Tennessee.
I struggled with parts of this book seeming unrealistic to me but ultimately the story picked up and I was so heartbroken for this sad little lost boy that I could hardly stand it. A good read all in all.
When I saw this sitting on the library shelf and read the blurb, I got the impression it was a nice little introspective drama about a runaway orphan…turns out it's nothing but an attempt to convert readers to baptist christianity. No need to rely on my interpretation; there's a page near the back flat out admitting the book is a conversion tool. If I'd looked closely at the back cover, where the blurb is, I'd have seen MOODY PUBLISHERS in small white type…minor oversight there on my part.
Honestly this wouldn't even bother me if the writing weren't so condescending and just plain terrible. It's presented in a tense utilizing "had had" many, many times. The characters keep referring to Magnum P.I. as if the story were set in 1982, which it isn't - people have cell phones. Of course they don't know how to use them - they think you have to yell into them or won't get reception outside your own home - because they're stupid. Everyone is stupid, for no reason. The runaway kid doesn't realize the place he's hiding is a church, because even though he's a regular ten year old suburban kid who's gone to school with other kids and watched TV he's never seen a church before, never heard of Jesus, doesn't recognize anything in the place…this is what I mean by condescending and terrible and stupid and all being used to convey christian concepts to people who may not be familiar with them…despicable, really, to write that way.
This is on top of the writing just being bad and stupid on its own. Combined with the religious propaganda I'd give this book negative five stars if I could. Here's a sample:
"These are good, Reverend," Pete said as he bit into a hot French pastry. "Jim. You can call me Jim." Tibby's usually closed at 6:00 on Saturdays, but he was willing to stay open longer for Brother Jim and the policeman. "Are you from Mobile, Lieutenant?" Jim asked. "Pete." Jim had been invited to return a friendlier greeting. "Sure. Pete," Jim said. Jim didn't know where the conversation would lead, but he prayed that he could have the opportunity and the courage to share Christ with Pete.
Christ indeed. Jim had been invited to return a friendlier greeting? Really? REALLY? Wow, thanks for pointing that out! I didn't know because I've never read a friggin' book before! Or seen a movie or tv show! Where this type of exchange has happened thousands upon thousands of times and is almost always just as pointless an interaction as it is here! Golly!
This is the same bakery where dozens of people, after learning that the runaway had in fact been hiding out in the church next door until that very morning, sit and eat and talk and pray instead of GOING OUT INTO THE NEIGHBORHOOD TO LOOK FOR HIM. Seriously, they know he was there very recently, they know he's just a kid on foot, but they do absolutely nothing to go find him. And then he just shows up again, having decided to come back. The story is full of ridiculous coincidence like that, presented as God Working Miracles In Mysterious Ways but is really just weak writing.
The whole thing is pathetic and disgusting and manipulative. Those responsible should be ashamed and those who appreciate or accept this garbage should wake up and learn to think for themselves.
Interesting concept at first. I love survival books, and the alcoholic perspective I related too, so this book intrested me at first when I picked it up at a used book store. The editing was horrible, which was my biggest pet peeve. I didn't realize how religious it was either, which I'm not a big fan of. Overall, it's not the worst book I've read, but it wasn't that great.
good read. About a little boy who has run away because he thinks he did something horrible (you will have to read to find out). He hides in a church and learns who God is in the actions of the people around him. we did this one for Christian book club
At first I thought the "world of rhyme" might get on my nerves, but as it turns out, there's not much rhyming so not sure why that's mentioned in the story synopsis. Asylum does start off a little slow, but picks up and ends good. I thought it would make a good Lifetime movie for sure.
good thus far, but i think this kid is kinda dramatic? for lack of a better word. but I guess he has reason to be for what hes been through, maybe hes not dramatic really just dealing? i don`t know... we`ll see
I bought this book on a whim at a Christian bookstore; it was on sale for less than $4. I'm glad I bought it. It was amazing. I read it in one afternoon. I so wanted to reach into the book and hug little Ian.