Sam and Annabel are pleased when they are selected to take a cruise to the Arctic. And they are thrilled when they learn that the cruise will take them past a site connected to the most famous mystery in Arctic the Franklin Expedition. But things on the cruise are not what they seem. When Sam and Annabel make a startling discovery on a small island close to where archaeologists are diving on the wreck of the Erebus , one of the Franklin’s ships, they are confronted by an old enemy. Isolated and outnumbered, how can they possibly save the priceless artifact that may hold the answer to the Franklin mystery?
John Wilson, an ex-geologist and frustrated historian, is the award-winning author of fifty novels and non-fiction books for adults and teens. His passion for history informs everything he writes, from the recreated journal of an officer on Sir John Franklin’s doomed Arctic expedition to young soldiers experiencing the horrors of the First and Second World Wars and a memoir of his own history. John researches and writes in Lantzville on Vancouver Island. There are many more details in his memoir, Lands of Lost Content, https://www.amazon.com/Lands-Lost-Con...
This reads like it was written by a very clever 6th grader. I don't know how else to describe it. It gave me flashbacks of middle school, working a shift in the writing lab and struggling to encouragingly say "you have potential, but this is not good writing."
It's clever, fun, engaging, and decently written with no grammatical errors or terrible word choice. Many adult authors writing for adults can't pull that off! On the other hand, it seems written by a person without a basic understanding of how real people talk, how adults behave, and how the world works. This person has literally never heard the advice "show, don't tell." The protagonists seem like kids from another century, with no cell phones, oddly formal speech, and no parental authority figures of any kind (there was briefly one dad, who asked his son permission to come along on a sketchy Arctic adventure? but already knew he'd say no?). It's bizarre to my adult eyes, but might seem great to kids and is a cool intro to the Franklin expedition (with a few fun macabre details).
It's also third in a series, but it's unclear what the first two books are even called. It hardly mattered, since the entire plots were awkwardly narrated by the main characters to each other ("Professor Plum? He tried to murder us in the conservatory!" "That is right, he wanted to kill us with the candlestick." "Yes, that is what happened. Shall we do another cryptic crossword puzzle?") I rate it confused and a half stars!