Good storyline and likeable characters
Personally, I dislike reading books written in the third person, and this one did not help that dislike, because at times what was written was confusing and didn't make sense. Re-reading a few passages multiple times still had me wondering what the author had meant to convey.
Reasonably well written otherwise, but there are a number of spelling and punctuation errors which I don’t expect to come across in a published book. It needs to be edited, and there are also simple, silly errors that dont make sense in the story ie, who wears a plaid shirt UNDER a long sleeved Henley? And why was the pregnant Lily drinking wine at dinner, but then later when Adam thought she was, he then chooses to be upset, but not while at dinner with her?
My feeling is that in trying to be quite descriptive with the writing, some things end up 'lost in translation', and there's also a LOT of what I'd refer to as the FMC's 'internal monologue' (even though in the 3rd person) waffling away and filling the pages - such as unnecessary commentry on a minor character's clothes when it doesn't add value to the story.
I held in there, because I liked the storyline, Adam's character grew a little and he slowly let his defenses down, letting Lily in.
Personally, I won't be reading the other books in the series as this one was frustrating to read, the storylines might seem good, but the overboard descriptive writing and editing issues are enough to put me off with this one. I do feel this could be a great story with some editing.