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The Betrayal of Ka
As the spaceship secretly lands on Earth, Ka’s mission is clear: find and kill Transprophetics. His shipmates think of him as a killer. On his home planet of Koranth, he is considered a murderer. Haunted in his dreams by the boy whose life he stole, Ka struggles to define who he really is.
A girl in a temple in Thailand. A boy kidnapped in Mexico. Both can do the impossible. Both can move objects with their minds. These two Transprophetics pose grave risks to the Donovackia Corporation as it plans its invasion of Earth.
With a blade in his hand, Ka’s decision to kill, or not, will reverberate across the galaxy.
A girl in a temple in Thailand. A boy kidnapped in Mexico. Both can do the impossible. Both can move objects with their minds. These two Transprophetics pose grave risks to the Donovackia Corporation as it plans its invasion of Earth.
With a blade in his hand, Ka’s decision to kill, or not, will reverberate across the galaxy.
270 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 13, 2015
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About the author
Shea R. Oliver
2 books55 followersShea Oliver is a science fiction and horror writer with a passion for telling stories that challenge readers' assumptions and stereotypes. In his first published novel, The Betrayal of Ka, a protagonist's decision to sell drugs to a young boy results in the death of the child.
Shea enjoys taking readers them on deeply emotional journeys to explore his characters motivations, mindset, and decisions. While his stories are written to be entertaining tales, they also are designed to be works that prompt readers to explore their own thoughts, behaviors, and treatment of others.
During a difficult personal period, Shea solo-climbed and sat alone atop a high mountain peak in Rocky Mountain National Park to assess his life. As he mediated in that beautiful setting, his long-dormant dream of becoming a novelist reemerged, and the next day, he began writing his first novel.
Shea's professional career spans numerous industries with significant experience in enterprise software sales and digital marketing. He has founded multiple companies, coached other entrepreneurs, and taught public speaking at Colorado State University.
Shea happily declares that his greatest achievement in life is being the father to two amazing sons. He is also an ardent nature lover, teardrop trailer enthusiast, and photographer. When not pounding on his keyboard, Shea can often be found in the wilderness, hiking alone, and enjoying life.
Discover more about Shea on his website at SheaOliver.com.
Shea enjoys taking readers them on deeply emotional journeys to explore his characters motivations, mindset, and decisions. While his stories are written to be entertaining tales, they also are designed to be works that prompt readers to explore their own thoughts, behaviors, and treatment of others.
During a difficult personal period, Shea solo-climbed and sat alone atop a high mountain peak in Rocky Mountain National Park to assess his life. As he mediated in that beautiful setting, his long-dormant dream of becoming a novelist reemerged, and the next day, he began writing his first novel.
Shea's professional career spans numerous industries with significant experience in enterprise software sales and digital marketing. He has founded multiple companies, coached other entrepreneurs, and taught public speaking at Colorado State University.
Shea happily declares that his greatest achievement in life is being the father to two amazing sons. He is also an ardent nature lover, teardrop trailer enthusiast, and photographer. When not pounding on his keyboard, Shea can often be found in the wilderness, hiking alone, and enjoying life.
Discover more about Shea on his website at SheaOliver.com.
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August 19, 2019
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At first I wasn’t sure how I would feel about this book because in the opening pages Ka came off as a bit of a macho jerk, but pretty soon his plight and situation utterly broke my heart. Underneath the bravado was just a scared little boy in over his head. It was devastatingly claustrophobic reading page after page of this poor, misguided kid’s fate after he made one stupid mistake. Granted, it was a terrible mistake, but the consequences were so brutal. I honestly didn’t see how he would ever get out of it and I just wanted to reach into the pages and pull Ka out to safety.
We watched Ka fully develop as a person and as a character, going from someone to dismiss to someone the reader could really sympathize with. I give the author major kudos for that as it was a really gratifying transformation to witness.
Some really clever twists were used to finally get Ka out of his hell and these twists also helped tie all the seemingly unconnected people in the book together- although there were a few too many subplots going on back on Koranth and Zoranth IMO. Despite this overcrowding, though, the world building was pretty impressive and I LOVED the way the alien invasions were carried out: recon missions sent decades ahead to planets like Earth and if they were worth invading, conquering them in one swift move.
I really enjoyed reading this story as an adult sci-fi junkie, but I’m not sure what age range this book was aiming for. On its surface it appears to be YA and most our characters are teens or adolescents. It flows and is written like a YA novel, especially when we’re on Earth with our human characters, but as the book progresses it becomes much grittier and explores some very adult themes. I mean, we’ve got more than one sexual assault in here y’all. All the political plotting and machinations are probably more likely to be appreciated by an older reader, too. So I suppose this would be best suited for adult YA readers or more mature young adults who like harder science fiction.
Final Thoughts
The Betrayal of Ka was a really different and engaging read with so much packed within its pages. At times it runs a bit dark so please do be warned that some of its chapters may be difficult to read, especially for younger readers. Ultimately the savagery was worth getting through, though, because it not only helped set up the backstory, but gave insight into the motivations behind our ruthless alien antagonists.
I have no qualms in recommending this to those who like a bit of grit in their science fiction. As for me, I’m already on a waiting list for the upcoming sequel. So if you do go out and buy this book, you won’t have to wait long to read the follow-up!
Read my full review on my blog!
Thank you so much to the author for sending me a copy in exchange for an honest review.
At first I wasn’t sure how I would feel about this book because in the opening pages Ka came off as a bit of a macho jerk, but pretty soon his plight and situation utterly broke my heart. Underneath the bravado was just a scared little boy in over his head. It was devastatingly claustrophobic reading page after page of this poor, misguided kid’s fate after he made one stupid mistake. Granted, it was a terrible mistake, but the consequences were so brutal. I honestly didn’t see how he would ever get out of it and I just wanted to reach into the pages and pull Ka out to safety.
We watched Ka fully develop as a person and as a character, going from someone to dismiss to someone the reader could really sympathize with. I give the author major kudos for that as it was a really gratifying transformation to witness.
Some really clever twists were used to finally get Ka out of his hell and these twists also helped tie all the seemingly unconnected people in the book together- although there were a few too many subplots going on back on Koranth and Zoranth IMO. Despite this overcrowding, though, the world building was pretty impressive and I LOVED the way the alien invasions were carried out: recon missions sent decades ahead to planets like Earth and if they were worth invading, conquering them in one swift move.
I really enjoyed reading this story as an adult sci-fi junkie, but I’m not sure what age range this book was aiming for. On its surface it appears to be YA and most our characters are teens or adolescents. It flows and is written like a YA novel, especially when we’re on Earth with our human characters, but as the book progresses it becomes much grittier and explores some very adult themes. I mean, we’ve got more than one sexual assault in here y’all. All the political plotting and machinations are probably more likely to be appreciated by an older reader, too. So I suppose this would be best suited for adult YA readers or more mature young adults who like harder science fiction.
Final Thoughts
The Betrayal of Ka was a really different and engaging read with so much packed within its pages. At times it runs a bit dark so please do be warned that some of its chapters may be difficult to read, especially for younger readers. Ultimately the savagery was worth getting through, though, because it not only helped set up the backstory, but gave insight into the motivations behind our ruthless alien antagonists.
I have no qualms in recommending this to those who like a bit of grit in their science fiction. As for me, I’m already on a waiting list for the upcoming sequel. So if you do go out and buy this book, you won’t have to wait long to read the follow-up!
Read my full review on my blog!
Thank you so much to the author for sending me a copy in exchange for an honest review.
October 13, 2015
I’d like to send a huge thank you to Shea for giving me the chance to read this book in exchange for an honest review.
It’s hard for me to thoroughly explain this book as it has a few different arcs that tie into each other towards the end of the book. It is a science fiction novel about a young boy named Ka who gets caught up making some bad choices that ultimately result in his going to prison for murder. From there his life takes many twists and turns which take him far away from his home. While all this is happening to him his home planet is involved in space exploration and the conquering of other planets for profit and they have set their sights on earth.
That is a very very broad description of what this story is about. There is literally so much more at work in this plot that it was like candy to me. I was hooked on the story from beginning to end and when I wasn’t reading it I was thinking about it. It has a very interesting, complicated plot with complicated characters. It is told through multiple perspectives which I loved for this story, it felt very well rounded and the characters also felt very developed. My favorite character is Ka and I enjoyed seeing his journey from his fall to his redemption. I felt for him throughout the entire novel. This story was dark and unforgiving at times, but also hopeful and interesting. I found both the political and ethics systems in this book really interesting. I cannot wait to continue this series and will keep an eye out for book two!
Holy moly! I was not prepared for how much I was going to enjoy this book. I came to the sci fi game late in my life but have in recent years discovered that I love the genre so reading this book was such a pleasure to me and I highly recommend it to any sci fi fans.
It’s hard for me to thoroughly explain this book as it has a few different arcs that tie into each other towards the end of the book. It is a science fiction novel about a young boy named Ka who gets caught up making some bad choices that ultimately result in his going to prison for murder. From there his life takes many twists and turns which take him far away from his home. While all this is happening to him his home planet is involved in space exploration and the conquering of other planets for profit and they have set their sights on earth.
That is a very very broad description of what this story is about. There is literally so much more at work in this plot that it was like candy to me. I was hooked on the story from beginning to end and when I wasn’t reading it I was thinking about it. It has a very interesting, complicated plot with complicated characters. It is told through multiple perspectives which I loved for this story, it felt very well rounded and the characters also felt very developed. My favorite character is Ka and I enjoyed seeing his journey from his fall to his redemption. I felt for him throughout the entire novel. This story was dark and unforgiving at times, but also hopeful and interesting. I found both the political and ethics systems in this book really interesting. I cannot wait to continue this series and will keep an eye out for book two!
Holy moly! I was not prepared for how much I was going to enjoy this book. I came to the sci fi game late in my life but have in recent years discovered that I love the genre so reading this book was such a pleasure to me and I highly recommend it to any sci fi fans.
September 5, 2019
4.5 Stars This is not a light Sci-Fi book in all the good ways. As I read this I had the feeling that I was reading through a trilogy – there is that much contained in these 267 pages. Ka and his other characters took me back to when Sci-Fi was darker and more intense than a lot of what has been published recently. This book also has the intense development of world building along with everything else.
The story does contain some violent scenes that made me cringe but not enough to stop reading. The author rotates chapters by characters and worlds so you can easily keep track of the huge amount of subplots. Mr. Oliver brought forward a lot of striking ideas about our planet and made me wonder about some of the humans that have been inhabiting my Earth.
The story does contain some violent scenes that made me cringe but not enough to stop reading. The author rotates chapters by characters and worlds so you can easily keep track of the huge amount of subplots. Mr. Oliver brought forward a lot of striking ideas about our planet and made me wonder about some of the humans that have been inhabiting my Earth.
August 4, 2019
originally, when I started reading this book, I thought I would DNF it. I was approximately 15% into it, and didn't know what was going on, it was so busy. I persevered, and ended up really enjoying it. I do feel, however, that it was too much all over the place. Would likely benefit from a good editor, and some tightening up. I think it may even need to be a few books, serialized, instead of just one. More fleshed out stories, instead of so much exposition by telling.
The basic storyline follows a young man that does a horrendous thing, and ends up being punished horrifically for it. His journey through the corrections system and beyond is a big part of the story. It also involves political Machiavellianism, Earth Invasion, and a whole lot of different characters.
At the end, i reiterate that it would definitely benefit from someone going over it with a red pencil, and showing a lot more of the events, rather than a list of what happens. This would make it a lot longer book, or set of books. The story arc would benefit from this.
Overall, I'd read more in this universe, knowing what I was in for as far as the amount of information provided not overwhelming me .
The basic storyline follows a young man that does a horrendous thing, and ends up being punished horrifically for it. His journey through the corrections system and beyond is a big part of the story. It also involves political Machiavellianism, Earth Invasion, and a whole lot of different characters.
At the end, i reiterate that it would definitely benefit from someone going over it with a red pencil, and showing a lot more of the events, rather than a list of what happens. This would make it a lot longer book, or set of books. The story arc would benefit from this.
Overall, I'd read more in this universe, knowing what I was in for as far as the amount of information provided not overwhelming me .
November 23, 2015
The Betrayal of Ka was an unusual sci-fi. Kadama is a teen on a binary world who gets involved in selling drugs. He makes a irreparable mistake and his whole life is changed.
I enjoyed the story told from a non-earth perspective. I felt so sorry for Ka, events that were totally out of his control caused him much pain both physical and emotional. It felt excessive for the mistake he made. Some parts of the book moved a bit slow and were more descriptive than I like. I think the main plot had a slow start, but, the events that occurred first had to be written in that order to make sense.
The text was pretty well edited with very few errors. I do think that older teens who like science fiction will enjoy the book. For adults there is a political aspect that is really more for the adult reader. The book has a good ending but it is clear that there is more to the story. The next stage in Ka's life will begin in the sequel.
A solid four out of five stars for The Betrayal of Ka. I do look forward to the next in the series.
I enjoyed the story told from a non-earth perspective. I felt so sorry for Ka, events that were totally out of his control caused him much pain both physical and emotional. It felt excessive for the mistake he made. Some parts of the book moved a bit slow and were more descriptive than I like. I think the main plot had a slow start, but, the events that occurred first had to be written in that order to make sense.
The text was pretty well edited with very few errors. I do think that older teens who like science fiction will enjoy the book. For adults there is a political aspect that is really more for the adult reader. The book has a good ending but it is clear that there is more to the story. The next stage in Ka's life will begin in the sequel.
A solid four out of five stars for The Betrayal of Ka. I do look forward to the next in the series.
November 12, 2015
This book is GRITTY. It hits on politics as well as some of the lesser used subjects in science fiction. It will kick your butt.
This book is multi-faceted. It brings up real political issues that are relate-able to our current time period while at the same time creating a story that is both entertaining and emotion catching.
It take’s talent to be able to draw so many things into one story and have it all tie in together.
There are no real cliff hangers in this book. You leave the story with a sense of transition more than frustration for not having it completely tied up. It is the first book in a series and I am really looking forward to the second.
To see my full review, check out my blog https://alliesopinions.wordpress.com/...
This book is multi-faceted. It brings up real political issues that are relate-able to our current time period while at the same time creating a story that is both entertaining and emotion catching.
It take’s talent to be able to draw so many things into one story and have it all tie in together.
There are no real cliff hangers in this book. You leave the story with a sense of transition more than frustration for not having it completely tied up. It is the first book in a series and I am really looking forward to the second.
To see my full review, check out my blog https://alliesopinions.wordpress.com/...
December 22, 2020
This book dives right in and keeps going until the very end! It's definitely an attention grabber that holds the reader's interest throughout. Written in third person, the story shifts focus between three different sets of characters/experiences. They don't initially appear to have much, if anything, in common and though it's expected that they will turn out to be connected, the author gradually integrates these sets in a quite enthralling way.
Everything about this book is well-developed and delivered in a writing style free of information dumps that feel drawn out or rambling monologues. The author appears to have found a perfect balance of narrative vs dialogue vs action. Each line adds more depth, the atmospheres built wonderfully through the characters' experiences rather overwhelming descriptions.
I immediately fell in love with Kadamba, one of the central characters for whom the book was named. It was so easy to get drawn in to him because though his experience is not necessarily typical, the emotions that went with were both relatable and sympathy-enducing. Having been through so much, part (or arguably all) of which was by his own grievous mistakes, and continuing to face outrageously unfair circumstances, his character is truly inspiring on many levels. But Kadamba wasn't the only great character. Like I said, they were all well-developed, each with their own unique traits, experiences, and outlooks.
The story deals a lot with the corruption of legal systems, ranging from politics and government to judicial and criminal justice to the 1% and behind-the-curtain rich who control too much. Although each presented planet is unique to itself, it appears that these problems are universal. This is a social fiction aspect I'm particularly fond of and Shea Oliver did a beautiful job with outlining these issues within this scifi tale.
While it was a prevailing aspect, the story did not feel bogged down or preachy. Things were approached in a very casual way with the rest of the adventure adding much more than social comments or messages (perceived or otherwise). Another thing I loved was the integration of 'supernatural' abilities as part of human evolution. I don't like giving spoilers so I'll just say the intricacy of the plot was extremely creative and totally fascinating. It is a story you'll want to pay close attention to in order to unravel everything properly because there is a lot going on. Filled with adventure, tragedy, the will to overcome, and a big twist toward the conclusion, 'The Betrayal of Ka' is a book I'd highly recommend to all lovers of scifi.
Everything about this book is well-developed and delivered in a writing style free of information dumps that feel drawn out or rambling monologues. The author appears to have found a perfect balance of narrative vs dialogue vs action. Each line adds more depth, the atmospheres built wonderfully through the characters' experiences rather overwhelming descriptions.
I immediately fell in love with Kadamba, one of the central characters for whom the book was named. It was so easy to get drawn in to him because though his experience is not necessarily typical, the emotions that went with were both relatable and sympathy-enducing. Having been through so much, part (or arguably all) of which was by his own grievous mistakes, and continuing to face outrageously unfair circumstances, his character is truly inspiring on many levels. But Kadamba wasn't the only great character. Like I said, they were all well-developed, each with their own unique traits, experiences, and outlooks.
The story deals a lot with the corruption of legal systems, ranging from politics and government to judicial and criminal justice to the 1% and behind-the-curtain rich who control too much. Although each presented planet is unique to itself, it appears that these problems are universal. This is a social fiction aspect I'm particularly fond of and Shea Oliver did a beautiful job with outlining these issues within this scifi tale.
While it was a prevailing aspect, the story did not feel bogged down or preachy. Things were approached in a very casual way with the rest of the adventure adding much more than social comments or messages (perceived or otherwise). Another thing I loved was the integration of 'supernatural' abilities as part of human evolution. I don't like giving spoilers so I'll just say the intricacy of the plot was extremely creative and totally fascinating. It is a story you'll want to pay close attention to in order to unravel everything properly because there is a lot going on. Filled with adventure, tragedy, the will to overcome, and a big twist toward the conclusion, 'The Betrayal of Ka' is a book I'd highly recommend to all lovers of scifi.
March 29, 2020
I thoroughly enjoyed this booK! There are a number of storylines playing out throughout – the story of Ka, what the Donovackia Corporation are up to, what the Minister is planning, and what’s happening to Dylan, his brother Bjorn and their family on Earth. Although the chapters do change from one to another, it’s easy to keep track of and draws you in even more.
The plot is full of action; it’s dark in places and covers some sensitive subjects such as gang rape and violence, and harm against children but don’t let that put you off. The experiences that some of the characters go through is the making of them, and helps you to ‘build’ a relationship with them as you go along on the journey with them.
You will either love or hate the characters! I found there was no in-between!! I absolutely adore Ka! Despite the fact that he hasn’t always made the best decisions, he really does pay for it and comes out the other side eventually. He’s a complicated characters and the author has done a fabulous job of helping the reader to really get to know and understand him. Dylan is an amazing kid who just wants to care for his brother – the responsibility he places on himself is heartwarming, but you can feel the burden as well. Atticus is also fantastic – but I’ll let you make your own decisions on him!
There were twists and turns in this that I didn’t expect at all! One in particular I was completely gobsmacked about and didn’t see it coming in the slightest! And the ending blew me away! I’m so glad that Book 2 is out now and just wish that I could get on with reading it straight away! It is most definitely going on my TBR pile.
If you love action, fantasy, thriller or sci-fi you will love this book. It takes you on a superb journey, will have you pulse racing and will bring out so many different emotions! This comes highly recommended by me!
The plot is full of action; it’s dark in places and covers some sensitive subjects such as gang rape and violence, and harm against children but don’t let that put you off. The experiences that some of the characters go through is the making of them, and helps you to ‘build’ a relationship with them as you go along on the journey with them.
You will either love or hate the characters! I found there was no in-between!! I absolutely adore Ka! Despite the fact that he hasn’t always made the best decisions, he really does pay for it and comes out the other side eventually. He’s a complicated characters and the author has done a fabulous job of helping the reader to really get to know and understand him. Dylan is an amazing kid who just wants to care for his brother – the responsibility he places on himself is heartwarming, but you can feel the burden as well. Atticus is also fantastic – but I’ll let you make your own decisions on him!
There were twists and turns in this that I didn’t expect at all! One in particular I was completely gobsmacked about and didn’t see it coming in the slightest! And the ending blew me away! I’m so glad that Book 2 is out now and just wish that I could get on with reading it straight away! It is most definitely going on my TBR pile.
If you love action, fantasy, thriller or sci-fi you will love this book. It takes you on a superb journey, will have you pulse racing and will bring out so many different emotions! This comes highly recommended by me!
October 30, 2019
3.5 stars
I'll be the first to admit SyFy is not really my genre. However, when I was presented this one I was intrigued. It could have been because a couple of the characters had powers that I often wished that I had in my youth. Two young people appear to have the gift of telekinesis. Unfortunately, a young mercenary has been dispatched to kill them and the mayhem begins.
The author did a good job of setting up this new world. The characters were developed and the situations that we as readers are privy to are very real i.e. sex, drugs, murder, etc. There were a few concurrent storylines so pay attention. I didn't get confused, but if you don't pay attention you might.
I thought Ka got a bad rap. He reminds me of many teens today who fall into bad situations through poor choices and are left on their own to deal with the negative fallout, including being labeled as a "bad" guy.
I think Syfy lovers will enjoy this new world that was expertly crafted. Outside of it taking me a bit to get into the story, in the beginning, I enjoyed this story.
Note: I received this ARC in exchange for an honest review, which I give freely. Thank you to the author for your patience.
I'll be the first to admit SyFy is not really my genre. However, when I was presented this one I was intrigued. It could have been because a couple of the characters had powers that I often wished that I had in my youth. Two young people appear to have the gift of telekinesis. Unfortunately, a young mercenary has been dispatched to kill them and the mayhem begins.
The author did a good job of setting up this new world. The characters were developed and the situations that we as readers are privy to are very real i.e. sex, drugs, murder, etc. There were a few concurrent storylines so pay attention. I didn't get confused, but if you don't pay attention you might.
I thought Ka got a bad rap. He reminds me of many teens today who fall into bad situations through poor choices and are left on their own to deal with the negative fallout, including being labeled as a "bad" guy.
I think Syfy lovers will enjoy this new world that was expertly crafted. Outside of it taking me a bit to get into the story, in the beginning, I enjoyed this story.
Note: I received this ARC in exchange for an honest review, which I give freely. Thank you to the author for your patience.
June 28, 2019
Thank you to the author for providing me with this book, in exchange for an honest review.
This is a tough one for me to review, since I did not finish it. There was quite a bit of sexual assault in this book, which I try desperately to avoid. It ended up being too much for me, so I had to set this one down. Be aware: this book is gritty, disturbing, and very, very harsh.
It is also well written. While I can’t speak to how the story came together or ended, I can tell you that Shea Oliver created a fully realized universe. He paid special attention to details that I’ve found are normally glossed over.
Of the characters I’d met up to my stopping point, not one of them was likable. There was a lot of political maneuvering and stepping on of toes. In some ways this felt like a sci-fi Game of Thrones-type of book. If you can handle the harshness in those books, then this book might very well be for you.
This book has recently relaunched and the sequel releases in September.
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This is a tough one for me to review, since I did not finish it. There was quite a bit of sexual assault in this book, which I try desperately to avoid. It ended up being too much for me, so I had to set this one down. Be aware: this book is gritty, disturbing, and very, very harsh.
It is also well written. While I can’t speak to how the story came together or ended, I can tell you that Shea Oliver created a fully realized universe. He paid special attention to details that I’ve found are normally glossed over.
Of the characters I’d met up to my stopping point, not one of them was likable. There was a lot of political maneuvering and stepping on of toes. In some ways this felt like a sci-fi Game of Thrones-type of book. If you can handle the harshness in those books, then this book might very well be for you.
This book has recently relaunched and the sequel releases in September.
https://wittyandsarcasticbookclub.hom...
August 20, 2019
The Betrayal of Ka is probably one of the most unique, dark and sometimes disturbing Sci-fi novels I have ever read. It was gritty and hit on subjects you don’t always see in Sci-fi. It starts off strong and keeps up that pace all the way through, making it an enjoyable Sci-fi thriller.
There are multiple subplots happening in this novel. Sometimes, I found it a bit distracting because I wanted to spend more time with the main character, Ka, but at the same time, the multiple perspectives made for really well-rounded characters. Still, I wanted more of Ka’s story. His journey, and all the emotions that came along with it touched on themes of despair and hope. I am looking forward to book two because I think there is more to discover here.
Please be aware, this story doesn’t contain light reading material. If you enjoy the darker side of Sci-fi, The Betrayal of Ka is a really great option to check out. I love Shea R. Oliver’s writing. Though he chose to add in multiple subplots, he handled them all well, and for the most part, I was able to follow along. The story is fast-paced and very intriguing. I recommend checking this out!
*I received a complimentary copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own.*
Find this review and more on my blog: https://www.jessicabelmont.wordpress.com
There are multiple subplots happening in this novel. Sometimes, I found it a bit distracting because I wanted to spend more time with the main character, Ka, but at the same time, the multiple perspectives made for really well-rounded characters. Still, I wanted more of Ka’s story. His journey, and all the emotions that came along with it touched on themes of despair and hope. I am looking forward to book two because I think there is more to discover here.
Please be aware, this story doesn’t contain light reading material. If you enjoy the darker side of Sci-fi, The Betrayal of Ka is a really great option to check out. I love Shea R. Oliver’s writing. Though he chose to add in multiple subplots, he handled them all well, and for the most part, I was able to follow along. The story is fast-paced and very intriguing. I recommend checking this out!
*I received a complimentary copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own.*
Find this review and more on my blog: https://www.jessicabelmont.wordpress.com
November 11, 2019
*I received a free copy of this book from the author via voracious readers only in exchange for an honest review*
I loved this book, it has such a rich and detailed world setting but unlike a lot of books of the same sort it doesn’t make you feel lost. There’s so much to immerse yourself in and the characters are deep and well written. Ka’s back story is so heartbreaking, a teenager who made the ultimate mistake, a reminder that anyone’s life can change completely with just one bad choice. Seeing him grow and develop throughout the book into a young man still haunted by his mistake was one thing I really loved, I felt like we really knew him and without giving any spoilers I was not expecting that twist! I can’t wait to see what happens next.
I loved this book, it has such a rich and detailed world setting but unlike a lot of books of the same sort it doesn’t make you feel lost. There’s so much to immerse yourself in and the characters are deep and well written. Ka’s back story is so heartbreaking, a teenager who made the ultimate mistake, a reminder that anyone’s life can change completely with just one bad choice. Seeing him grow and develop throughout the book into a young man still haunted by his mistake was one thing I really loved, I felt like we really knew him and without giving any spoilers I was not expecting that twist! I can’t wait to see what happens next.
November 12, 2019
This book makes you think about how easy a poor decision can completely alter many lives. And how easy it is to judge someone else without any facts or empathy. The main character goes from innocence to ruin in a matter of hours and his life completely implodes. He has great strength and depth of character and is more than up to the task of surviving and surviving well. Someone very powerful pulls strings to set him on a journey that will affect billions of lives not only on his home planet but on Earth and every inhabited planet in between.
The politics on this planet are similar to earth's in that the rich and powerful control everything for themselves regardless of how it affects the rest of the populations of many planets. The leaders of this planet have set their sights on Earth, and Ka is at the heart of their plans. I can not wait to see what happens in the sequel!
The politics on this planet are similar to earth's in that the rich and powerful control everything for themselves regardless of how it affects the rest of the populations of many planets. The leaders of this planet have set their sights on Earth, and Ka is at the heart of their plans. I can not wait to see what happens in the sequel!
November 1, 2019
I want to thank Shea Oliver for sending me this book.
I loved it. I also like the character development specially for Ka. At first, he was this cocky and I felt like he was selfish, but as the story went. I truly fell in love with the character.
There was some violence in here and there not going to lie, I thought it could be intense, but the scenes were clear in my head and what the message was conveying.
I also like the intensity of each scenes. It wasn't so barbaric that I like to be (that's just me) but I like every scenes. It makes me want to read it even more.
This was a good SciFi read.
Congratulations on the Author for a job well done.
I loved it. I also like the character development specially for Ka. At first, he was this cocky and I felt like he was selfish, but as the story went. I truly fell in love with the character.
There was some violence in here and there not going to lie, I thought it could be intense, but the scenes were clear in my head and what the message was conveying.
I also like the intensity of each scenes. It wasn't so barbaric that I like to be (that's just me) but I like every scenes. It makes me want to read it even more.
This was a good SciFi read.
Congratulations on the Author for a job well done.
March 31, 2020
Very well written in my opinion and it reminded me of Stargate which was one of my favorite shows to watch. I can't wait to read the next one and finish the story line! Thank you for the momentary escape from reality!
August 23, 2020
I liked this book! Loved how all the plot strings wove together. It had compelling characters and a good story. I will very likely read more by this author.
I received a copy of this book through Voracious Readers Only
I received a copy of this book through Voracious Readers Only
September 24, 2019
Definitely a must read! I can’t wait for book two. Once I started this book I stayed up all night and read until the end. Very catchy and sucks you right into the world of this book.
September 21, 2019
From the start of the book, Kadamba Vorhoor comes across as a slightly unlikable character; though this does change as the reader progresses through the novel. There were also quite a few characters to follow in the novel - and one character that I wish the author had explored a little bit more was Kadamba. The ending seemed a little bit abrupt.
I got a copy in exchange for an honest review.
I got a copy in exchange for an honest review.
October 28, 2015
Kadamba is a typical teen. He's about to graduate high school and claim the love of the girl he adores when suddenly his world implodes. One moment he's selling the interplanetary drug rath to a ten-year-old, the next he's awaiting sentencing for the boy's death.
This is the dramatic start to The Betrayal of Ka, and this science fiction thriller doesn't let up from there to its surprise ending. In between, there is darkness and light, corruption and redemption -- and, in all fairness, the reader should know this is NOT a typical, breezy YA novel.
The two planets of Koranth and Zoranth have survived the Exorthium Colonial Wars and have emerged as the primary worlds in this epic tale, connected by interplanetary portals and ruled by ruthless and dominant Corporations.
Tomar Donovackia is head of one of these powerful galactic firms -- and he is also a TransProphetic, born with extraordinary mental and physical abilities. "He could move from one place to another in the blink of an eye, including through the smallest of holes, such as a keyhole."
Celestina Wiroviana is Minister of Interplanetary Corporate Relations -- the most powerful woman in a hundred solar systems -- and also Tomar's lover. Together, they are making plans for domination of the universe -- including Earth, where Dylan and his younger brother Bjorn live with their mother in the teeming town of Denver, Colorado.
What do all these characters have in common? They are central to the intertwining plot of this fascinating story, which moves from one scene to the next with the speed of a space shuttle.
We find Ka being prepared for transport to the penal colony where he will spend the next twenty-five years at hard labor. It's painful to visualize the process, which is just the first of many horrific and futuristic scenarios laid out vividly in the book:
"Again he watched as the box began to move backwards out of the stacks of cells. As it had before, the box that he was in began changing and shrinking to become shaped exactly like a coffin, forcing Kadamba into a prone position. The transparent end of the box disappeared, and Kadamba simply lay there, accepting his fate."
Meanwhile, Celestina Wiroviana has consolidated her military might and become the dominant force on both worlds, stopping many wars and vowing planetary peace. But it's the beginning of a much larger betrayal -- and now Ka is part of it, identified as good soldier material and transferred from prison to a mandatory ten-year tour of duty in the Elite Special Forces.
And what of Dylan and his family? At fifteen he's found his first love. Adelita, with dark, wavy hair and a timidity that tugs at his heart.
The book rolls on. Celestina discovers a mysterious sword with a storied past, and Ka visits London, Washington, D.C., and Bangkok, searching for TransProphetics -- the key to establishing an interplanetary portal and the imminent rape of planet Earth.
What finally happens in this finely told tale? Does Ka continue in his role as elite soldier? Does Celestina find a way to use the fabled sword to strengthen her hold on the planets? And do Dylan and Adelita have even the remotest chance at a happily-ever-after ending to their part in this sweeping narrative?
Five stars for The Betrayal of Ka, and a warning that, as the saying goes, "once you start this book you won't want to put it down.'
This is the dramatic start to The Betrayal of Ka, and this science fiction thriller doesn't let up from there to its surprise ending. In between, there is darkness and light, corruption and redemption -- and, in all fairness, the reader should know this is NOT a typical, breezy YA novel.
The two planets of Koranth and Zoranth have survived the Exorthium Colonial Wars and have emerged as the primary worlds in this epic tale, connected by interplanetary portals and ruled by ruthless and dominant Corporations.
Tomar Donovackia is head of one of these powerful galactic firms -- and he is also a TransProphetic, born with extraordinary mental and physical abilities. "He could move from one place to another in the blink of an eye, including through the smallest of holes, such as a keyhole."
Celestina Wiroviana is Minister of Interplanetary Corporate Relations -- the most powerful woman in a hundred solar systems -- and also Tomar's lover. Together, they are making plans for domination of the universe -- including Earth, where Dylan and his younger brother Bjorn live with their mother in the teeming town of Denver, Colorado.
What do all these characters have in common? They are central to the intertwining plot of this fascinating story, which moves from one scene to the next with the speed of a space shuttle.
We find Ka being prepared for transport to the penal colony where he will spend the next twenty-five years at hard labor. It's painful to visualize the process, which is just the first of many horrific and futuristic scenarios laid out vividly in the book:
"Again he watched as the box began to move backwards out of the stacks of cells. As it had before, the box that he was in began changing and shrinking to become shaped exactly like a coffin, forcing Kadamba into a prone position. The transparent end of the box disappeared, and Kadamba simply lay there, accepting his fate."
Meanwhile, Celestina Wiroviana has consolidated her military might and become the dominant force on both worlds, stopping many wars and vowing planetary peace. But it's the beginning of a much larger betrayal -- and now Ka is part of it, identified as good soldier material and transferred from prison to a mandatory ten-year tour of duty in the Elite Special Forces.
And what of Dylan and his family? At fifteen he's found his first love. Adelita, with dark, wavy hair and a timidity that tugs at his heart.
The book rolls on. Celestina discovers a mysterious sword with a storied past, and Ka visits London, Washington, D.C., and Bangkok, searching for TransProphetics -- the key to establishing an interplanetary portal and the imminent rape of planet Earth.
What finally happens in this finely told tale? Does Ka continue in his role as elite soldier? Does Celestina find a way to use the fabled sword to strengthen her hold on the planets? And do Dylan and Adelita have even the remotest chance at a happily-ever-after ending to their part in this sweeping narrative?
Five stars for The Betrayal of Ka, and a warning that, as the saying goes, "once you start this book you won't want to put it down.'
November 6, 2015
I received a free copy in exchange for an honest review.
There was quite a bit of set up initially, around the future world, political and corporate structure, and environment. So it took a while to get to the point where you couldn't put the book down. But that point did come and I was glad I stuck it out.
There was good description, compelling characters and solid action, as well as introspection on the part of the characters. The future world was well thought out and stayed away from many of the trite views of the future envisioned in many other literary and film works.
I enjoyed it quite a bit and it became a real page turner after the slow start.
So stick with it !!!
There was quite a bit of set up initially, around the future world, political and corporate structure, and environment. So it took a while to get to the point where you couldn't put the book down. But that point did come and I was glad I stuck it out.
There was good description, compelling characters and solid action, as well as introspection on the part of the characters. The future world was well thought out and stayed away from many of the trite views of the future envisioned in many other literary and film works.
I enjoyed it quite a bit and it became a real page turner after the slow start.
So stick with it !!!
December 11, 2019
Shea Oliver here is my review. I am sorry to say I didn't like it. I was looking for good syfy. The drugs, the characters love of revenge and pettiness, with sex thrown in just in the first 17% of the book made me stop. Maybe an editor should have been consulted.
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August 24, 2019I really enjoyed reading this book. The characters and the plot worked really well to be surprising but on point! I am excited to read the second book in the series!
August 25, 2021
I received a copy of this book through Voracious Readers Only.
If there was a competition between books with false adverisements/summaries then this is the winner. I didn't finish it, got to the middle of it, and even then I had to give myself breaks to be able to continue reading it. This book just gave me so many trust issues, i will question even more strongly if the book is really as interesting as the summary suggests from now on. It is a good idea about a galactic federation making plans to attack the earth as it isn't seen often in books/movies. I love the idea of aliens (well human aliens but still) having superpowers as that isn't a trope as often made as one would think.
If you like stories about depressed teenagers in prison or books about political plays you might like it.
It is quite slow paced, i mean, there are tons of unneccessary info or mundane conversations that don't really move along the plot. I wish i was warned it is quite political, all the tags and the email that was send to me said it is science fiction, no mention of it being political, and i'm not a fan of books that include so much political motives and moves. The characters are absolutely annoying, and you know how sometimes there is at least one of the characters you admire at the very least, even if you don't like? The politicians in this book are constantly mentioned as to how powerful and smart they are, just how cunning and smart they are, even more so the girl - whatever was her name. But no evidence of this, other than a few sentences of how they will make their company/themselves rich, by selling/using various resources/people. I definitely didn't expect a sci-fi book to hold explicit content and political play, even more so given the summary of the book. There isn't one likeable or relatable character in this book. So many "cunning/evil" characters and none of them were shown as actually smart/cunning or in more depth. Same thing with the "nice" characters, they just do good things out of their hearts without any more info or depth to them. The chapters with Bjorn and Dylan were simply a dull, boring filler. I didn't get to the part where they are a significant part of the plot, but even so, is it really necessary for us to read about the two brothers eating chicken, a stranger helping one of them with math and their mom having a boyfriend, all of this is a few chapters and nothing else?
There are so many dull moments where nothing happens, or too much details about a company doing this and that, about how their marketing world works. And when there *are* conversations they are boring or just...off, don't feel real at all.
The world built looked promising, the technology and their way of living, on the different planets and the galaxy etc, but from what i saw there wasn't much mentioned of it.
I wish i knew there will be some explicit scenes, the...ahem... Intercourse scene between the two bad characters was unnecessary. All we see of the political girl is how we are told she is very badass and "manipulative", i think that was the point of this scene, but it could have been avoided anyway, just close the door behind them. The toilet scene and oh, would you look at that- water splashing him in the- was unnecessary as well.
And i don't know if it's considered such a big spoiler as it happens in chapter one, but i quite wish i knew what Ka had done before i started the book as well, as it sounded quite silly and unrealistical to me. And the book did not get any better afterwards. What he did, and the reasons he did it for, were downright stupid. "Oh no, i need those hundred bucks so much i'm gonna sell drugs to a TEN year old kid. Cause there ARE worse drugs, after all. Oh and the kid is related to the girl i simp for, but i had no idea of this, of course." The first chapter is what it sounded like, an excuse for Ka to turn into a pariah and to begin his "journey", other than anything else. His justification as he makes the decision is even more annoying and more telling on how this "accident" was just to move the plot along. And then he's like "oh no, one little innocent act can turn your life upside down - now i'm on prison" There was literally the scene with the "innocent act turning into-" being mentioned after he went to prison. Like??!!! For the main character being such a crybaby one would think he would also have two braincells left and would be cautious.
If there was a competition between books with false adverisements/summaries then this is the winner. I didn't finish it, got to the middle of it, and even then I had to give myself breaks to be able to continue reading it. This book just gave me so many trust issues, i will question even more strongly if the book is really as interesting as the summary suggests from now on. It is a good idea about a galactic federation making plans to attack the earth as it isn't seen often in books/movies. I love the idea of aliens (well human aliens but still) having superpowers as that isn't a trope as often made as one would think.
If you like stories about depressed teenagers in prison or books about political plays you might like it.
It is quite slow paced, i mean, there are tons of unneccessary info or mundane conversations that don't really move along the plot. I wish i was warned it is quite political, all the tags and the email that was send to me said it is science fiction, no mention of it being political, and i'm not a fan of books that include so much political motives and moves. The characters are absolutely annoying, and you know how sometimes there is at least one of the characters you admire at the very least, even if you don't like? The politicians in this book are constantly mentioned as to how powerful and smart they are, just how cunning and smart they are, even more so the girl - whatever was her name. But no evidence of this, other than a few sentences of how they will make their company/themselves rich, by selling/using various resources/people. I definitely didn't expect a sci-fi book to hold explicit content and political play, even more so given the summary of the book. There isn't one likeable or relatable character in this book. So many "cunning/evil" characters and none of them were shown as actually smart/cunning or in more depth. Same thing with the "nice" characters, they just do good things out of their hearts without any more info or depth to them. The chapters with Bjorn and Dylan were simply a dull, boring filler. I didn't get to the part where they are a significant part of the plot, but even so, is it really necessary for us to read about the two brothers eating chicken, a stranger helping one of them with math and their mom having a boyfriend, all of this is a few chapters and nothing else?
There are so many dull moments where nothing happens, or too much details about a company doing this and that, about how their marketing world works. And when there *are* conversations they are boring or just...off, don't feel real at all.
The world built looked promising, the technology and their way of living, on the different planets and the galaxy etc, but from what i saw there wasn't much mentioned of it.
I wish i knew there will be some explicit scenes, the...ahem... Intercourse scene between the two bad characters was unnecessary. All we see of the political girl is how we are told she is very badass and "manipulative", i think that was the point of this scene, but it could have been avoided anyway, just close the door behind them. The toilet scene and oh, would you look at that- water splashing him in the- was unnecessary as well.
And i don't know if it's considered such a big spoiler as it happens in chapter one, but i quite wish i knew what Ka had done before i started the book as well, as it sounded quite silly and unrealistical to me. And the book did not get any better afterwards. What he did, and the reasons he did it for, were downright stupid. "Oh no, i need those hundred bucks so much i'm gonna sell drugs to a TEN year old kid. Cause there ARE worse drugs, after all. Oh and the kid is related to the girl i simp for, but i had no idea of this, of course." The first chapter is what it sounded like, an excuse for Ka to turn into a pariah and to begin his "journey", other than anything else. His justification as he makes the decision is even more annoying and more telling on how this "accident" was just to move the plot along. And then he's like "oh no, one little innocent act can turn your life upside down - now i'm on prison" There was literally the scene with the "innocent act turning into-" being mentioned after he went to prison. Like??!!! For the main character being such a crybaby one would think he would also have two braincells left and would be cautious.
December 28, 2019
Ka lives with his family on a planet far from earth. Ka decides to sell drugs — a big mistake on his part. A young boy buys it, tries it and dies. The boy will haunt him for a long time. The police arrest him, is judged guilty and mistreated at prison. A politician interferes and gets him pick in her rehab program which is to train him to be a soldier. Training to be a soldier is easier than being in prison even though he has no friends. Politics are involved as this planet is governed by a corporation that ends up being only one person (Tomar) governing instead of several persons from several planets. There is greed In Tomar that has him wanting to invade earth as long as there are no Transprophetics on earth. He sends a spaceship that sends six people to inspect earth for readiness to be invaded. The six people will gather information and samples back to their planet in a spaceship that can’t accommodate the six people so they will remain on earth. They look human so that will not be a problem. Will Ka do his duty on the planet earth?
The book is science fiction with some very dark events. It isn’t horror but just the things that can happen when one is judged by a mistake and never forgiven. It is a complex novel that gave me a lot to think about what I would do or not do in his place.
Disclaimer: I received an arc of this book from the author/publisher from Netgalley. I wasn’t obligated to write a favorable review or any review at all. The opinions expressed are strictly my own.
The book is science fiction with some very dark events. It isn’t horror but just the things that can happen when one is judged by a mistake and never forgiven. It is a complex novel that gave me a lot to think about what I would do or not do in his place.
Disclaimer: I received an arc of this book from the author/publisher from Netgalley. I wasn’t obligated to write a favorable review or any review at all. The opinions expressed are strictly my own.
January 11, 2020
This book was captivating from the very start!
Its a slightly I[ really enjoyed how the author created the interweave that was the interplanatary corporations and the Ministry.
His clever creation of the different corporate bodies was very nicely done. I particularly like the twists and turns of the powerful people at the top.
As the story unfolded, I became very attached to Ka. At first he is totally obnoxious, but later on he becomes so much more detailed and complex. He is a complicated character who goes on a long personal journey within himself, to deal with his remorse over a terrible act that he foolishly committed. And although he didn't do it deliberately; he must pay for it, and pay he does, at the hands of a man who looks like a mountain. There is also a teenage boy called Dylan, who got under my skin. He's such a good lad and he's only trying to look after his brother, and his single mother. Things aren't going well for him, his mother and his younger brother.
I liked this well written story. It carries you along nicely, as it weaves in and out of chapter after chapter. There are some big fish in this intergalactic pond, and Ka is at the bottom of the pecking order. Many people's lives are about to change, but who stands to gain the most, the street crook? Or the corporate crooks? Either way, it's gonna be a serious struggle.
If you are looking for a story that has huge potential to turn into a true interplanatary extravaganza, then go for this book!I am excited about the rest of the series to come, and I think you'll love it.
Its a slightly I[ really enjoyed how the author created the interweave that was the interplanatary corporations and the Ministry.
His clever creation of the different corporate bodies was very nicely done. I particularly like the twists and turns of the powerful people at the top.
As the story unfolded, I became very attached to Ka. At first he is totally obnoxious, but later on he becomes so much more detailed and complex. He is a complicated character who goes on a long personal journey within himself, to deal with his remorse over a terrible act that he foolishly committed. And although he didn't do it deliberately; he must pay for it, and pay he does, at the hands of a man who looks like a mountain. There is also a teenage boy called Dylan, who got under my skin. He's such a good lad and he's only trying to look after his brother, and his single mother. Things aren't going well for him, his mother and his younger brother.
I liked this well written story. It carries you along nicely, as it weaves in and out of chapter after chapter. There are some big fish in this intergalactic pond, and Ka is at the bottom of the pecking order. Many people's lives are about to change, but who stands to gain the most, the street crook? Or the corporate crooks? Either way, it's gonna be a serious struggle.
If you are looking for a story that has huge potential to turn into a true interplanatary extravaganza, then go for this book!I am excited about the rest of the series to come, and I think you'll love it.
April 20, 2020
The Betrayal of Ka, a science fiction novel by Shea R. Oliver, was an interesting but unsettling read. Definitely a gritty dystopian story that exploits some of the worst aspects of society, this novel should come with a disclaimer for readers who suffer PTSD from abuse and trauma.
The story begins with the title character, Ka, who is a cocky teenage boy living in a futuristic world. The world Ka lives in does not seem ideal, but life takes a terrifying turn for the worse after a particularly heartbreaking mistake. Things seem to go from bad to worse for Ka as the story progresses; leaving him with nothing but uncertainty and pain. Spotted throughout the novel are chapters relating the stories of other characters who may or may not contribute to the overall plot.
I didn't know what to expect when I started reading this novel, which I received as a complimentary copy from the author via Voracious Readers Only. Even when I thought I had an idea of where the story might be going, Oliver threw in a twist that left me questioning how everything was supposed to fit together. The basic premise of the story is interesting, but I struggled to fully immerse myself in the narrative - I was uncomfortable with all of the sexual and violent content portrayed throughout. Also, the text itself could do with another round of editing and proofreading.
If you are a fan of dark dystopian novels and do not mind sexual or violent content, you may enjoy The Betrayal of Ka - if not, I would recommend you choose another novel.
The story begins with the title character, Ka, who is a cocky teenage boy living in a futuristic world. The world Ka lives in does not seem ideal, but life takes a terrifying turn for the worse after a particularly heartbreaking mistake. Things seem to go from bad to worse for Ka as the story progresses; leaving him with nothing but uncertainty and pain. Spotted throughout the novel are chapters relating the stories of other characters who may or may not contribute to the overall plot.
I didn't know what to expect when I started reading this novel, which I received as a complimentary copy from the author via Voracious Readers Only. Even when I thought I had an idea of where the story might be going, Oliver threw in a twist that left me questioning how everything was supposed to fit together. The basic premise of the story is interesting, but I struggled to fully immerse myself in the narrative - I was uncomfortable with all of the sexual and violent content portrayed throughout. Also, the text itself could do with another round of editing and proofreading.
If you are a fan of dark dystopian novels and do not mind sexual or violent content, you may enjoy The Betrayal of Ka - if not, I would recommend you choose another novel.
December 15, 2019
The Betrayal of Ka is an interesting enough story but it does have some problems which tilted it towards ‘average’ for me.
The dialogue is pretty stiff and just doesn’t flow naturally like real people speak. It’s all very proper and rather cold. This is especially glaring when younger characters speak.
To add to this are the names of the characters. OMG! Every single proper name is impossible to pronounce. I only wish the protagonist’s name was just Ka, no it is actually Kadamba Vorhoor. Then we have the Transprophetics, the Donovackia Corporation, and a never ending array of similar tongue twisters. I suspect the author used some on-line name generator. I get the story is set on alien worlds but these names take you right out of the story every time you encounter one. Between the stiff dialogue and the names I found it very hard to pick up the book and continue reading. It was a tedious chore instead of a pleasure.
Another issue is that the story takes a LONG time to make sense. There are so many varied aspects, incidents, and events that I kept asking ‘when is this going to come together?’
The fatal flaw for me was the main character. This guy did something so vile there is just no coming back from his actions. He deserved everything he got. How can you redeem a crime like that? I certainly couldn’t root for him and that’s not a good thing.
Three stars is generous but then again the book was free so I can’t complain.
The dialogue is pretty stiff and just doesn’t flow naturally like real people speak. It’s all very proper and rather cold. This is especially glaring when younger characters speak.
To add to this are the names of the characters. OMG! Every single proper name is impossible to pronounce. I only wish the protagonist’s name was just Ka, no it is actually Kadamba Vorhoor. Then we have the Transprophetics, the Donovackia Corporation, and a never ending array of similar tongue twisters. I suspect the author used some on-line name generator. I get the story is set on alien worlds but these names take you right out of the story every time you encounter one. Between the stiff dialogue and the names I found it very hard to pick up the book and continue reading. It was a tedious chore instead of a pleasure.
Another issue is that the story takes a LONG time to make sense. There are so many varied aspects, incidents, and events that I kept asking ‘when is this going to come together?’
The fatal flaw for me was the main character. This guy did something so vile there is just no coming back from his actions. He deserved everything he got. How can you redeem a crime like that? I certainly couldn’t root for him and that’s not a good thing.
Three stars is generous but then again the book was free so I can’t complain.
June 21, 2022
I received a copy of this book in exchange for my honest review.
This was a lot darker than I expected it to be. I knew from the blurb that Ka was labelled a murderer on his home planet, but the reason why was incredibly tragic, and the way that he was treated in prison was also incredibly dark and disturbing. Despite that, I really enjoyed this book.
This book jumps between multiple points of view, so that we get an insight into why things are happening - we follow politicans, military generals and prison guards so that we can understand how the series of events that leads to Ka getting sent to Earth play out. I found it really interesting, and the political intrigue was well written and compelling. The worldbuilding was done slowly, in a way that made sense while still making it clear that this was an alien planet, and the reveal of Transprophetics was done well as well.
I feel like this book could have been a trilogy, to be honest. A lot happened, and there were times when we would time-skip years and just go "Ka had now finished his training." when it would have benefited from more time spent watching Ka grow and complete his training. This also had the effect of making it seem like Ka wasn't the main character in the middle part of the book, as all of his actions over the span of years would be covered in a short chapter while the political machinations would be explained in greater detail, so that when, at the end of the book, Ka is one of the main characters again it came as a bit of a shock to me.
It ended on an cliff-hanger and I'm excited to know what happens next!
This was a lot darker than I expected it to be. I knew from the blurb that Ka was labelled a murderer on his home planet, but the reason why was incredibly tragic, and the way that he was treated in prison was also incredibly dark and disturbing. Despite that, I really enjoyed this book.
This book jumps between multiple points of view, so that we get an insight into why things are happening - we follow politicans, military generals and prison guards so that we can understand how the series of events that leads to Ka getting sent to Earth play out. I found it really interesting, and the political intrigue was well written and compelling. The worldbuilding was done slowly, in a way that made sense while still making it clear that this was an alien planet, and the reveal of Transprophetics was done well as well.
I feel like this book could have been a trilogy, to be honest. A lot happened, and there were times when we would time-skip years and just go "Ka had now finished his training." when it would have benefited from more time spent watching Ka grow and complete his training. This also had the effect of making it seem like Ka wasn't the main character in the middle part of the book, as all of his actions over the span of years would be covered in a short chapter while the political machinations would be explained in greater detail, so that when, at the end of the book, Ka is one of the main characters again it came as a bit of a shock to me.
It ended on an cliff-hanger and I'm excited to know what happens next!
November 12, 2019
Have you ever read a book that you felt might have been good, and it just wasn’t for you?
Thats how I feel about The Betrayal of Ka. After finishing the book, I put it down and sat for a few minutes trying to decide what I didn’t like about it, and had a hard time pinpointing the reason.
The writing is good, there was nothing that I can say that I would change. I love sci-fi, this is MY genre. The characters were not particularly likeable or hateable, but there were quite a few storylines going on all at once. I feel like Atticus’s story could have been introduced much later in the book for better effect. Jumping between two storylines can often create an amazing double tidal wave of plot, but when you get into three and four, in the first book of a series, it just becomes too much to follow. I need more investment into characters before I am introduced to more storylines. I think that’s why I never really got into this book firmly, why I kept putting it down and struggled to pick it back up; because there was too much going on at any one point in the story for it to grab me and carry me away.
2.5 stars because while the layout of the book wasn't for me, the story and ideas and writing present were quite good.
Thats how I feel about The Betrayal of Ka. After finishing the book, I put it down and sat for a few minutes trying to decide what I didn’t like about it, and had a hard time pinpointing the reason.
The writing is good, there was nothing that I can say that I would change. I love sci-fi, this is MY genre. The characters were not particularly likeable or hateable, but there were quite a few storylines going on all at once. I feel like Atticus’s story could have been introduced much later in the book for better effect. Jumping between two storylines can often create an amazing double tidal wave of plot, but when you get into three and four, in the first book of a series, it just becomes too much to follow. I need more investment into characters before I am introduced to more storylines. I think that’s why I never really got into this book firmly, why I kept putting it down and struggled to pick it back up; because there was too much going on at any one point in the story for it to grab me and carry me away.
2.5 stars because while the layout of the book wasn't for me, the story and ideas and writing present were quite good.
January 24, 2020
Quite a unique book
I don't even know how to review this book. It has aliens in another world doing terrible things to gain great power and wealth. Ka is a teenager just starting a new career as a drug dealer. Unfortunately he makes a terrible decision to sell a drug to an underage boy who died and he becomes a convicted child murderer. He suffers greatly for this crime. In the meantime we see a corporate leader become a ruthless power hungry head of a gigantic private army which has plans to exploitate several planets including Earth. Ka, through unusual circumstances ends up on Earth in an advance team. He ends up in Denver as a kindly neighbor to two boys (transprophetics) that have an unusual power that the aliens are hunting to kill them. He is determined to save them and Earth from his own people. So much goes on in this book and leads us into the next one that will lead to an invasion. We know the brothers will play an important role in saving Earth, but how? A great read that you shouldn't pass up if you like well written science fiction. I can't remember if I got this book for free or not, but this is a honest review.
I don't even know how to review this book. It has aliens in another world doing terrible things to gain great power and wealth. Ka is a teenager just starting a new career as a drug dealer. Unfortunately he makes a terrible decision to sell a drug to an underage boy who died and he becomes a convicted child murderer. He suffers greatly for this crime. In the meantime we see a corporate leader become a ruthless power hungry head of a gigantic private army which has plans to exploitate several planets including Earth. Ka, through unusual circumstances ends up on Earth in an advance team. He ends up in Denver as a kindly neighbor to two boys (transprophetics) that have an unusual power that the aliens are hunting to kill them. He is determined to save them and Earth from his own people. So much goes on in this book and leads us into the next one that will lead to an invasion. We know the brothers will play an important role in saving Earth, but how? A great read that you shouldn't pass up if you like well written science fiction. I can't remember if I got this book for free or not, but this is a honest review.
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