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Noah McCormack spent his life looking up to his best friend’s dad, Logan Kavanagh. Now Noah wants to do more than look, but can Noah convince Logan to see him as someone other than the boy next door?
Reader advisory: This story is fantasy and involves a coercive relationship, under-negotiated and unsafe sex, and the application of maple syrup to an orifice it was never designed for. It should in no way be considered a blueprint for either a healthy partnership, or proper waffle procedure.
***written by M. Caspian for BDSM group's BRING OUT YOUR KINK- Bound by Ink writing event.
Reader advisory: This story is fantasy and involves a coercive relationship, under-negotiated and unsafe sex, and the application of maple syrup to an orifice it was never designed for. It should in no way be considered a blueprint for either a healthy partnership, or proper waffle procedure.
***written by M. Caspian for BDSM group's BRING OUT YOUR KINK- Bound by Ink writing event.
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First published October 7, 2015
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March 12, 2016
sometimes, all you need is some really filthy escandalo.
m. caspian is good for that sort of thing.
thing is, i always forget how devious she is!!!
i had a desire for problematic smut.
this desire has been amply satisfied.
only now that i read it i'm looking around like
but checkit, peeps:
there is no way in hell i'm picking a fight with 2,087 of my goodreads buddies over this.
nope! not happening.
suffice it to say i choose to interpret the infamous final scene as the author's explicit signal that the whole thing's been one long, carefully planned mindfuck masquerading as fluff, and that she's not at all in any way a reformed character, given her extensively kinky rap sheet in the world of WTFsmut.
and nobody can convince me otherwise.
because if that wasn't the most underhanded, two-timing, switcheroo with surprise omg-it-was-the-other-way-around-the-whole-time shock ending...
why the hell am i still laughing?
fuck, but m. caspian plays drrrrrrrrrrrrty.
m. caspian is good for that sort of thing.
thing is, i always forget how devious she is!!!
i had a desire for problematic smut.
this desire has been amply satisfied.
only now that i read it i'm looking around like
but checkit, peeps:
there is no way in hell i'm picking a fight with 2,087 of my goodreads buddies over this.
nope! not happening.
suffice it to say i choose to interpret the infamous final scene as the author's explicit signal that the whole thing's been one long, carefully planned mindfuck masquerading as fluff, and that she's not at all in any way a reformed character, given her extensively kinky rap sheet in the world of WTFsmut.
and nobody can convince me otherwise.
because if that wasn't the most underhanded, two-timing, switcheroo with surprise omg-it-was-the-other-way-around-the-whole-time shock ending...
why the hell am i still laughing?
fuck, but m. caspian plays drrrrrrrrrrrrty.
October 12, 2015
"Noah itched to be held. Gripped. Forced. He wanted someone to pin him down and make him take it."
You can't hear my purring but I am.
This is fluff?
Fluff me anytime, M. Caspian.
The prompt was exquisite. It's a fave guilty pleasure that barely crosses the line of inappropriate(depending on who you ask): dad fucking his son's best friend.
I can hear that heated sigh through the screen. No one has to know. You wanna go look at the prompt? Trust me, you do. I'll wait. IKR? That GIF is EVERYTHING!!
And this short story is just about everything. Because instead of dumping us like lechers directly in a forbidden tryst without the buildup (like so many PWP tend to do), M. Caspian brings us on journey of young Noah's budding sexuality and the object of his affection, his best friend Jesse's father, Mr. Logan Kavanaugh.
“When something is mine, Noah McCormack, I keep it. Forever. If you choose me, there’s no going back. Are you sure you’re ready for that?”
Noah is a latchkey kid - brilliant and lonely. Jesse is a few years older befriends him as does his father. Mr. Kavanaugh nurtures the little foundling, becomes the shoulder to cry on when life gets too hard, a cheerleader when life rewards Noah's hard work and friend when he's starved for company since Jesse does have that pesky little age gap. (Brilliant BTW) We meet Noah when he is eleven, watch as his innocent infatuation develops into something more as he ages. (Nothing tawdry happens while he's underage. Though Noah (and I) might've wanted it once or twice)
When the magical age of eighteen looms, Noah starts to notice the things that stick out about some of Mr. Kavanaugh's behavior is pretty fucking hot. And he wants him.
Badly.
And his 18th birthday comes and passes. Still nothing.
And reading Noah drive Logan out of his mind was hot as hell.
But when Logan finally breaks?
“Just look at you, sweetheart. You’re so fucking gorgeous. I can’t wait to feed my cock into you.”
Let me break out a fave gif of mine:
(It sums up my feels of the erotic portion of "Mine" succinctly)
The dirty talk. *quelts*
“No one else gets to do this to you. Ever. They touch you and I’ll find them and kill them, and then I’ll find you and fuck you until you cry.”
Noah’s arms wobbled and then gave way, dropping him face first onto the mattress. “Fuck. Yes. Please. Only you. No one else.”
“You moan just like a little bitch, don’t you? Let’s see what noises I can pull out of you when I pound your ass.”
The thickness of Logan pushed against his hole, and Noah gasped as Logan pressed inside, his thrust rough, forcing Noah against the cabinetry with a cry.
“Yeah. You’re Daddy’s perfect little whore, aren’t you?”
Hint of Daddy kink...and hello!!! Jackpot!! I am at the pearly, semen coated gates of Smut Nirvana. I see the lights and they are shaded red.
Okay, okay, alright, alright, okay. Bear with me. The last bit. I'm already a quelted mess of goo on the floor from the mine-ing and the smut and the everything, right?
And then enter Jesse, stage right.
Logan and Jesse...it was like I bypassed touching Smut Nirvana and got shown the shortcut.
And here's the thing where all the Nifty porn usually fails for me, when Daddy and his boy get together, they bring in a third. So, so, so happy Logan stresses that Noah's hole is his alone.
And that's why this is a five. (The dirty talk and (unintentional) grooming didn't hurt either)
Smut on M. Caspian. As a long time reader of this smutty trope...you've done it justice, oh yes. My thanks to all involved behind this story and the event.
October 8, 2015
I had some feels.
Then my face melted.
And I had to use a fan to cool myself and to drown out the grunting.
The end.
For a more in-depth review, see Baby's.
Thanks to the author and her team for participating in the Bound By Ink event.
Then my face melted.
And I had to use a fan to cool myself and to drown out the grunting.
The end.
For a more in-depth review, see Baby's.
Thanks to the author and her team for participating in the Bound By Ink event.
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June 25, 2017Filthy, adorably so.
Needless to say, I'm a lucky girl. I got to beta-read this :P
So, M. says,
Which to be fair, comparatively speaking this is 100% correct.
But... for everyone else it's more like this:
Needless to say, I'm a lucky girl. I got to beta-read this :P
So, M. says,
Which to be fair, comparatively speaking this is 100% correct.
But... for everyone else it's more like this:
January 24, 2018
I loved the last 25%. I could have done with a little less of the young Noah and more like the last bit. But it fulfilled my kinky daddy needs at the moment...
“I tried to steer you clear of me. Tried to do right by you. But you kept fucking pushing, all the time, never stopping. And now, I’m going to make you my perfect little fuck toy. And you’re going to love it, aren’t you, sweetheart?”
October 9, 2015
I felt a skosh uncomfortable at the beginning and during the very last scene (and no, it wasn't the syrup--feel free to apply that as lavishly as possible), but the parts in between were excellent. Overall,
Also, I know I've got Kraken, The Arroyo and Fallout twiddling their thumbs on my Kindle--I need to read that shit.
December 18, 2017
4.25 stars!
I really like this book it was short but so good! The story starts with Noah being a kid and having a crush on Logan, his best friend father. We see how the relationship between Noah and Logan starts so innocent. The build up of their relationship was so sweet and tender. Over the years Noah's feeling for Logan go deeper more than the physical attraction he falls in love with the caring man who's been there for him so many times. Logan fought his feelings for Noah as well wanting for him to live life and have experiences.
Even though this book is short it didn't feel rushed the pace was perfect there was no unnecessary drama, no games just two people who fall for each other. They try to fight a bit because they think is wrong because of the age gap but once they give in to their feelings it was super hot. One thing about "Mine" was it started out sweet but then when these to gave into each other they got down, dirty and kinky. I would of loved to see them more playing out their sexual encounters cause they were hot and Logan turned out to be so deliciously possessive other than that, I love it! I would totally re read this one. ❤️
I really like this book it was short but so good! The story starts with Noah being a kid and having a crush on Logan, his best friend father. We see how the relationship between Noah and Logan starts so innocent. The build up of their relationship was so sweet and tender. Over the years Noah's feeling for Logan go deeper more than the physical attraction he falls in love with the caring man who's been there for him so many times. Logan fought his feelings for Noah as well wanting for him to live life and have experiences.
Even though this book is short it didn't feel rushed the pace was perfect there was no unnecessary drama, no games just two people who fall for each other. They try to fight a bit because they think is wrong because of the age gap but once they give in to their feelings it was super hot. One thing about "Mine" was it started out sweet but then when these to gave into each other they got down, dirty and kinky. I would of loved to see them more playing out their sexual encounters cause they were hot and Logan turned out to be so deliciously possessive other than that, I love it! I would totally re read this one. ❤️
December 16, 2017
The story starts off with Noah as an 11 year old. He has a crush on best friends dad who is 20 years older. The story is told only in Noah's pov and progresses until he is 18 years old. Now he's legal and still in love with his best friend's dad. It doesn't take a genius to figure out what happens next.
For a short story, it was well paced with the right amount of filthy kink. ;-)
For a short story, it was well paced with the right amount of filthy kink. ;-)
October 24, 2017
I want more, more, more, more, more, more (and on and on).
Hot damn, I want MORE!
Hot damn, I want MORE!
July 6, 2016
This is the best kind of crushing-on-my-friend's-dad story.
Noah has worshiped Logan Kavanagh since he was 8 years old. Mr. K is the dad Noah never had: kind, supportive, helpful. But when Noah hits on Mr. Kavanagh, Mr. K pushes him away. He says Noah is too young, that he needs to meet a nice boy his own age.
But Noah doesn't want nice. He wants Logan.
I love kinky stories that MEAN something. The slow burn here was almost as hot as the coming together. Almost.
Light on the BDSM, heavy on the tenderness and character development, and SO DAMN SEXY, I could barely think. And that was before the maple syrup came into play. Yowza!
That last scene in the kitchen, however, was ... weird. I'm not sure what to make of it honestly. I can see Noah getting off on that, but Logan? I guess Logan wanted to prove something. He was all MINE and FOREVER with Noah, and what better way to show Noah that he doesn't have to hide.
Noah has worshiped Logan Kavanagh since he was 8 years old. Mr. K is the dad Noah never had: kind, supportive, helpful. But when Noah hits on Mr. Kavanagh, Mr. K pushes him away. He says Noah is too young, that he needs to meet a nice boy his own age.
But Noah doesn't want nice. He wants Logan.
I love kinky stories that MEAN something. The slow burn here was almost as hot as the coming together. Almost.
Light on the BDSM, heavy on the tenderness and character development, and SO DAMN SEXY, I could barely think. And that was before the maple syrup came into play. Yowza!
That last scene in the kitchen, however, was ... weird. I'm not sure what to make of it honestly. I can see Noah getting off on that, but Logan? I guess Logan wanted to prove something. He was all MINE and FOREVER with Noah, and what better way to show Noah that he doesn't have to hide.
December 17, 2017
I loved the hell out of this book. 😍 It was unbelievably good for just 55 pages. You know what this short story reminds me of? It reminds me of a chocolate soufflé .. small yet luxurious and a satisfying ambrosia. Loved everything about this shortie. 💝 I won’t say it’s logical or plausible because it isn’t and it doesn’t need to be. It’s just a good, little kinky dessert to enjoy in your leisure. 😌
Noah is home alone almost all the time. Father left the family and mom had to work double shifts to be able to support both of them. However, he has a kind neighbor who also happens to be his best friend and his dad is super cool. Always taking care of Noah and helps the family out anytime he can. The thing is Noah has been hot for Mr. K aka his best friend’s dad since he hit puberty. 😁 Lusting and loving after strong, macho, responsible man for as long as he can remember. 😉 And for Mr. K, he really feels bad for his son’s bestie for his family’s unfortunate situation. And he takes care of the kid whenever he can. The thing is .. all his feelings for Noah is just platonic or a bit more than that? Just paternal, protective care instinct or possessive, macho, alpha male urges? 😜
Do you like Daddy kink? Do you like strong macho, athletic, muscled, gentleman daddies and innocent yet eager to please and a bit slutty virgin boys? 😁 Look no further, dive into it. You won’t regret. 🤗 Frankly, I’m quite jaded with most books’ smut and if a book makes me blush and excited, its smut truly is phenomenal. 😂👏 And this shortie made me blush and sweat and hot! 😁 And the dialogues are to die for! 😘 A perfect amount about of sweet angst and smexy! ☺️ And the story has a HEA. 😍A very merry and a freaking sexy HEA and also available on KU. So what do you need more? 😉
Favorite excerpt from the story: 💗💜💗
”He didn’t even know what he wanted. But he wanted, he knew that much.”
“When something is mine, Noah McCormack, I keep it. Forever. If you choose me, there’s no going back. Are you sure you’re ready for that?”
“now, I’m going to make you my perfect little fuck toy. And you’re going to love it, aren’t you, sweetheart?”
“because Logan owned him, had made him, all the best bits of him. Every sin, every moment of grace.”
5 possessive daddies and seductive virgin boys stars
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Noah is home alone almost all the time. Father left the family and mom had to work double shifts to be able to support both of them. However, he has a kind neighbor who also happens to be his best friend and his dad is super cool. Always taking care of Noah and helps the family out anytime he can. The thing is Noah has been hot for Mr. K aka his best friend’s dad since he hit puberty. 😁 Lusting and loving after strong, macho, responsible man for as long as he can remember. 😉 And for Mr. K, he really feels bad for his son’s bestie for his family’s unfortunate situation. And he takes care of the kid whenever he can. The thing is .. all his feelings for Noah is just platonic or a bit more than that? Just paternal, protective care instinct or possessive, macho, alpha male urges? 😜
Do you like Daddy kink? Do you like strong macho, athletic, muscled, gentleman daddies and innocent yet eager to please and a bit slutty virgin boys? 😁 Look no further, dive into it. You won’t regret. 🤗 Frankly, I’m quite jaded with most books’ smut and if a book makes me blush and excited, its smut truly is phenomenal. 😂👏 And this shortie made me blush and sweat and hot! 😁 And the dialogues are to die for! 😘 A perfect amount about of sweet angst and smexy! ☺️ And the story has a HEA. 😍A very merry and a freaking sexy HEA and also available on KU. So what do you need more? 😉
Favorite excerpt from the story: 💗💜💗
”He didn’t even know what he wanted. But he wanted, he knew that much.”
“When something is mine, Noah McCormack, I keep it. Forever. If you choose me, there’s no going back. Are you sure you’re ready for that?”
“now, I’m going to make you my perfect little fuck toy. And you’re going to love it, aren’t you, sweetheart?”
“because Logan owned him, had made him, all the best bits of him. Every sin, every moment of grace.”
5 possessive daddies and seductive virgin boys stars
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
February 29, 2016
Sneak reading smut at work is an extreme sport.
"And now, I’m going to make you my perfect little fuck toy. And you’re going to love it, aren’t you, sweetheart?"
Uh yeah, most likely.
"Gonna strip you naked and make you climb onto my lap and bounce on my cock. Have all those men look at you and know they can’t have you."
I won't say no to that.
“Oh, I love it when you whine. You’re my needy little slut, aren’t you?”
Um..
“Yeah. You’re Daddy’s perfect little whore, aren’t you?”
"All of you is mine. And only mine. No one else gets you. Ever."
I'm totally on board with that.
So anyway, smut with fluff. I could have used some more daddy kink though. I've got my fingers-crossed for more of Noah and Logan.
Now I'm going to go back to sneak reading smut during work.
"And now, I’m going to make you my perfect little fuck toy. And you’re going to love it, aren’t you, sweetheart?"
Uh yeah, most likely.
"Gonna strip you naked and make you climb onto my lap and bounce on my cock. Have all those men look at you and know they can’t have you."
I won't say no to that.
“Oh, I love it when you whine. You’re my needy little slut, aren’t you?”
Um..
“Yeah. You’re Daddy’s perfect little whore, aren’t you?”
"All of you is mine. And only mine. No one else gets you. Ever."
I'm totally on board with that.
So anyway, smut with fluff. I could have used some more daddy kink though. I've got my fingers-crossed for more of Noah and Logan.
Now I'm going to go back to sneak reading smut during work.
January 3, 2018
Noah is eleven years old and gay but he has absolutely no one he can discuss this with. His best friend and next door neighbour Jessie is fourteen and has just discovered his dad’s “a fag” and Noah now knows his friend would never understand, the disgust in his voice alone was enough. him.
Noah is young hurt and alone his mother is never home working all the hours she can to keep a roof over their heads.
Nearly a year later Mr. Kavanagah (Jessie’s Dad) gets talking to Noah and the friendship is rekindled between them.
Understandably Noah is attracted to Mr. Kavanagah who’s tall, tattooed and handsome. His feelings grow stronger the more time they spend together and they spend a lot of time together.
I loved this short little read, it felt much longer than its 48 pages. The relationship between these two slowly builds as the book moves along and I thought it was a beautiful fantasy read.
December 1, 2015
We'll just add this baby to the ole 'one-handed read' pile. Extra points for the deliciously hot sex-talk, always a favorite of this reader. Ditto daddy-kink.
Character-driven smut--who'd a thunk it?
Character-driven smut--who'd a thunk it?
October 7, 2015
4.5 stars
Fucking hell. That was panty melting.
I mean, it took a while to get there, but once it did, Jesus tap-dancing Christ!
Noah has always had strong feelings for his best friend's father, Logan. Sure, Logan has been like a second father to him, but it's so much more than that. Fantasies of submitting to the man and being held down by him have always been there, but they've only gotten stronger as the years go on.
When Noah turns eighteen, he sets out to get Logan's attention, only to be met with resistance.
But even the strongest resistance can break.
And sometimes reality is so much better than the fantasy.
If you need me, I'll just be over here, staring at the prompt gif...
...Rereading the naughty bits.
...Taking a cold shower.
My thanks to the author for their participation in the Bring Out Your Kink event.
Fucking hell. That was panty melting.
I mean, it took a while to get there, but once it did, Jesus tap-dancing Christ!
Noah has always had strong feelings for his best friend's father, Logan. Sure, Logan has been like a second father to him, but it's so much more than that. Fantasies of submitting to the man and being held down by him have always been there, but they've only gotten stronger as the years go on.
When Noah turns eighteen, he sets out to get Logan's attention, only to be met with resistance.
But even the strongest resistance can break.
And sometimes reality is so much better than the fantasy.
If you need me, I'll just be over here, staring at the prompt gif...
...Rereading the naughty bits.
...Taking a cold shower.
My thanks to the author for their participation in the Bring Out Your Kink event.
October 13, 2015
Delicious!!
Goodness that was my kinda book! So hot I have no words... so I'll just share them straight from the story...
“Keep your head up. I want you to watch me wreck your hole.”
“No one else gets to do this to you. Ever. They touch you and I’ll find them and kill them, and then I’ll find you and fuck you until you cry.”
And of course a personal favourite...
“Yeah. You’re Daddy’s perfect little whore, aren’t you?"
Despite all of these super sexy and very dirty moments, the majority of the story was the build up to the relationship. It started as an innocent father figure type relationship when Noah was 11 and then obviously developed to lust in Noah's teenage years and then their eventual 'romantic' (hardly) relationship, when Noah hits legal age.
What I really liked about the build up though was the closeness these two shared, having been together for most of Noah's life, it felt realistic that they know almost everything about each other and are so comfortable together.
Just thought I'd give a little mention to that last scene... some people may find it... uncomfortable, I am not one of those people :-D
August 27, 2016
3,5-4 ⭐️A nice read this one
The writing was good, the flow was good, the tension lesser then I hoped. The last part when Logan finally gives in was a bit rushed and Logan had a character switch that wasn't really convincing. The inner thoughts and the feelings from Noah were gone. Again, a nice entertaining short read.
The writing was good, the flow was good, the tension lesser then I hoped. The last part when Logan finally gives in was a bit rushed and Logan had a character switch that wasn't really convincing. The inner thoughts and the feelings from Noah were gone. Again, a nice entertaining short read.
February 28, 2016
The only good part of my day.
Full disclosure: I am hung over as fuck. Was it the vodka coke? The caesars? The wine coolers? The ciders? I don't know. I'm not a doctor. What I do know is that reading Mine has been the only good part of my day.
A few spoilers past this point.
So, BDSM ain't my thang. I'll almost always avoid books with the BDSM on them. But I heart everything M. Caspian writes, so I figured this is probably worth it, regardless. Don't worry if BDSM isn't really for you. This story doesn't go too deep into the BDSM lifestyle. But there is lots of uber sexy dirty talk and daddy kink, which is A+ in my books.
I seriously loved this short story. Not a thing I'd change. Great pacing, believable characterization, super sexy dialogue. I liked the way Logan resisted Noah for so long. Didn't want this to delve into the creepy realm, which it never did. There is some fluffy, feely stuff here, which was great to have in a story with some serious sex appeal.
And personally, I thought the ending was great. At first I hid my face and was like, "OH NOEZ X40" but then the little show for Jesse continued? Unexpected and hot as fuck. So taboo and so good. Hell, I wouldn't have been adverse to... you know.... *eyebrow wiggle* (@SaraStanton knows what I'm talkin' 'bout). But seriously, the ending surprised me in a totally good way.
Also, I would like the author to personally consider this a formal request for mentioned club scene with some lap rideage and some (many) spectators.
Overall, I would've paid money for this.
Thanks for the awesome freebie! Now, back to my dimly-lit room and ginger ale.
Full disclosure: I am hung over as fuck. Was it the vodka coke? The caesars? The wine coolers? The ciders? I don't know. I'm not a doctor. What I do know is that reading Mine has been the only good part of my day.
A few spoilers past this point.
So, BDSM ain't my thang. I'll almost always avoid books with the BDSM on them. But I heart everything M. Caspian writes, so I figured this is probably worth it, regardless. Don't worry if BDSM isn't really for you. This story doesn't go too deep into the BDSM lifestyle. But there is lots of uber sexy dirty talk and daddy kink, which is A+ in my books.
I seriously loved this short story. Not a thing I'd change. Great pacing, believable characterization, super sexy dialogue. I liked the way Logan resisted Noah for so long. Didn't want this to delve into the creepy realm, which it never did. There is some fluffy, feely stuff here, which was great to have in a story with some serious sex appeal.
And personally, I thought the ending was great. At first I hid my face and was like, "OH NOEZ X40" but then the little show for Jesse continued? Unexpected and hot as fuck. So taboo and so good. Hell, I wouldn't have been adverse to... you know.... *eyebrow wiggle* (@SaraStanton knows what I'm talkin' 'bout). But seriously, the ending surprised me in a totally good way.
Also, I would like the author to personally consider this a formal request for mentioned club scene with some lap rideage and some (many) spectators.
Overall, I would've paid money for this.
Thanks for the awesome freebie! Now, back to my dimly-lit room and ginger ale.
my-writes
September 16, 2015No one dies! No one even loses a limb. Apparently, fluff happened.
Jeanne, I hope you enjoy your story.
Jeanne, I hope you enjoy your story.
November 20, 2015
At first, It's all like
there's a kid who likes his best friend's dad and there's some feeling-y stuff and all
and then the Noah turns 18 and finally lands the man he's been after for so long and the smut starts
Like HOLY fUCKiNG HeLL
Big, older dude with lithe younger dude so there's a BIG AGE GAP YES
Possessive declarations of 'MINE!'
Pet names
Dirty Talk Bloody hell Mother of god ALL THE DIRTY TALK
(2 GIFs because just one can't cut it for the dirty talk)
When it ended, I was like... whoa.
I just
there's a kid who likes his best friend's dad and there's some feeling-y stuff and all
and then the Noah turns 18 and finally lands the man he's been after for so long and the smut starts
Like HOLY fUCKiNG HeLL
Big, older dude with lithe younger dude so there's a BIG AGE GAP YES
Possessive declarations of 'MINE!'
Pet names
Dirty Talk Bloody hell Mother of god ALL THE DIRTY TALK
(2 GIFs because just one can't cut it for the dirty talk)
When it ended, I was like... whoa.
I just
October 7, 2015
*pauses*
...yeah, I don't know what to say. This was all kinds of messed up for me. It started off sweet and a little angsty, going in a direction I enjoyed. Then some of the seemingly normal early scenes made me a bit uneasy and that grew to serious discomfort later on. All stemming from odd, inappropriate interactions between the MCs. It felt like the story in the beginning evolved into something quite different. That transition threw me off, big time. What we ended up with, though, was deliciously pervy. Omg, those scenes at the end...
Hell if I know how to rate this...
Qualified 3 stars for the mixed feelings in the beginning and all the stars for everything after Noah started college?
*retreads last few scenes*
Ok, 4 stars :P
...yeah, I don't know what to say. This was all kinds of messed up for me. It started off sweet and a little angsty, going in a direction I enjoyed. Then some of the seemingly normal early scenes made me a bit uneasy and that grew to serious discomfort later on. All stemming from odd, inappropriate interactions between the MCs. It felt like the story in the beginning evolved into something quite different. That transition threw me off, big time. What we ended up with, though, was deliciously pervy. Omg, those scenes at the end...
Hell if I know how to rate this...
Qualified 3 stars for the mixed feelings in the beginning and all the stars for everything after Noah started college?
*retreads last few scenes*
Ok, 4 stars :P
December 17, 2017
More, more, more. Where’s the sequel?
I have to admit, I skimmed the beginning because I felt it would make me uncomfortable from reading the reviews. I read every word once he was in high school.
Nicely written. Very talented author.
Even though I’m not a fan of the use of “sweetheart” I loved the dialogue!
I have to admit, I skimmed the beginning because I felt it would make me uncomfortable from reading the reviews. I read every word once he was in high school.
Nicely written. Very talented author.
Even though I’m not a fan of the use of “sweetheart” I loved the dialogue!
October 8, 2015
I thought I was going to get pedo-vibe. Thank goodness, there's none.
I really loved the relationship between them. Thank you so much to the author and the team behind this story. <3
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Damn it. The gif is so hot.
And I really liked the blurb. Can't wait to read this!
https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...
I really loved the relationship between them. Thank you so much to the author and the team behind this story. <3
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Damn it. The gif is so hot.
And I really liked the blurb. Can't wait to read this!
https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...
September 16, 2018
oh HECK Yeah! That was soooo fine - Daddy Kink perfection!
And now I know what the cover is referring to, it works even better (maple syrupy goodness).
And now I know what the cover is referring to, it works even better (maple syrupy goodness).
October 8, 2015
Wow! That was everything I could have wished for.
March 27, 2018
I. LOVED. THIS. DELECTABLE. FILTHY. STORY!
Kinky and slutty...just my cup of tea! Or should I say, maple syrup?
The first part of this story seems harmless enough, an eleven year old boy crushing on his best friend’s dad. The years pass and he’s still crushing.
Time for college, he’s eighteen and makes his move but gets turned down. But he’s still crushing on the dad, except now he’s living with him. Things come to a head (pun intended) and Dad gives in.
And my oh my, can Daddy dish out the dirty, filthy, slutty talk. I FREAKING LOVED IT!
Age gap, hot dad, Daddy Kink, virgin, barebacking, barely legal, D/s, exhibitionism (I include family members here), use of organic food products as a back door glaze and lubricant, if any of these things offend you, don’t read this short. If you’re like me and LOVE well written smut as well as organically grown foodstuffs put to creative uses, READ THIS NOW!
Kinky and slutty...just my cup of tea! Or should I say, maple syrup?
The first part of this story seems harmless enough, an eleven year old boy crushing on his best friend’s dad. The years pass and he’s still crushing.
Time for college, he’s eighteen and makes his move but gets turned down. But he’s still crushing on the dad, except now he’s living with him. Things come to a head (pun intended) and Dad gives in.
And my oh my, can Daddy dish out the dirty, filthy, slutty talk. I FREAKING LOVED IT!
Age gap, hot dad, Daddy Kink, virgin, barebacking, barely legal, D/s, exhibitionism (I include family members here), use of organic food products as a back door glaze and lubricant, if any of these things offend you, don’t read this short. If you’re like me and LOVE well written smut as well as organically grown foodstuffs put to creative uses, READ THIS NOW!
February 27, 2016
First half 1 Star -- Second half 4 Star
OK, so I REALLY don't know how to rate this book. The first half made me uncomfortable as hell, and the second half was HOT as hell.
So we have Noah whose best friend is Jesse (I think that was his name), and Logan who is Jesse's father. Jesse & Logan live next door to Noah and his mom. My problem with the first half of the book is that Noah is underage, like really underage. It starts off when he is 11, and he knows he is gay, and he kind of pervs on Logan.
Logan never makes any pedo moves on Noah, but you read about him going over to watch movies with Logan, and cuddling and other things, that wouldn't necessarily be bad if we didn't know through Noah's POV that he wants Logan in a not so platonic way. He even hacks Logan's computer to search his porn history and signs up to the same site, and he is still under 18! This kind of stuff goes on until he turns 17, and puts the moves on Logan. Logan rejects him that time and the story progresses.
Eventually in the second half of the book the mom decides to take a job in another state and Jesse suggests Noah moves in with Logan, well you can see where this is headed. They start a hot as hell, sort of daddy/boy relationship, and live HEA.
The thing is, as hot as I found the second half of the book, I was still slightly disturbed by the whole premise. Had the two just meet, the 18/40 age thing wouldn't had bothered me, or the BDSM relationship, but we have Logan who has watched Noah grow up! I don't know, it was just all a little...uncomfortable. Oh, and I almost forgot, at the end of the book Jesse walks in on Noah and Logan going at it in the kitchen, and stands there watching in interest...ummm.
OK, so I REALLY don't know how to rate this book. The first half made me uncomfortable as hell, and the second half was HOT as hell.
So we have Noah whose best friend is Jesse (I think that was his name), and Logan who is Jesse's father. Jesse & Logan live next door to Noah and his mom. My problem with the first half of the book is that Noah is underage, like really underage. It starts off when he is 11, and he knows he is gay, and he kind of pervs on Logan.
Logan never makes any pedo moves on Noah, but you read about him going over to watch movies with Logan, and cuddling and other things, that wouldn't necessarily be bad if we didn't know through Noah's POV that he wants Logan in a not so platonic way. He even hacks Logan's computer to search his porn history and signs up to the same site, and he is still under 18! This kind of stuff goes on until he turns 17, and puts the moves on Logan. Logan rejects him that time and the story progresses.
Eventually in the second half of the book the mom decides to take a job in another state and Jesse suggests Noah moves in with Logan, well you can see where this is headed. They start a hot as hell, sort of daddy/boy relationship, and live HEA.
The thing is, as hot as I found the second half of the book, I was still slightly disturbed by the whole premise. Had the two just meet, the 18/40 age thing wouldn't had bothered me, or the BDSM relationship, but we have Logan who has watched Noah grow up! I don't know, it was just all a little...uncomfortable. Oh, and I almost forgot, at the end of the book Jesse walks in on Noah and Logan going at it in the kitchen, and stands there watching in interest...ummm.
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November 22, 2015Caveat: M. Caspian is a GR friend.
As with Lisa Henry's The Last Rebellion I can't give this any rating. It was written to a prompt, hits the prompt full-on, is much liked by the promptgiver, so it would be unfair to rate according to my gut reaction. Not just that, I also have a problem with content vs. intent and the quality of the storytelling in relation to how I would rate due the subject.
"Mine" is an extremely well and underhandedly told story of child abuse, child grooming, and in the end of the consummation of the grooming achievements. What comes along as an alleged BDSM-romance, given its origins, is actually a tale of horrific exploitation. The final scene couldn't be any more devastating, grim or vile and left a distinct taste of sexual horror at the back of my throat. In its straight lance for the guts it is very similar to What Comes To Hand, which isn't that astounding if one knows that Caspian is also part of that author team. This reminds me a lot of several bizarro books I read in the past year, and it certainly isn't any less gruesome.
Minor, but important niggle: I really think this one needs better tags and warnings! The slightly humoristic warning blurb doesn't really prepare the unwary for what is to follow.
As with Lisa Henry's The Last Rebellion I can't give this any rating. It was written to a prompt, hits the prompt full-on, is much liked by the promptgiver, so it would be unfair to rate according to my gut reaction. Not just that, I also have a problem with content vs. intent and the quality of the storytelling in relation to how I would rate due the subject.
"Mine" is an extremely well and underhandedly told story of child abuse, child grooming, and in the end of the consummation of the grooming achievements. What comes along as an alleged BDSM-romance, given its origins, is actually a tale of horrific exploitation. The final scene couldn't be any more devastating, grim or vile and left a distinct taste of sexual horror at the back of my throat. In its straight lance for the guts it is very similar to What Comes To Hand, which isn't that astounding if one knows that Caspian is also part of that author team. This reminds me a lot of several bizarro books I read in the past year, and it certainly isn't any less gruesome.
Minor, but important niggle: I really think this one needs better tags and warnings! The slightly humoristic warning blurb doesn't really prepare the unwary for what is to follow.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
February 21, 2016
Oh my goodness, this is a fabulous read. It is sweet, erotica and so good. The taboo of falling for your best friend's father is delicious. The fact that Jesse's father, Logan is a dominant makes it even more appealing. Noah is subby little twink who needs to have his ass wrecked by the older sexy man. I loved it. I want more! What happens after? Maybe a little follow up with Noah being the exhibitionist? mmmmm
September 16, 2015
Thank you, M., for letting me beta read this and put her through my paces.
This is a delicious, little, hot number.
This is a delicious, little, hot number.
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