I got this last fall at a discount, and didn't read it until now because the dialogue is a bit awkward.
Basically, the characters are cliched, the writing occasionally fumbles, and almost all the fantasy tropes are hit. But it was really fun. I'm not sure how to author managed it, but it was a pretty good read overall. I'm betting his later books will be really good, once he builds up on characterization and dialogue.
As another reviewer noted, the battle scenes were nice. I don't have much appreciation for swords and shields, but it was built up in a way that I could track.
Edit: Just realized the author might actually see this. In that case, congratulations on getting a book out, man! Hope to see more from you.